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Beyond - Legends Broken Circle - AU. Han, L/M - COMPLETED 12/20/04 - replies to comments 12/31/04

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by GreatOne, Nov 26, 2004.

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  1. HL-Fan

    HL-Fan Jedi Youngling

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    Finally catching up. This was a very sad chapter. I hope the next one is happier.
     
  2. HanSolo29

    HanSolo29 Manager Emeritus + Official Star Wars Artist star 7 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Poor Leia. She's been through a lot and now she lost the baby on top of that. Well, at least Han pulled through. You had me worried there for a second. ;)
     
  3. GreatOne

    GreatOne Jedi Master star 4

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    Solo_Fan - Thank goodness Anakin has been around to help out. This has been a pretty good start at his redemption. - Kind of like "It's a Wonderful Life" where the angel has to earn his wings! :D - Anyway, Anakin never did anything to make up to Leia in the EU, so here he did. :)

    Jeditheskyisblue - poor Leia she lost the baby- *sniffs* - But she's gained so much back in the past two days. *face hopeful* :)

    HL-Fan - This was a very sad chapter- :_| - Very angsty, I know!

    HanSolo29 - at least Han pulled through. You had me worried there for a second.- Then I've done my job! :cool: - I'd have to be in a very depressed mood to kill Han! :eek:
     
  4. GreatOne

    GreatOne Jedi Master star 4

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    Chapter 25
     
  5. Jedi_BMK

    Jedi_BMK Jedi Padawan star 4

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    It's over. :_|

    A great read. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.

    But how could you leave us hanging like that? I want to know who won the race.

    "Did I say interesting?" Luke said dryly. "I think I meant insane."

    [face_laugh]
     
  6. Melissa_Fel13

    Melissa_Fel13 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Omg!! That was a great ending! This story had the most awesome concept and I really loved it. It's over! That's so sad! I think you did a really great job writing the story though. The characterizations were perfect in my opinion. hehehehe, Han and Mara. They're so great! And I love reunions! They're so sweet! Especially this one! Great story again!!
     
  7. Ariapaige

    Ariapaige Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Yay!! nice postie before my exam!!! i'm both gladdened and saddened by the ending of this great fic. complete reply later... cramming

    ;) paige
     
  8. Sologirl

    Sologirl Jedi Youngling star 2

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    YAY! *Sologirl's doin the happy dance*

    Although, I really wanted so read a PM with H/L being properly reunited..... :)

    Wonderful work as usual GO!

    You are my muse!!
     
  9. Falcon

    Falcon Chosen One star 10

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    The starter sounded, and the speeders raced away. Leia looked over at her brother. "What was it you said about Skywalkers picking interesting spouses?"

    "Did I say interesting?" Luke said dryly. "I think I meant insane


    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] one handed I wonder who won the bike race [face_mischief]


    too bad its over :( hope you have other fics in the work I look forward to reading them
     
  10. Jedi_Liz

    Jedi_Liz Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    that wasn't evil. :p We all know Han has more experience with a blaster! ;)

    But I think it'd end up a tie with the speederbike chase. ;) Or Han Solo by a nose ;)


    Lelee - that's a good nickname for L/M's daughter. :)


     
  11. kayladie97

    kayladie97 Jedi Master star 4

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    MarySue! Yup, another story finished...I am SO jealous! :p

    This one was just great! I loved every bit of it (even if I do think that Mara would have beat Han in the shooting contest, Force or no ;) )

    The nickname Lelee is so cute and I love the idea of Leia staying on Yavin, training to be a Jedi. That way the whole Skywalker/Solo clan can be together. Just wonderful! [face_love] [face_love]

    I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next...your imagination seems to be unlimited! :D
     
  12. Laura_Anu

    Laura_Anu Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Awww, it's over. But, I love the ending...especially Han and Mara's contest junk. A whole fic on their battles would be hilarious...ah, well, I guess it wouldn't have too much conflict, which, according to my English professor, is necessary in writing (which is why I didn't score very high on my papers :D). Haha, anyway, I loved this fic!! I can't wait to see what evilness you come up with next!
     
  13. Ariapaige

    Ariapaige Jedi Youngling star 2

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    okay i'm back. anthro has been conquered!!
    anyway- on with praise.
    "Ah, sweetheart. Danger is my middle name."
    "I could have sworn it was nerf-brain," she replied.
    I'm glad everything is back to normal for them!

