Burning Stars-(Jaina/Jag/Kyp) -Author?s Final Note (for now)

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  1. ShimaraAmidala Jedi Knight

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    *arches eyebrow at her Padawan's first post* You promised not to embarrass me, and here you are with a clay elf as your icon.
  2. collywolly Jedi Knight

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  3. ShimaraAmidala Jedi Knight

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    :_| No one LOL'd at my comment to my Padawan! :_|


    *****then again, it's most likely that no one read it, having no reason to visit this page, knowing that there will be not post :mad: *****
  4. valdezkip Jedi Knight

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    So post then :-D Love your story and cant wait for more.
    ~Nicole~
  5. JaegerGhent Force Ghost

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    *is shocked and amazed there are still people here* :eek:



    Sorry for not being around much lately--between holidays, homework, and sickness, it's been quite hecktic lately.


    Welcome valdezkip, and I'll hopefully be able to post soon. :)

    And Shim--I LOL'd in RL when I saw your comment. Don't that count for something?

    ...then again, it's my sister you're talking about. :p
  6. Jaya Solo Jedi Grand Master

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    That's okay. Just post soon and all will be forgiven! :) Post soon.
  7. ShimaraAmidala Jedi Knight

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    All will be forgiven, sure it will.
  8. Lt_Jaina_Solo Jedi Grand Master

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  9. ShimaraAmidala Jedi Knight

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    Yeah, a post! Please! If your inet service will allow you on long enough for you to cut and paste and hit the post button
  10. JaegerGhent Force Ghost

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    Writing now(finally). Got a total mindblock on it yet again. :p


    Shim: Well, the i-net's acting OK today...hoping it lasts, tho.
  11. Lt_Jaina_Solo Jedi Grand Master

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    it's been almost two months since the last post! i'm dying here! please post more!
  12. JaegerGhent Force Ghost

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    Sending it tothe Beta this evening. But I'm gonna be away for a week or so, so if I don't get it back by tomorrow morning, I'll post it unbeta'ed.


    Lt_Jaina_Solo: I am sorry it's taking so long. :(
  13. jagfellover Jedi Knight

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    YAY!!!!! New postie soon! Woohoo! JG, I can't believe it, we're getting a post!

    Danielle
  14. JaegerGhent Force Ghost

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    Yep. :p


    I'll post it after my math tutor leaves.
  15. JaegerGhent Force Ghost

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    Hope you guys like.


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    As Jaina landed her X-wing on the Ralroost, she allowed herself a quiet sigh of relief. After a heated battle, the Jedi and Chiss had finally fought the Peace Brigade off?but the casualties on both sides had been heavy.

    ?Five pilots.? Kyp slammed his hand so hard against the side of her X-Wing that Jaina jumped. ?Five! I can?t believe this!?

    Jaina climbed out of the cockpit and approached him.

    ?Durron, watch it. You?re gonna chip the paint.? Kyp spun around and pointed a finger at her, sending a furious look.

    ?Five pilots, Jaina. Five perfectly good pilots are now space dust and all you can think of is me chipping the paint off your ship?!?

    Jaina blinked and shook her head, fighting back a biting remark. The way he looked like her father right now? ?Kyp.? She laid a hand on his arm and he stiffened. ?I?m sorry about the pilots??

    ?You seem it,? he shot back, but the reply lacked its usual sting.

    ??but we have more important things to do right now than mourn the dead?there?ll be time for that later.? she added quickly at his sharp look. ?Right now we have to prepare to go down to Nirauan and see how bad the damage is.?

    ?There?s no need for that now.?

    Kyp and Jaina turned as one towards the new voice. Before them stood Jagged?hands clenched, pale green eyes narrowed, jaw squared?and grimmer looking than ever.

    Jaina quickly dropped her hand from Kyp?s arm and frowned at Jag. ?What do you mean??

    ?Just what I said.? Through the Force Jaina could feel his emotions raging beneath that expressionless mask. ?The only populated area on Nirauan is completely leveled. There?s no reason now to check it over.?

    Jaina gasped, then opened her mouth to say something?

    ?Save it.? Jag turned and walked towards the exit. ?I don?t want any sympathy.?


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    After telling Jaina and his remaining pilots to get some rest, Kyp hurried out of the docking bay. It didn?t take him long to catch up with Jag.

