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Beyond - Legends Broken Circle - AU. Han, L/M - COMPLETED 12/20/04 - replies to comments 12/31/04

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by GreatOne, Nov 26, 2004.

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  1. GreatOne

    GreatOne Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    JediFalcon - Nope, Han sure isn't about to take the advice of a ghost. :p

    KnightedRogue - So Leia may not be dead after all! You scared me there for a tiny second, GreatOne.- You DO realize I haven't even decided on this yet, although I think I may have figured out where to go with this part of the story. :D

    Jedi_Liz - I can understand why he thought it was inconsiderate of Luke and Mara to name their first child after his sister Leia.- Of course, Luke only did it to honor his sister's memory, and at the time he didn't realize what emotional pain it would cause Han. :(

    Jedi_BMK - Are you trying to imply something here?- Nahhhhh! :p Now let's see how badly Han takes any of Luke's suggestions. - This next chapter will show just how badly... :eek:

    Alaneia - Welcome to the story! :) - Hope for Leia??? Hmmm. I'm still thinking! :D

    Melissa_Fel13 - Is this all from the first chapter?- No... my chapters are short! I'm already on Chapter five! :) - I liked how Anakin got a message from "Grampa".- Actually, I had Anakin Skywalker appearing directly to Han in the first draft, and then I thought it would work better if he appeared to his grandson instead. Either way, Han wouldn't have listened! [face_laugh]

    maramijade - Luke and Mara are really going to have to pull on all their experience a moderators and their Jedi patience - And even that's not going to be quite enough... :eek:

    HanSolo29- Anakin returned to make sure Han listens and he's not going to anyway. Typical Han- hehe. It would have been out of character for Han to agree with old Annie! :D

    Jedi-2B - I felt sorry for Han, hearing Leia's name attached to his niece. That has to be hard. - Yes, it is! That mean old Lukie! LOL! ;)

    Lady_Jade - The disscusion should be very interesting- I hope it doesn't disappoint. You can guess how Han is going to react, though. [face_worried]

    Jedi_of_Imladris - where could she be for that long without contacting Luke or somebody through the Force? Maybe Vader/Ani's ghost will have the answer! - Actually, that was one of the reasons I rewrote the "encounter" to have little Anakin be the messenger boy. It would be logical for Han (even if he was angry) to ask ole Annie why Leia wasn't "appearing" instead of Anakin Skywalker.

    RebelMom - Mara being maternal? I'd be worried too- LOL! She's probably a bit nervous about the upcoming conversation as well! And you know me with updating.... once I start typing a story, my fingers just keep going and going and going.... :D

    Next post up as soon as I can go over what I've already typed!
     
  2. GreatOne

    GreatOne Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Chapter 5
     
  3. Jedi_BMK

    Jedi_BMK Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yeah, he took that about as badly as I expected. Now what kind of accident happened this time. One that will make Han quit being so stubborn perhaps?

    Good post. Looking forward to more.
     
  4. Falcon

    Falcon Chosen One star 10

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    I wonder what they did now

    and Han better listen

    more soon
     
  5. maramijade

    maramijade Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    uh ohh what did Jaina do now?

     
  6. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Oh, jeez...cliffie! Great post.
     
  7. Tribun

    Tribun Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I hope the "accident" was not a Darth Vader-style Force choke.......

    Grandpa Anakin would be horrified.
     
  8. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    *watches* You evil, evil, woman! Hehe, I like it!
     
  9. Lady_Jade

    Lady_Jade Jedi Master star 4

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    Poor Han! :( Luke and Mara are just trying to help!

    But what happened at the school?? It's nothing serious....is it? *worried face*
     
  10. KnightedRogue

    KnightedRogue Jedi Master star 3

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    Uh-oh. Skywalker/Solo family drama. *sigh* I'm worried again. What have you done with the kids, GreatOne?

    And what do you mean you don't know how this is going to end?! Oh, man - are you gonna pull a "realistic" ending here?

