By the Grace of Lady Vader

I'm delurking myself to compliment you all on this wonderfully written story, and beg of you to continue. Even though I hate picking through these message boards for the story, I must admit it was worth every moment of it, and I'm counting the days until I can read it in it's entirety on a website. Please have a sequel!

Stellar.

~ Andra

 

We're working on the edit now (I've been shamefully slow in passing it on , but my part will be done very shortly)...so you will see it on a site (or two or three ) in the near future.

And thanks to all you guys.

 

SEQUEL
SEQUEL
SEQUEL
SEQUEL
SEQUEL
I DEMAND A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I say we dig up some stuff on GL, e-mail this story to him, and threaten to go public with our info unless he prints this story as canon.
Who's with me?

 

LOL!!!

Nice idea...

 

"Sequel!"
"Sequel!"
"Sequel!"
"Sequel!"
"Sequel!"
"Sequel!"
"Sequel!"
"Sequel!"

There may not be plans now... but always in motion is the future!

 

Hello.

Catching up on this fic.

Quick ? Back on pg. 47 I noticed this.

'Told you, I did, that we should not train the boy."

"Which one?"

"With both, I told you. Too impatient, too reckless."


You are implying that Ami and Ani have had 2 boys w/ that, I just feel like being nit picky. It distracted me.


Otherwise, EXCELLENT WRITING,


I only mentioned that because I thought "wait a sec, are they going to create a long-lost brother for Luke and Leia?"

Empress

 

Nope... he was talking about Anakin and Luke, both of whom he said they shouldn't train.

But thanks for reading closely enough to note not only the line, but the page, pretty much mid-story!

 

Will there be a sequel someday?

 

Ok, you don't have to do a sequel, just do
a spin off.

 

Really guys... there's no sequel in the works. It was always planned to end where it did. But I'd still love to hear what everyone *thinks* would happen!

 

Well, in rise to your challenge JG, I can imagine a ROTJ-style rescue of Leia from the New Empire's clutches, and then a confrontation with Luke in front of the Vaders.
Though Leia might be well-Darkened by the time they could get a rescue attempt going.
I could see a climax in which Anakin turns back (a la ROTJ), when confronted with the actual evil that Ami represents, during some kind of confrontation involving the twins (just like Palpy zapping Luke, Luke doing something to Leia with Ami cheering on)... but that's just dreaming.
To sum it up, I'm afraid I must abandon any dignity:
SEQUEL!
SEQUEL!
SEQUEL!
SEQUEL!
SEQUEL!
SEQUEL!

Shloz

 

Awe, darn my luck!! Oh, well. I really enjoyed this story. That will have to be enouph!

 

OK, I'm voting for a sequel...
Shloz said it before me, so I'm not gonna start typing what I think will happen

 

I don't even want to speculate... because I'd love for the authors to surprise me!!

(Gotta keep prodding, as irritating as it must be for them.)

 

Hello, I just read the story for the first time. I haven't read much fanfiction, and what I've read up until now has been pretty dire, but this is magnificent, superb, wonderful!!! Well done!!!

 

This story has been archived in cleaned-up form at Vader's Mask -- any formatting problems are my fault; I think I have them cleaned up.

Anyway...

By the Grace of Lady Vader

 

Cool. Can I link to the story on NOL?


aa

 

Like it!

Minor thing-- the links from one story part to another don't seem to work... part of the address is missing, I think.

 

Uh-oh. I think I'm having a problem saving with spaces and some punctuation. I had to go through and hand-fix a bunch of quotation mark problems, and I wonder if I got one with the backslash...

EDIT: D'oh, I forgot to put in "files/" And it's not letting me in right now, so it will have to wait.

I think that's easy enough to fix; the online HTML editing is back for the time being.

BTW, AA... a link is fine with me if it's cool with A21 and a-p.

 

I did a new LV wallpaper, with the VM archive page address on it. I'm pleased with the background, and couldn't figure out where to show it off... (of course, with the official site releasing really cool wallpapers today, I guess it's not really noticeable, but I've been frustrated with my by-hand art attempts this evening and wanted to post something that doesn't look like stick figures)

[image=http://fan.starwars.com/vadersmask/files/wallpaper/ladyvader2.jpg]

 

I like it!

 

I think it looks great. Very worthy to this incredible story.

 

Up!!!!

**********

 

waw,'ve read the whole story on JG's website yesterday evening (and got to bed very late, btw ) and... I don't know what to tell you...

the work on the feelings was very, very, VERY interesting ,and the three of you write very well (but you've already been told that, havn't you ? =)

I was really surprised by the end ; kinda... well, I was actually expecting an happy ending of some sort, or at least a clue about Anakin's coming bck to the Light for good ; here, you just leave a galaxy in chaos, submissive to a mad woman (I really gotta re-read the whole thing to check the clues of Padmé's mindness in the first parts of the story =) ; it's... sort of unfair for the characters. Their lives are broken =( (yeah, I know, it's just a story =) (still, the ending is too sad to be kept like that) (AND, girls, you must have noticed that, even though the canon ESB had an open ending like your fic, there _was_ a sequel to it )

Hope you'll write another story like this one soon, and thanks for the good time I spent yesterday evening =)

 

Wow, haven't seen this on the front page for awhile!


Thanks, Twinnie, glad you liked it so much.