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Beyond - Legends Burning Bright * UDC7 * Week 20 posted 14/Jun (complete)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Hazel, Jan 29, 2013.

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  1. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I can see Mara having high morals and that I think makes her more interesting than just a woman that will do lots to get her job done.
     
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  2. Briannakin

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    Great insight into Mara's thoughts on being the emperor's hand.
     
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  3. Demendora

    Demendora Jedi Knight star 2

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    Wonderful viggies[:D]
     
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  4. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks all!!! [:D]

    I'm relieved you all approved of my little experiment. I thought this week's prompts wouod work well in the first person. I might do it again sometime.
     
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  5. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Chosen One star 5

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    No! I am too busy trying to finish Sacrifices to get into mischief.
     
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  6. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mara has always had a core of steel and integrity. You really showed that with these vigs and I enjoyed them very much. =D=
     
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  7. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks ginchy! That was what I was aiming for, especially with the last prompt.
     
  8. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Your drabbles are sharp and precise, just as Mara in all that she does in her life.
     
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  9. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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  11. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Happy joyous wriggling! Serious and Rude =D= wonderful insights into Mara and the one, the only one :* who can make her smile. Or laugh. Or squeal LOL because she's ticklish ;) Silly, Charming, and Funny [face_dancing] [face_dancing] And I think matching outfits with pink sandals would be beyond cute! And, I can bet it's not the first time, that they're late, or just don't show up [face_laugh] (It's so fun to write of spontaneously passionate pairings) [face_love] !!!!
     
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  12. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Awwww matching outfits and sandals for the twins. [face_love] ahahahahaa I can just see it. Too sweet. And I loved Serious and Mara's introspection.
     
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  13. Briannakin

    Briannakin Former Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    They were all great, but Silly was definitely my favourite. As an older sister to identical twins, I KNOW how fun it is dressing them up in the same outfits, so I'm definitely on Luke's side. Funny was also fun.
     
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  14. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    You described Mara really well. :)

    I understand that it is fun to dress twins the same. But it could get frustrating when you are trying ot tell them apart.
     
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  15. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Jade_eyes - It really is a lot of fun. ;) Thanks!

    ginchy - Thank you very much girl! [:D]

    Briannakin - Silly set the tome for all the prompts. When I started writing it I had no plan at all. I just knew Mara was scolding Luke for something. I kept typing and the puzzle just fell into place in my head.

    Lady_Misty - It would get confusing. I used to know a pair of twins when i was in high school and the only way i could tell them apart was by the extra mole one of them had on her cheek. Thanks!
     
  16. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Chosen One star 5

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    I love the fact that Luke admits to fantasizing about Mara on Myrkr! I knew it! :p Great post! =D=
     
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  17. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    I put thar in for you JL. I can't do it in the diary, but i can do it here. ;)
     
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  18. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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  19. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    =D= A crazy, wonderful year. :)
     
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  20. Alexis_Wingstar

    Alexis_Wingstar Jedi Master star 4

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    Nice set. You've captured Mara well in these drabbles. :)
     
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  21. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Nice sets with Mara.
     
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  22. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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  24. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Clever and super use of the prompts, especially Prank setting up Sabotage and Revenge. Mistakes and Corrections -- quite insightful =D=
     
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  25. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Vader is smart. Sooner or later he will learn that it was her annd see to something embarrassing happens to her.

    Great pieces! :)
     
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