    But, once again, I'm hooked to one of your stories. So I'll just continue to worry until you either finish this without the lovely princess or bring her back. And I'm sure I'll whine along the way ;) , but I'll still love it, I'm sure, regardless of the Leia-cide!

    Such schizo feelings you inspire, GreatOne! [face_laugh]

    *KR*
     
  11. Jedi-2B

    Jedi-2B Jedi Master star 4

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    Ooohhh, great work on the family spat. And the kids just arrived at school and already there's been an 'accident'? True Solos.
     
  12. Melissa_Fel13

    Melissa_Fel13 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Uh oh, what's happened now? Hmmmm, I hope no one's hurt. And Han a bit angry huh? Lol. Awesome post!!
     
  13. Jedi_Liz

    Jedi_Liz Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    another good post.......man, Han's temper is getting the better of him...... if he had the Force.....he'd be another Vader in the making.......and we thought Mara had a temper! :eek:

    Han is still mourning the loss of Leia and its taking a hold of his emotions.....if they knew if Leia was alive, I think he would probably think differently........maybe Luke and Mara could tutor the three kids somehow on Coruscant (Han lives on Coruscant right? Or is it another planet?)

     
  14. Darth_Suzi

    Darth_Suzi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Gah! You post very quickly--more so than my high school mind can keep up with! :D :p I'm not complaining, though--I like this posting schedule! :D

    11/29

    I knew it! [face_dancing] Blue Force Ghost wasn't Leia! It was Anakin!

    Grampa Skywalker? Han felt his heart drop. "What does this person look like?" [face_laugh] Well, all kids have invisible friends, Anakin's got an invisible grandpa! (Even though he is a bit old for that...) Who's not so invisible!

    "You know... shiny. Like Uncle Luke when he calls on the holocomm projector." That's got to be the best description of a blue!Jedi ever. Shiny. [face_laugh]

    "That Uncle Luke was coming," Anakin said, breaking into a grin. "And that you're supposed to listen to him and not be stubborn." And if that isn't just the pot calling the kettle black, I don't know what is. :p

    11/30

    "Dad! Jaina called me stupid!"

    "Your brother isn't stupid," Luke told his niece gently, jumping slightly as Han slammed the milk container down hard enough to slosh the liquid over the top.
    Stupid Luke. Stupid, stupid Luke. Of course, he just had to answer to the word "dad." :rolleyes:

    Luke shook his head. "No, Han. I don't think you're a lousy father. You're raising the children to the best of your abilities, under very difficult circumstances." More difficult than they'd have to be, Luke thought, but didn't say. Man, he's just getting himself into deeper and deeper trouble...

    Han struggled with his anger, and his embarrassment over Jaina's problems. "I handled it, okay? They're my kids, not yours." Poor Han! :_| :_| I seriously am sitting at my computer stifling back tears. Leia (the elder one) had better get back soon. [face_batting]

    Great posts! :D :(
     
  15. HanSolo29

    HanSolo29 RPF/SWC/Fan Art Manager & Bill Pullman Connoisseur star 7 Staff Member Manager

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    Ehh...that didn't go over very well. Then again, I expected that to happen. ;)

    And I hope the kids are alright...[face_worried]
     
  16. Laura_Anu

    Laura_Anu Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Dang, I always get behind in posts! Oh well, that means I can marathon read! That's an evil cliffie! But I'm sure it'll make Han trust Luke...right???
     
  17. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    that didn't go over well. Leia was the diplomatic twin - Luke always seemed to speak before thinking. And now on with the cliffie.
     
  18. Starrunner

    Starrunner Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Oh evil cliffy!
    Luke and Mara are trying to help, but with all Han has lost he can't bare even consider it.
    I really really really hope Leia's still alive.
     