    Oh, and when i said you might make a Han fan of me, i didn't mean at Mara's expense!! :eek: boo, Han won the gun challenge. i bet she'll beat him into the ground for the speeder bike challenge though, so there! (yes, i realize it's your story, i'm just being loyal)

    "What was it you said about Skywalkers picking interesting spouses?"
    "Did I say interesting?" Luke said dryly. "I think I meant insane."
    lol! :D lol! :D

    and i liked the confusion over Little Leia/Lelee's name. it's cute that Anakin picked out her new one. [face_love]

    but seriously, this is an awesome fic. thanks tons for writing it and for updating it daily the way you did. do you know you became a part of my morning routine for the last ~20 days? [face_mischief] heh. But, so have an excellent holiday break, and pm me when/if you write something new. ('specially if it's L/M ;))

    ;) paige
     
  14. Senator_Leia73

    Senator_Leia73 Jedi Master star 4

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    Aww man it is over. :( But it was such a good ending :D I really enjoyed it! :D

    PM me next time you write something :D
     
  15. maramijade

    maramijade Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL, yeah they definately are insane, but that makes them fun :D
    for some odd reason that reminds me of my sister's ex-boyfreind, who bet a army reservist to a sprint race outside their accounting office. . .

    he lost. . . badly. . .

     
  16. Jesina_Dreis

    Jesina_Dreis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wonderful conclusion, GreatOne. So nice to see a happy ending... my stories don't usually have happy endings...

    This was a great story.

    Jes
     
  17. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    That was absolutely perfect! I've enjoyed this little `fic very much...A wonderful piece of work!
     
  18. HanSolo29

    HanSolo29 Manager Emeritus + Official Star Wars Artist star 7 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Great ending! Han finally got to have that speeder race afterall. I bet he'll win too! :D

    I really enjoyed this story, GreatOne! Be sure to write more soon! :D
     
  19. RannOrgana

    RannOrgana Jedi Youngling

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    can we have a sequel?

    maybe mara and luke have another kid and go to Coruscant for a visit?

    Rann Organa
     
  20. Jeditheskyisblue

    Jeditheskyisblue Jedi Master star 4

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    A very good ending.
     
  21. CommanderK23

    CommanderK23 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    :eek: I missed a chapter! :eek:

    :D

    They were both great. Great interaction, loved Han and Anakin. ;)

    The kids were great at the end, it was so sweet... [sniff] I loved the reunion.

    [face_mischief] Han vs Mara...
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    "Han?" Leia called out over the noisy, rambunctious children. "Are you sure you want to do this? It could be dangerous!"

    Han paused before sliding the helmet over his head. "Ah, sweetheart. Danger is my middle name."

    "I could have sworn it was nerf-brain," she replied, to the giggles of the kids, and the louder laughter of the adults.
    [face_laugh] Leia's got her wit back!
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    "Good luck," Luke called out, watching as Threepio raised the starting horn into the air.

    "Thanks, kid!" Han said cheerfully.

    "He meant me," Mara groused back.

    "He didn't say your name."
    :D The kids are rubbing on off on those two... [face_laugh]
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    Leia looked over at her brother. "What was it you said about Skywalkers picking interesting spouses?"

    "Did I say interesting?" Luke said dryly. "I think I meant insane."
    [face_plain] Excellent observation, my dear Skywalker. :D ;)

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    Great work, GreatOne. =D= I'll watch out for future stories. ;)
     
  22. starwarsfan68

    starwarsfan68 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Wow! I go away for a few days and look what i missed!!! Great story as usual. Loved the ending, too bad about the baby though.
     
  23. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    You had some great banter in that post. It was fun. I really like the idea of Leia training as a Jedi and staying with her family.

    If only I could write as fast as you. [face_jealous]

    *wanders away to look for plot bunnies to send your way*
     
  24. Agent_Jaid

    Agent_Jaid Jedi Master star 5

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    Insane, eh' Skywalker? :p You have no idea... :p

    Lelee?! :D I love it!! *wails* It's over, but it's so happy, I can't get worked up over it!! Hurray!!! :D


     
  25. Solo_Fan

    Solo_Fan Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Another fabulous story, GreatOne! I'm pleased that you used my idea, but I'm also sad that Leia lost the baby. I will have to send you a "plot bunny" I have, and see what you think of it. I love the idea of Han thinking of himself as Han "Danger" Solo! Perfect! Your output is amazing. =D=
     
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