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Beyond - Legends Burning Bright * UDC7 * Week 20 posted 14/Jun (complete)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Hazel, Jan 29, 2013.

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  1. EmeraldJediFire

    EmeraldJediFire Jedi Master star 4

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    Nice. I like the picture it painted.
     
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  2. Briannakin

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    That was so much fun. I, too, wish there were more moments like these in the profics.
     
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  3. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Even the Skywalkers with their Jedi powers ;) are having the same kind of fun and trouble during a vacation. Loved the whole story[face_laugh]
     
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  4. Hazel

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  5. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    A great story. Luke and Mara are meant for each other
     
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  6. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    He's got it bad.


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    "The Starman and Moon Goddess."
     
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  7. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Wonderful!!!!! Sweet and wistful. =D= :)
     
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  8. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Chosen One star 5

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    Beautifully written! I love it!
     
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  9. EmeraldJediFire

    EmeraldJediFire Jedi Master star 4

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    You are aaamaaaazing

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  10. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Loved these. Especially the ending where he feels that together than can face the danger. And that things between them will change forever. [face_love] [face_love]
     
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  11. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Thank you everybody! [:D] :* These are fun to write.
     
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    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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  13. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Chosen One star 5

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    Children? Meaning more than one? Oh, I wish. That would be sweet. Nice story!
     
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  14. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Simply wonderful and marvelous @};- [face_dancing]
     
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  15. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    [face_love]

    Lovely moments!
     
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  16. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Excellent use of the prompts to show Mara's thoughts
     
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  17. Briannakin

    Briannakin Former Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Very sweet set :D
     
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  18. Hazel

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  19. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Terrific blend of situations and moods for the prompts
     
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  20. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Great glimpses into Mara's life
     
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  21. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I have missed a few weeks!! I'm so sorry. But I have to tell you that in last week's set I adore "Future". I miss the time when their future was so bright and open... and you captured that feeling beautifully.
     
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  22. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    All of them were a fun read. :)


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  23. Briannakin

    Briannakin Former Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Great set!
     
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  24. Briannakin

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    Sorry. Double post.
     
  25. Hazel

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