  19. GreatOne

    GreatOne Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jedi_BMK - Now what kind of accident happened this time. One that will make Han quit being so stubborn perhaps? - You will find out, very soon! And yes, Han may be left without too many options. :eek:

    JediFalcon - I wonder what they did now - Those innocent little Jedi-wanna be's? hehe. [face_devil]

    maramijade- what did Jaina do now? - :D :D

    DarthIshtar - Cliffie! Don't you just love cliffies? ;)

    Tribun - A new reader! Thanks for reading. :D hope the "accident" was not a Darth Vader-style Force choke....... - Yes, that would make everybody pretty upset, wouldn't it? Even Han!

    flowerbee - hehe. I just don't know WHAT came over me when I started writing this. *looks sideways at KnightedRogue* :cool:

    Lady_Jade - But what happened at the school?? It's nothing serious....is it? - Define "serious" [face_mischief]

    KnightedRogue - are you gonna pull a "realistic" ending here? - Is that possible in the SW galaxy? [face_laugh] - I'm sure I'll whine along the way , but I'll still love it, I'm sure, regardless of the Leia-cide! - A tiny little hint about Leia is coming up in the next post! ;)

    Jedi-2B - And the kids just arrived at school and already there's been an 'accident'? - They get busy real fast! [face_laugh]

    Melissa_Fel13 - And Han a bit angry huh? Lol- Yep, just a bit! :D

    Jedi_Liz - Han as a Vader-type? I think I already did a story like that... ;) - maybe Luke and Mara could tutor the three kids somehow on Coruscant (Han lives on Coruscant right? Or is it another planet?)- No, he moved his family to a agricultural planet in the Corporate Sector. I know in the books the Corporate Sector was loosely aligned with the Empire, but I figured enough time has passed since the Empire's fall that the Corporate Sector would be a bit more independent now, and not hostile to former New Republic Generals living in their regions. Of course, they probably wouldn't care about former Imperial Generals living there, either! :eek: - In any case, Mara did suggest to Luke that they stay on Paricellan for a while and start training the children, then suggest later that the family (including Han) move to Yavin. But Han didn't let them get that far in explaining!

    Darth_Suzi - Wow! Long review! :) - Well, all kids have invisible friends, Anakin's got an invisible grandpa! (Even though he is a bit old for that...) Who's not so invisible! - I could always picture Anakin hanging around and watching is grandkids! He probably divides his time between watching Leia's kids and Luke's kid! :) - stupid Luke. Of course, he just had to answer to the word "dad." - Yup! Nothing like getting off on the wrong foot with Han right away! [face_laugh] - Leia (the elder one) had better get back soon.- Currently, that's not possible! [face_devil]

    HanSolo29 - that didn't go over very well- No, it sure didn't. Han should have at least let Luke and Mara explain things a bit more, but that's our Han! :)

    Laura_Anu - That's an evil cliffie! But I'm sure it'll make Han trust Luke...right??? - It certainly is going to put Han in a bit of a bind! [face_thinking]

    RebelMom - Leia was the diplomatic twin - Luke always seemed to speak before thinking- Yes, that's so true! And he still does! Of course, I don't think Mara was exactly helping the situation, either. :p

    Starrunner - Luke and Mara are trying to help- Yes, they are, only Han just refuses to see it. And as far as Leia.... muahahhaha. [face_devil]
     
  20. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    No, I don't love cliffies.
     
  21. GreatOne

    GreatOne Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Chapter 6
     
  22. Jedi_BMK

    Jedi_BMK Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Don't worry Han. Luke can find them a new school. :p

    Hmm, I wonder why they'd have an ysalamir there? Could they possibly be holding someone Force sensitive? You had to tease us like that, didn't you?
     
  23. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Poor Luke, I'd be snickering, too. The thing with the spiders reminds me of ET, when vicariously drunk Elliot lets all the frogs loose.
     
  24. Alaneia

    Alaneia Jedi Youngling star 2

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    That was so funny. The Children certainly are a handful.
     
  25. KnightedRogue

    KnightedRogue Jedi Master star 3

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    Ysalamiri! [face_dancing]

    Don't you just love those things? Zahn should be given a special award from all the fanfic authors that ever used them as a convenient plot twist.

    I'm so excited!

    Okay. Kids are expelled, Uncle Lukie's in town, and Han is very, very angry. *sigh* Not good times in the Solo family. Lol at the spider thing - classic Jacen!

    *KR*
     
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