Beyond - Legends By The Moment (last moment's of a Jedi's life)

Title: By The Moment
Author: jaya_tharen
Genre: death
Characters: Unnamed
Summary: The last moments of a Jedi's life
Notes: I wrote this last year, and I'm just now reposting it.
Disclaimer: All things Star Wars belong to the Great Genius himself

By The Moment

At 1:02 pm, she is walking down the corridor to his apartment
At 1:02 pm, he is climbing into his fighter in docking bay 107

At 1:03 pm, a brawl starts in the mess hall
At 1:03 pm, she is reaching to knock on his door
At 1:03 pm, he is requesting clearance to lift off

At 1:04 pm, the fight in the mess hall gets worse as more people join in, creating a mob
At 1:04 pm, she frowns at the door and knocks again
At 1:04 pm, he is arguing with the deck officer about his clearance code

At 1:05 pm, the fights spills out into the corridors
At 1:05 pm, she uses the Force to unlock his door
At 1:05 pm, he receives permission to take off

At 1:06 pm, two of the men separate from the mob and head down the halls
At 1:06 pm, she enters his room and begins to look around
At 1:06 pm, he is clearing the planet?s atmosphere

At 1:07 pm, the two men arrive in the corridor outside his room
At 1:07 pm, she finds what she is looking for and turns toward the door
At 1:07 pm, he puts his fighter through a few test maneuvers

At 1:08 pm, one of the fighters pulls a blaster
At 1:08 pm, she steps into the doorway of the apartment
At 1:08 pm, he turns his craft toward the nearby moon

At 1:09:15 pm, the blaster is fired
At 1:09:15 pm, she takes a step outside the door and into the corridor

At 1:09:30 pm, the blaster bolt ricochets off the wall and strikes her through the heart
At 1:09:30 pm, he requests permission to dock on the moon base

At 1:10 pm, a medic is called
At 1:10 pm, he receives permission to land

At 1:11 pm, the man with the blaster flees the scene
At 1:11 pm, he puts his ship down without a scratch

At 1:12 pm, the other man sits with her as she slowly dies
At 1:12 pm, he emerges from his ship and jumps to the ground

At 1:13 pm, she takes her last breath just as the medic arrives
At 1:13 pm, he embraces his uncle
At 1:13 pm, hundreds of Jedi around the galaxy cry out as they feel her agonizing death

At 1:14 pm, the medic declares her dead
At 1:14 pm, he walks out of the landing bay, joking with his uncle

At 1:15 pm, her parents are notified of her death
At 1:15 pm, his comlink begins to beep, demanding his attention

At 1:16 pm, her mother collapses into her father?s arms and cries
At 1:16 pm, he answers the persistent comlink

At 1:16:30 pm, he drops the comlink and stares blankly ahead in shock

At 1:17 pm, he collapses against the wall, tears streaming silently down his face
At 1:17 pm, news of her death spreads throughout the base

At 1:18 pm, her body fades gently away and she disappears, becoming one with the Force and all the life around


Alright, so it's not my favorite.

Hopefully you like it better than I do!

Please R&R

--Jaya--

 

Very interesting... an intricate story told in the simplest of terms.

I think that you did a great job with this.

jcs