Before - Legends 'By the pricking of my thumbs...' JA, (Obi/Qui) - *Updated 30/04/2007*

just a friendly *UP* to try to get the authoress inspired at the momment

 

I just finished reading the first post. Great job! The humor is subtle, yet amusing...not overplayed at all. The bantering back and forth does a wonderful job of defining Obi and Qui's easygoing affection for each other without drifting into what I'd call soggy mush, which of course is not the same as regular mush at all. I look forward to reading the rest of this. Again, wonderful story!

 

Whew! *pauses to catch breath* What a story! Wonderful. Simply wonderful. I knew Obi-Wan's battle wasn't going to be physical, but you've developed the mental and spiritual battle into a riveting tale that had me reading straight through to the end. Bravo! A pure joy to read. Now post more woman! *ahem* Maybe I'll just consider this payback for all the cliffhangers I've tortured readers with in the past.