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Saga Bring Him Home - RotJ Songfic

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by palpyisgod2, Dec 9, 2005.

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  1. palpyisgod2

    palpyisgod2 Jedi Master star 2

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    Title: Bring Him Home
    Author: palpyisgod2
    Timeframe: RotJ
    Characters: Luke, Anakin, with reference to Obi-Wan and Padme
    Genre: Songfic, Vignette
    Keywords: H_SH_M, Vayikra, Leviticus
    Summary: Anakin sends up a prayer to the Force as he dies.
    Notes: Just something I threw together in a half hour, while lisetening to Les Miz. I tried to write it in "Bible Format". so, thanks to Alain Boublil and GL. Big Fat Disclaimer go here. R&R please!








    For on this day he shall provide atonement for you to cleanse you; from all your sins before H_SH_M will you be cleansed. (Vayikra/Leviticus 16:30)

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    [i]God on high
    Hear my prayer
    In my need
    You have always been there[/i]

    [i]Skywalker[/i] ? once a proud name to the galaxy?s finest.

    And now, to the remains of the failing body encased within the suit, that had been a scourge to the galaxy for the last twenty years, the name reverberated in him.

    [i]Skywalker[/i]

    What had ceased to be Vader and was now Anakin Skywalker ? did send up a plea to the Force ? the Living Force ? that in those final moments on the Death Star II, whilst Palpatine had poured the dark power from within his withering flesh, that Luke would continue the proud name of his mother, and [i]deliver us from evil[/i].

    [i]He is young
    He's afraid
    Let him rest
    Heaven blessed.
    Bring him home
    Bring him home
    Bring him home.[/i]

    Paralysed, being dragged to the side of the shuttle, Anakin cried silently, for the first time in twenty years, and tears flowed down his face, and he let the grief he felt finally erupt in a bursting geyser of forgiveness.

    Forgiveness.

    For Padmé,

    [i]He's like the son I might have known
    If God had granted me a son.[/i]

    For Obi-Wan,
    [i]
    The summers die
    One by one[/i]

    And for himself

    [i]How soon they fly
    On and on
    And I am old
    And will be gone.

    Bring him peace
    Bring him joy
    He is young
    He is only a boy[/i]

    He prayed that Luke would continue to grow strong, and straight, and tall, and would love, and beget many children, and would carry the Skywalker name for many generations, a proud name, now, and forever.

    [i]You can take
    You can give
    Let him be
    Let him live
    If I die, let me die
    Let him live
    Bring him home
    Bring him home
    Bring him home.[/i]

    [i]?father?help me?please?[/i] the memory of only a few minutes ago returned, hard, and strong, and fast, and the agony of it burned Anakin inside, and he suffered, but only for a moment, for his child was there with him, alive, and that was all that mattered.
    [i]
    ~fin~[/i]
     
  2. Liesl

    Liesl Jedi Master star 4

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    May 31, 2005
    ?father?help me?please? the memory of only a few minutes ago returned, hard, and strong, and fast, and the agony of it burned Anakin inside, and he suffered, but only for a moment, for his child was there with him, alive, and that was all that mattered.

    Very powerful. Very powerful. I really like it.
     
  3. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Feb 5, 2004
    VERY powerful and well written piece! =D=
     
  4. michaellover

    michaellover Jedi Youngling star 3

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    May 30, 2005
    really nice writting, finally he remembers his wife and his master =D=
     
  5. MasterEnder

    MasterEnder Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Nov 26, 2005
    Nice songfic!!I had always imagined this song to be a song that Obi would sing after ROTS, praying for Anakin's redemption, but this worked too. Anakin was thinking about his sons future, a fatherly thing that he has never done before.
     
  6. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Jul 26, 2005
    That was very poignant and well done.

    Bravo!

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
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