Before Breaking dawn, a title, a Beatles and Qui-Tahl challenge vignette authors responses and thanks

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    Title: Breaking dawn, a title, a Beatles and Qui-Tahl challenge vignette
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: before JA
    Characters: Qui-Gon Jinn, Tahl, my OC Kaagi Adin
    Genre: vignette HC mush
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    Summary: Kaagi Adin muses about Qui-Gon Jinn and Tahl after Qui-Gon has been injured. Tahl visits him every day (and nights)
    Disclaimer: G.L. is Star Wars.

    Notes: for the Beatles challenge I got 7 "Eight Days a Week"
    And seeing the title ?Breaking dawn and challenge 1 on the Qui-Gon/Tahl Discussion Thread I could write this vignette.

    Breaking dawn

    Yes, there she is, the little girl with her gold and green striped eyes. Ductcrawling again just like her friend. She must have learned that from him and his friends Mace Windu, Benno Perion and Magin Bhik.
    The morning rays of the rising sun shine on her dark hair when she opens the grate.

    Uh I am Kaagi Adin reporting from the healers? ward in the Jeditemple. I am one of the healers, usually a therapist for sprains and the like but also a surgeon when needed.
    And this is my early morning shift caring for the patients in the surgery wing of the healers? ward.

    Him is Qui-Gon Jinn, 9 years old and one of the initiates of the clan Master Yoda and Crèche master Rian Solma supervises. And he is hands full with all those pranks he is planning with Benno, Magin and Mace.
    Qui-Gon had broken his leg four weeks ago after one of those adventures and now it is almost healed. Tomorrow I will remove the splint and he will get therapy.

    Ductcrawling, all initiates ? and some masters ? do it. Only this time one of the grates broke from its hinges and Jinn being the first fell down and tried to save his fellow crawlers.
    Tahl, she is the little girl, fell down on top of him and that resulted in a break of the left tibia for Qui-Gon. I splinted the leg and now Qui-Gon is staying in room number 9, his favorite after some earlier mishap with Mace and Benno.

    The healers? ward has ducts too and that?s the way Tahl enters room number 9, unseen and unheard by her crèche master Majana Walin. And do I report her? No, and I don?t bring her back to the crèche either.
    For over a year now she has been the great friend of Qui-Gon.

    Oooh, I need your love, babe
    Guess you know it's true
    Hope you need my love, babe
    Just like I need you

    Hold me, love me
    Hold me, love me
    I ain't got nothing but love, babe
    Eight days a week


    Yes, there she is, hopping down. She doesn?t know that I am watching her just outside room number 9.
    Each day since Qui-Gon has been admitted here she has been visiting him and that?s five days a week.
    Yeah Coruscant has only 5 days a week. Had there been more she would have visited him eight days a week.

    And she helps him heal that much faster by keeping him in his bed just talking and helping him with his homework.

    How different from Benno, Mace and Magin.
    They were here a week ago, also using the duct, and had somehow sneaked in my office too because they began peppering Qui-Gon with squeeze-balls, my squeeze-balls I use for therapy.
    The four were making a lot of noise and that got me running towards room 9 when one of the old masters was complaining about that.

    I entered the room and after hearing some ?healer is coming, get moving, yup, ouch that?s my head? I saw Mace as the last one disappear in the duct.
    Qui-Gon was a funny sight to behold his bed without covers and some squeeze-balls and the floor covered with covers and the rest of the balls.

    I reprimanded him because the sling for his leg had become detached and Qui-Gon asked with a tiny voice if some damage was done but that it had been fun.
    I told him not to worry, that the bone was knitting together already and that he would get swimming therapy in a week.

    And now he is telling that to Tahl silently inviting her to come too.

    Will he pay attention to my therapy or have just all eyes on Tahl?

    Love you everyday, girl
    Always on my mind
    One thing I can say, girl
    Love you all the time

    Hold me, love me
    Hold me, love me
    I ain't got nothin
  2. Alexis_Wingstar Force Ghost

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    Sep 16, 2006
    star 4
  3. qui-gon_and_tahl Jedi Knight

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    Jun 11, 2007
    Beautfiul response to the challenge! =D=
  4. RX_Sith C&G Game Host

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    Mar 13, 2006
    star 5
    Excellent response and vignette earlybird-obi-wan. =D=
  5. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Jun 14, 2005
    star 6
    Thanks for another sweet story from the jedi temple and I hope for Qui Gon that he wil be less in the healer's ward than Obi Wan!

    @};-
  6. Gkilkenny Force Ghost

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    Mar 27, 2004
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    Very nice.:cool:
    I love that song too. I think a nine year
    old Qui-Gon is a mischief maker.:p
  7. KELIA Manager Emeritus

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    Jul 26, 2005
    star 6
    Awww...that was so adroably sweet!

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    I love Tahl's devotion to an injured Qui-Gon and I'm sure he loved her visits.

    Great response to the challenge

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
  8. AllYouNeedIsLove Jedi Padawan

    Member Since:
    Feb 13, 2008
    [Myriad here]

    Great challenge response, this song is perfect for the two of them! [face_love]

    Nice job ;) =D=
  9. Tahl_Jinn Jedi Knight

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    Jul 27, 2008
    good one! i liked it...
    i think they're such a sweet couple, also as friends.
    sweeeet story!=D=


    TJ
  10. Lilith Demodae Force Ghost

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    Oct 1, 1999
    star 4
    A sweet story of childhood friends. An amazing blending of three challenges. =D=

  11. Jade_Pilot Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Dec 10, 2005
    star 5
    Wow! Great response to the challenge!

    Well done! =D=
  12. JediLuminaraUnduli Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Jul 12, 2008
    star 2
    [face_love] That was so sweet! Aww.. Lil Qui/Tahl. Nice, it was written from another?s view instead of the pairing in the spotlight. Great job!

    -Miks :)
  13. DarthIshtar Chosen One

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    Mar 26, 2001
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    LOL, that was cute, even if I think the Jedi would forbid bikinis. :) I like the intruder in Room 9.
  14. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    Aug 21, 2006
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    Alexis_Wingstar aw, that was sweet.

    qui-gon_and_tahl Beautfiul response to the challenge!

    RX_Sith Excellent response and vignette earlybird-obi-wan.

    AzureAngel2 Thanks for another sweet story from the jedi temple and I hope for Qui Gon that he wil be less in the healer's ward than Obi Wan!

    Gkilkenny Very nice.
    I love that song too. I think a nine year
    old Qui-Gon is a mischief maker.

    KELIA Awww...that was so adroably sweet!
    I love Tahl's devotion to an injured Qui-Gon and I'm sure he loved her visits.
    Great response to the challenge

    AllYouNeedIsLove [Myriad here]
    Great challenge response, this song is perfect for the two of them!
    Nice job

    Tahl_Jinn good one! i liked it...
    i think they're such a sweet couple, also as friends.
    sweeeet story!

    Lilith Demodae A sweet story of childhood friends. An amazing blending of three challenges.

    Jade_Pilot Wow! Great response to the challenge!
    Well done!

    JediLuminaraUnduli That was so sweet! Aww.. Lil Qui/Tahl. Nice, it was written from another?s view instead of the pairing in the spotlight. Great job!

    -Miks

    DarthIshtar LOL, that was cute, even if I think the Jedi would forbid bikinis. I like the intruder in Room 9.


    All thanks for reading and replies to it. It was fun to write.[:D][:D]
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