    ?Hey Fel.? He called out, jogging over to the younger man. ?Wait up.? Jag didn?t stop walking.

    ?I do not want to talk right now, Durron.? He said without looking over his shoulder.

    ?Well, tough luck then,? Kyp grabbed Jagged by the arm and yanked him to a halt. ?Because I have something to talk to you about.?

    Fel narrowed his eyes and pulled his arm out of Kyp?s grasp. ?I said I don?t want to talk.?

    ?And I said you?re gonna. And if you say no again,? with a flash Kyp?s lightsaber ignited. ?I?ll just have to convince you otherwise.?

    For a moment Jag?s stony expression wavered?but he was quickly in control of himself again. ?Are you threatening me??

    Kyp shrugged. ?If it?s the only way to get you to shut up and listen to me.? Jag straightened and raised an eyebrow at the Jedi Master.

    ?Fine. What is it you have to say??

    With a flick of his wrist Durron turned off and re-hooked his lightsaber to his belt. ?Jaina.?

    Fel gave an exasperated sigh. ?I should?ve figured.?

    ?Yeah, that?s right.? Kyp scowled at the young Imperial pilot. ?Did you see her face after that curt little comment you made in there? About wanting no sympathy? From what I could sense, it would?ve been kinder for you to punch her in the face.?

    Jag looked suddenly confused. ?What??

    ?You heard me right. Don?t you have any understanding of human emotions? Or have you been completely brainwashed into a Thrawn-wannabe??

    ?Durron??

    ?I wasn?t finished yet!? Kyp?s eyes were on fire. ?Jaina was showing some compassion for you, kid. Foreign concept to you, I know, but in this part of the galaxy it?s more or less a common thing. There was no need for you to be so brusque!?

    ?I was not being brusque??

    ?Oh really? I want you to look Jaina Solo in the eyes and say that. See if you really believe it then.?

    Fel was beginning to get angry. ?Just because you?re a Jedi doesn?t give you the right to??

    ?Quiet!? Kyp
  16. Lt_Jaina_Solo Jedi Grand Master

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    we got a postie! we got a postie! that was great JaegerGhent! that was so wonderful!


    and, yes, before you ask, i am hyper...






    btw,


















    is it too soon to ask for more???? [face_pleading]
  17. JainaJag00 Jedi Master

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    that really was good. good kyp :). put them on the right track....

    poor JAG!!!!! all of niraun is gone! thats sooo sad!
  18. JaegerGhent Force Ghost

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    Lt_Jaina_Solo: Glad you enjoyed. :)

    And yes, I noticed you were hyper. ;)



    JainaJag00: I know. :( Poor guy...Mwahahahahaha!!!!! [face_devil] [face_mischief]



    [face_blush] :p
  19. ShimaraAmidala Jedi Knight

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    What?!?!?!!? You went online, JG, and you didn't write me! For that I should say this post sucked [face_snob] ... but I can't, 'cause it's good, and I would reccomend that you check your mail over at the VidEO store. You should not be disappointed (no promises ;) )
  20. JaegerGhent Force Ghost

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    *raises eyebrow* I e-mailed you before I posted, Shim...and I might add that I've gotten no response so far.


    And I don't think you put enough '@#!!$^@'s in your fic--it won't let me load your story.


    But glad you enjoyed. :p
  21. ShimaraAmidala Jedi Knight

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    [face_totally_PO'd] Do you know how long it took me to get AOL to mail that darn thing, and you can't even OPEN it?!?!?! Do you know how long it took to do all the fonts and italics?!!?! Do you know how long--well, it's not your fault, it's the comp's. I shall send it again with !#$&%'s left and right. *sighs* Hi ho, hi ho, it's off to work I go on that again...
  22. Saber-of-Light Jedi Master

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    Great post! :D :D

    You still can't convert me...

    I'm a total j/j-er! :D
  23. JaegerGhent Force Ghost

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    Thanks Shim.


    Saber-of-Light: Thanks! :D

    Well in that case, I won't try. ;) Jag or Kyp is fine for her, IMO.
  24. collywolly Jedi Knight

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  25. Jaya Solo Jedi Grand Master

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    You posted! Great job!
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