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Beyond - Legends Breaking the Ice (L/M vignette; another in the Temperature series!)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by obaona, Oct 10, 2003.

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  1. Benjor45

    Benjor45 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Congrats, Oba! :D

    And girls boss around boys because we're always right. Oh wait . . . *looks at Mara again* Whoops! LOL [face_laugh]

    Breaking the Ice, means, I guess, breaking Mara's icy barriers, as well as breaking ice literally. Yeah, and that too :p

    Ok, my brain's smoking, but I couldn't come up with a suitable title.

    How about these from my ultra-corny mind? -

    'Lost in the heat' :eek:

    'Heating the chill' [face_plain]

    'The scalding water incident' :(

    'Rubbing cold feet under the blanket' ?[face_plain]

    'She pushed me onto the fire-place' :_|

    'The hot coal incident' [face_devil]

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Ok, how about:

    'Embers in a fire-heart'

    Edit: OmG, I'm the king of corny.

    [face_laugh]

    Edit: King-Corn
     
  2. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    Benjor45: *giggles* [face_laugh] :p [face_laugh] :p I'll let you know if I use any of those. ;) And I might . . . [face_mischief] You never know! :D
     
  3. LianaMara

    LianaMara Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Perfection, oba dear! :D This was wonderful. I, too, didn't think you were going to literally break the ice, but it certainly made for a wonderful vig. Your conversations between Mara and Luke are the best, and I love how you get inside Mara's head and show all the conflicting feelings she has about Luke.

    How did I always manage to make a fool of myself around Skywalker? Crashing into a jungle with him, letting him influence my decisions ? something foolish at least to me ? and other events. Sithspawn. As in, Luke, the son of Vader, the ?spawn? of a Sith.

    For some reason, this line totally cracked me up! I still can't figure why. :p

    And now, some ideas...
    "Mara the Burnanator" (OK, I've watched too much homestarrunner [face_mischief] )
    "Kindling the Flame"
    "Not Too Cold, Not Too Hot" (just right... :p )

    I'll shut up now. ;)
     
  4. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    LianaMara: Titles! :D :p And thank you! :D And why did no one think I would literally break the ice? Ah well . . . everyone must have had that common saying in mind when they voted for the title. :p Yep, Mara is conflicted. She's like that a lot around him, actually, and it makes her do things she wouldn't normally. :p

    I've always wondered what Luke thought about that curse - Sithspawn. :p So that's why I included that. It really had nothing to do with the story, and could have been left out. :p

    *giggles at titles again* :p
     
  5. Gabri_Jade

    Gabri_Jade Fanfic Archive Editor Emeritus star 5 VIP

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    Oooooh, Liana's titles don't say anything about cooling things off! Kindling the Flame sounds promising, oba. [face_hopeful] :D
     
  6. NarundiJedi

    NarundiJedi Jedi Master star 6

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    How could I have missed this!?! :eek:

    Easy, when DRL gets in the way, but I finally read it was hilarious!!!! [face_laugh]

    Mara is so great in this! I love it when she's still at odds with Luke! :D Poor Lukie! :( [face_love] He was just trying to be nice and thoughtful, and gets a slap in the end for it! [face_laugh]

    I [face_love] Luke/Mara! I'll freely admit it! ;)

    Jae Angel

    ED: Mara the Burninator!!!! LMAO!!!! [face_laugh] We really need more Trogdor in our lives. ;)
     
  7. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    Gabri: Silly girl. :p I may still write Bri's. :p

    NarundiJedi: *giggles* When is Mara not at odds with Luke? :p Okay, so it happens less often when they're married, but it still happens! And yes, Luke was being nice and thoughtful . . . and somewhat smug about it. ;)

    *still finds Mara the Burninator confusing :confused: * :p
     
  8. Bri_Windstar

    Bri_Windstar Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Yes, write a sequel you will!!!

    And not just because mine is seemingly the only one to inspire a bunny so far 8-}

    ::Windstar Out::
     
  9. LianaMara

    LianaMara Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    My dear Master Mummy, go here

    Click on S_B emails, then scroll down until you find the one called "Dragon." Someone asks Strong Bad to draw a dragon, so he creates...Trogdor the Burninator! Hahaha! [face_laugh] :p

    Sorry. Pardon the interruption. ;)

    And I sort of like Bri's title, too... *wink wink nudge nudge* :D
     
  10. Rivad_Bacar

    Rivad_Bacar Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Final flight check please.

    Coordinates to Obaona... Check.

    Breifing on Luke/Mara mushiness... Check.

    Cargo hold full of highly trained, romance causing, commando attack plot bunnies... Check.

