Beyond - Legends Broken Circle - AU. Han, L/M - COMPLETED 12/20/04 - replies to comments 12/31/04

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  1. GreatOne Jedi Master

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    In keeping with this current spat of Leiacide.... muahahaha. ;)
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  2. Melissa_Fel13 Jedi Youngling

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    Wow! =D= That was really good! Hmmmm, they didn't find Leia's body? Hmmmm. It looks really interesting! Can't wait until next post!


    Edit: First reply of a brand new story!! [face_dancing] w00t w00t!! Lol. Yeah, I'd watch out for me, I'm a bit crazy. :D
  3. Laura_Anu Jedi Padawan

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    AHHHHHHH! I finally catch a GreatOne fic before it's on the 10th update or so! I'm so excited! I love it...and I know that Leia's not dead! I know it! At least...I hope she's not dead! But a great start anyway!
  4. kayladie97 Jedi Master

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    In keeping with my new, no-lurking policy... :D I'm getting in on the beginning of this story!

    I can't believe this...YOU killed Leia off? :eek: AND Chewbacca? :eek: Leaving your Hanny-bear without the love of his life AND his best friend? :eek:

    Who are you and what have you done with MarySue? ;)

    I see a glimmer of hope here that they never found a body, though... :D

    And I'm not at all bothered by slow updates. (We are talking about ME, after all :rolleyes: ) Heck, I'll bet you still manage to finish this one before I finish Sleight of Hand! [face_laugh] [face_plain] Why am I laughing...that's so sad! :p

    Anyway, can't wait to see where you go with this!
  5. RebelMom Jedi Knight

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    I see the bunnies have got you again. At least I know it wasn't my fault. ;)

    I have hope that Leia isn't really dead. Though you certainly will have a lot of angst with this. Keep up the good work.
  6. HanSolo29 Manager Emeritus + Official Star Wars Artist

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    Hmm...interesting. They found everyone's body except Leia's. At least that leaves us with some hope. Now go make things better! :D
  7. Jedi_BMK Jedi Padawan

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    I like it. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Whenever you get around to updating that is.
  8. Starrunner Jedi Youngling

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    Her body was never found, and Luke didn't feel her death, I'd say we still have hope.
    Would KnightedRogue be fimiliar with this plot bunny?
  9. Lady_Jade Jedi Master

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    Oh I like this! :)

    I agree w/ everyone else.....the fact that no body was found gives us hope for Leia.......I hope.
  10. GreatOne Jedi Master

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    Melissa_Fel13 - Crazy, huh? LOL! That's ok! Crazy is good around here! Welcome to my story! :)

    Laura_Anu - I know that Leia's not dead! I know it! At least...I hope she's not dead!- Even the author isn't sure.... now isn't THAT a scary thought? :D

    kayladie97 - Welcome! :) Who are you and what have you done with MarySue? - looks around.... hehe. I stuck her under a rock, so I could write this story! [face_devil] - Heck, I'll bet you still manage to finish this one before I finish Sleight of Hand!- I don't doubt that a bit! [face_laugh]

    RebelMom - Nope... this time you're not to blame! :D And I do plan on LOTS of angst, as well. :_| *hands out tissues*

    HanSolo29 - Now go make things better! Already?? :eek: - I have lots of evil planned first! [face_devil]

    Jedi_BMK - Actually, I update fairly quickly! Even if I post my first chapter without another word typed up! ;)

    Starrunner - Would KnightedRogue be fimiliar with this plot bunny? - YES! This is ALL her fault! *point all WMD's in KR's direction!*

    Lady_Jade - the fact that no body was found gives us hope for Leia.......I hope. - Plus, the author wanted to leave her options open... LOL! :D

    And now.... Speedy here already has chapter two typed up! :eek:
  11. GreatOne Jedi Master

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    Chapter 2
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  12. Laura_Anu Jedi Padawan

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    Oh, so sad! Poor Han!!! I vote that Luke comes and knocks some sense into Han!


    EDIT: AHHHHHHHHH! 1st post!
  13. Jedi_BMK Jedi Padawan

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    I like it. I wonder how long it'll take for Han to finally break down and accept Luke's help.
  14. Lady_Jade Jedi Master

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    Poor Han!!! :( This must be just awful for him!! *sniff*

    But I agree w/ Laura_Anu.....Luke does need to help Han out....and Han needs to let Luke help him. After all, they are still family.
  15. Sologirl Jedi Youngling

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    Oh goody! Another Great One Story! You know I love your work!!

    Poor Han! It has to be so hard to raise 3 kids on your own. I am very interested to see where it goes, but it would be nice to see Leia still alive and making her way back to her family. :) Please, pretty please!!
  16. Agent_Jaid Jedi Master

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    In keeping with this current spat of Leiacide.... muahahaha.

    HURRAH!!! :D Leia's dead!! *dances*

    *reads hungrily*


    She remembered seeing the holo-recordings of the dedication of the Kashyyyk Embassy, and the explosion that killed so many members of the New Republic Senate - as well as President Organa-Solo and Chewbacca, the heroic Wookiee that had been Luke's close friend.

    Aww... :( On the one hand, Chewie's dead!! :eek: NOO!!! On the OTHER hand.... [face_devil] HAH! LEIA'S DEAD!!! W00T!!! :D


    After Solo's lengthy recovery, and the many public memorials to the victims, Solo had taken his children and fled Coruscant, retreating with his guilt and his grief to an agricultural system in the Corporate Sector. There, he had purchased a small house with the compensation the New Republic offered him, and he had tried to create a new life for his children.

