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Beyond - Legends Burning Bright * UDC7 * Week 20 posted 14/Jun (complete)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Hazel, Jan 29, 2013.

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  1. Briannakin

    Briannakin Former Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Oops. Forgot to read Week 2 - exelent :D I love the Hazel-verse. The Ori and the Vong can blow each-other up.

    Week 3 was also wonderful. Marriage was my favourite. The thoughts are just so Mara.
     
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  2. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Chosen One star 5

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    Very nice. Yes, their love is timeless because there is no death, there is the Force. I don't think I commented on the other two. They are all great! =D=
     
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  3. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mara's thoughts are great! :)

    All of them were done well.
     
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  4. Demendora

    Demendora Jedi Knight star 2

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    I can actually hear Mara's voice in those)
     
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  5. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks girls!! [:D]

    I'm relieved you all can see Mara in these. I identify a lot with Mara, we're very much alike (except for the whole assassin thing, of course :p) but sometimes that makes it harder because it gets confusing.

    If anyone wants a heads-up when i post, just say so.
     
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  6. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    their decision adamant I loved all the drabbles this week, gal. But these three words really struck me. Very beautifully written and so very L/M. An adamant decision. Perfect! [face_love]
     
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  7. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Lovely, the contrast in each piece and the thoughts so fitting for Mara
     
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  8. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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  9. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Amazing use of the prompts. Woohoo! I love Mara's thoughts on the whole Tatooine fiasco :p -- [face_laugh] I thought she'd get heated up watching Luke do his saber antics at the Sail Barge. ;) =P~ LOL
     
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  10. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    I really like this muttering of Mara. The prompts were made for her;)
     
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  11. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    [face_laugh]

    I don't mind snow but after a time it gets annoying.

    But the last line . . . she failed that one big time seeing that she married the guy that she was supposed to kill.
     
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  12. Demendora

    Demendora Jedi Knight star 2

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    Snow is cool in the first few days.Tha same with a sand. But then you notice, that it's everywhere)
     
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  13. Briannakin

    Briannakin Former Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Great use of the snow prompt.

    But I think Mara failed big time, unless the order was actually to Kriff Skywalker, then she succeeded big time.
     
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  14. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    [face_laugh] Aren't we all glad Mara failed her mission big time?

    I'd like some snow. It never snows here. There's a lot of sand though, I live a mile away from a half-dozen beaches.
     
  15. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Stoked she blew that last command and substituted it. :) :) [face_dancing] [face_dancing]
     
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  16. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Chosen One star 5

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    Mara's funny..."Why not just put a blaster to the head?". That reminds me Dr. Evil's son, Scott, telling his dad almost the same thing in the Austin Powers movie. [face_laugh]
     
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  17. Demendora

    Demendora Jedi Knight star 2

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    It was the biggiest and the happiest failure of her life))
     
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  18. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Chosen One star 5

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    Yeah...it is now "You will kriff Luke Skywalker!"

    Okay, that wasn't Palpatine in her head but a bunch of hopeful fangirls. ;)
     
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  19. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Oh, poor Mara. Tatooine is miserable! I love her reactions to Jabba's plan for execution. Perfectly Mara. Excellent!!
     
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  20. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Wow I love your drabbles!

    @};-
     
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  21. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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  22. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Not weird, more like excellent. =D= =D=
     
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  23. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Chosen One star 5

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    That gave me a plot bunny. I would like to see a story of Mara during this time.
     
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  24. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Should I be worried?
     
  25. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    A great set showing a young Mara surviving in a galaxy ruled by the emperor. You captured her perfectly
     
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