    Let's fly! :cool:

    Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! :D
     
  11. NarundiJedi

    NarundiJedi Jedi Master star 6

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    This is Trogdor the burninator:

    [image=http://www.rpi.edu/~orsakj/trogdor.jpg]

    Now, imagine doing a bad photoshop of Mara's head onto that picture. There you go. :p Explained. ;)

    Jae Angel
     
  12. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    Bri: I got another bunny. [face_mischief]

    Liana: I went and watched. :p Very confusing . . . I think it might have helped if I had the sound on, but my dad was downstairs and I'm sure any noises it would have made would make him very curious. :p *giggles* You're hinting is very hinty. :p

    Rivad_Bacar: [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] *falls out of chair* Aye aye, sir! *salutes* I have two plot bunnies now. 8-}

    NarundiJedi: Yes, explained . . . though whatever possessed Liana to make the connection in the first place is not. 8-} *struggles to picture Mara's head on there* Are you sure you're a L/M fan? [face_mischief]

    And thank you! :D *is no longer so confused* 8-}



    I have two bunnies now - one for 'Cooling Things Off', and one for 'Kindling the Flame'. Oh, which will I choose? 8-} I'll try to do it tonight.
     
  13. Bri_Windstar

    Bri_Windstar Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    DO BOTH!!!

    aHEM [face_mischief]

    Er, whichever floats your boat 8-}

    :::is desperate for something to read:::

    ::Windstar Out::
     
  14. Gabri_Jade

    Gabri_Jade Fanfic Archive Editor Emeritus star 5 VIP

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    Agree with Bri, I do. :D

    *hands Bri Dr. Pepper* :cool:

    *patiently (almost :p ) awaits more oba-stories* :)
     
  15. Rivad_Bacar

    Rivad_Bacar Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Hmmm... Rivad thinks carefully about love (and as a result, his wonderful wife! [face_love] [face_love] [face_love])... well, one really does need to cool things off, before they heat up again, soooooo....

    Do both! :D
     
  16. NarundiJedi

    NarundiJedi Jedi Master star 6

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    I'm a silly Luke/Mara fan, oba! :p I can appreciate the humor in burnination . . . [face_devil]

    No, seriously, I'd never write a fic called Mara the Burninator unless I was dared! ;)

    Jae Angel
     
  17. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    Bri: Well, I did two . . . :p

    Gabri: *giggles* They're coming, dearest, they're coming. ;)

    Rivad_Bacar: See my note at bottom. :p And that's very true. ;)

    NarundiJedi: Um . . . [face_blush] And yes, I can tell you're silly. :p




    BIGGIE NEWSIES! :p

    I wrote two vignettes just now - Kindling the Flame and . . .

    Mara the Burninator. 8-}

    Yes, I got a plot bunny for it. No, I don't know how. And yes, it is silly. 8-}


    [edit] And if you want to read something I wrote (blantant advertisement here) since it will be a while before I edit the stories and/or bug Jedi-2B to beta, there's something else I posted recently: Smoke :p
     
  18. NarundiJedi

    NarundiJedi Jedi Master star 6

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    OMG!!! I can't believe she did it! Go oba! :D

    Jae Angel
     
  19. joy_noel

    joy_noel Jedi Youngling star 1

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    They went ice skating. Sort of. ;) I love the running gag about slapping. She finally did it this time.
     
  20. Benjor45

    Benjor45 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    I wrote two vignettes just now - Kindling the Flame and . . .

    Mara the Burninator.


    :D :D :D :D :D

    Oba! Cool! Yay!

    [face_laugh]
     
  21. LianaMara

    LianaMara Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    :eek:

    Both my ideas are viggies! Yay! :D

    And you actually wrote Mara the Burninator? I was kidding! :p ;)

    I cannot wait to see them, Mummy dear. [face_mischief]

    Well, I'd just watched SB when I read "Breaking the Ice," and I had Trogdor stuck in my head. There's no logical explanation behind it. :p
     
  22. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    NarundiJedi: GO ME!! :D

    joy_noel: Aye, I figured it was time. And yep, ice-skating! :D Of a sort . . . :p

    Benjor45: Aye! Oba!! (That means yay, right? ;) ) :D :D :D

    LianaMara: I knew you were kidding, but I got a plot bunny for it, and figured . . . why not? :p And thank you. :) [/wise_Mummy]
     
  23. Agent_Jaid

    Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    I'm reading it Oba... I'm reading it! :D


    *snickers*


    Mara was adorable!!! [face_love]

    :D


    :p



     
  24. Bellyup

    Bellyup Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I picked up my skirts ? the dreadfully impractical things ? and left the dance floor with as much dignity as I could muster.

    *chuckles* I just love Mara's personality, and how well everyone portrays her. You especially, Oba!! Funny how people have more difficulty with Luke...

    Anyway-this was really sweet! And I am going to read all the other ones too. The title fit perfectly with the story, something that is often hard to do. This was a sweet little piece that I quite enjoyed!

    Naturally I slapped him.

    Especially the ending... [face_mischief]
     
  25. EmilieDarklighter

    EmilieDarklighter Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    *offers chocolate and roses!*

    Belated Valentine's Day UP!
     
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