    On an agricultural system? [face_sick] Those POOR kids... :(


    Leia's body had never been found, not even a trace of material, blood or DNA. Everyone else on that platform had been accounted for, even Chewie's mangled and twisted body, and he had been standing next to the President during the explosion. Eyewitnesses had insisted that the Wookiee had seen the detonator before it went off, and had thrown the President off the platform. But the holo-recordings could not confirm this - they had only shown Chewbacca moving to intercept the bomb, and then chaos. The experts finally decided that Leia must have been standing directly on the bomb, and thus her body had been obliterated. If Luke had not felt her death, perhaps that was a mercy, for it could only mean she had died instantly, and not have felt any fear or pain.

    O.O...... PLEASE BE DEAD LEIA!!! :_| It would be so nice to have thee dead for once!! :( *wails*




    "Momma...." Little Leia tugged at Mara's hand. "I'm done cleaning."

    [face_plain].... Not.... commenting.... (dang, and I thought the name "BEN" was cruel... :()



    Shocked, Han wandered over to the large window, and looked out at the children playing in the grass. It was far from the first time since Leia's death that he felt overwhelmed by being a single father. He thought about Luke, who he hadn't seen in over six months. My fault... again. Han knew he'd deliberately pushed his friend away after Leia and Chewie's deaths.


    ...*sniffles* :( *HUGS* Poor Han.... :_|



    No... Luke was a different problem. He was a reminder of how much Han lacked as the father to three Force-strong children. If Luke took them away, he'd lose his children forever. They would see what a useless man their father was, and how much better at everything Luke was. Luke would take his place as their father, and Han would be left with no one. Luke was a Jedi Master - someone Han could not compete with, even on his best days.

    ....HAN YOU ARE GETTING THE FACTS MIXED UP!!! You are far far better then Luke. Trust me. :) Luke is a Jedi and you're not - therefor, you are automatically far far better then Luke. *hugs*

    :(


    *sigh*

    :(






  17. Melissa_Fel13 Jedi Youngling

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    Great post! I can so see Jaina acting up and stuff because of Leia's death. And Anakin...that's kinda funny. Lol. Poor Han though. He thinks he can't compete with Luke. The poor guy. Can't wait until next post!
  18. kayladie97 Jedi Master

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    :_| Aw, poor Han! I like the way you have the three children reacting in such different ways and yet I think it's pretty in character with what we know of their personalities from the NJO. Nicely done!

    And Luke doesn't want to take them away from you, Han! He just wants to help you! *sigh*

    And I didn't catch from the first post that Luke and Mara named their daughter Leia! I think that's so sweet and very fitting, although I doubt they would have done so if Leia were still alive. Hmmm, here's hoping that maybe they might have to give 'little Leia' a nickname soon! :D *hinthint*

    And I've got a three week shutdown at work coming up at Christmas...I'm gonna finish that damn story during that time even if it kills me...and I have a feeling that it might. :rolleyes: :p
  19. RebelMom Jedi Knight

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    I wish my company would shut down for 3 weeks. *sigh* oh well.

    Packing the angst in right off the bat with this one. Poor Han. HIs children are acting out and he doesn't know what to do. He really should talk with Luke. I'm sure they could work something out.
  20. kayladie97 Jedi Master

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    RebelMom: I wish my company would shut down for 3 weeks. *sigh* oh well.

    Well, it wouldn't be so bad if I was getting paid during that time. [face_frustrated] Unemployment checks just ain't gonna cut it...but, it should be good for me writing-wise, anyway! :D *is trying to find silver lining* :p
  21. HanSolo29 Manager Emeritus + Official Star Wars Artist

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    Awww...poor Han. He definitely has it tough with all three kids by himself. If only Luke has a way that he can help out without actually taking the kids away from him.
  22. Starrunner Jedi Youngling

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    Poor Han! :( I hope he accepts Luke's help relatively soon.

    And, if it's all KR's fault then I doubt we'll need very many WMD's. Unless your messing with my mind, and she really is dead. [face_worried]
  23. GreatOne Jedi Master

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    Laura_Anu- Poor Han! He's had it rough, and you want Luke to beat him up? LOL! :eek: :D

    Jedi_BMK - He might accept help.... eventually! :)

    Lady_Jade - Yes, they are a family. And family's do help each other, or they should! ;)

    Sologirl - Leia alive??? Hmmm.. I am still thinking about that one! :)

    Agent_Jaid - [face_laugh] - You are funny! You WANT Leia to be dead?? :eek: Why? *grins* Well, maybe she is, and maybe she ain't... I ain't saying, yet!

    Melissa_Fel13 - No, he doesn't think he can compete with Jedi uncle Luke! Poor Han! :(

    kayladie97 - I did decide to keep the children pretty much in character, altough I really haven't read too many YJK stories. However, I figure any changes could be explained by saying "It's because their mommy died!" A nickname for little Leia, hmm? ;) And yes, YOU CAN finish your story before Christmas! YES YOU CAN! (just like that little train that could...)


    RebelMom- Packing the angst in right off the bat with this one- I'm trying! :D - And "talking" to Luke is coming up, very soon! :eek:

    HanSolo29 - If only Luke has a way that he can help out without actually taking the kids away from him- Ahh. You touched on my pet peeve with the Jedi! Taking kids away from their parents! :(

    Starrunner - Unless your messing with my mind, and she really is dead- hehehehhe. [face_devil]
  24. GreatOne Jedi Master

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    Chapter 3
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  25. Jedi_BMK Jedi Padawan

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    Excellent post.

    No one noticed the silent, ghostly apprarition standing in the trees at the edge of the playground, watching the family as they headed to the vehicle.

    Now who could that be? [face_thinking]

    And now I'm wondering if Han will blow up when Luke arrives or if he'll be reasonable considering his kids' recent behavior.
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