Children of the Heroes

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  1. Deren Jedi Knight

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    Hello, and welcome to Children of the Heroes! Children of the Heroes is a series of short stories about the Children of our favorite characters. Anyone can write a story! If you are interested in writing one, please e-mail me. I will start wrting my first one soon, it feautures the children of Wedge Antilles anbd Iella Wessiri.

    Guidelines for writing a story:

    1. The main character must be the child of a character seen either in the movies or in the EU.

    2. The character must be your own creation, or just barely mentioned in a book. If he/she does anything more than have his/her name mentioned, it cannot be used.

    That's All!

    If you are interested in writng a story, please e-mail me at [emailmax@webpunch.net[/email], post, or ICQ me at 63552938 Please send your character's name/profile, the names of his'her paretns, and a BREIF plot summary.

    Thank you for writng, my story will come soon.

    Deren
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    Deren, formerly Jedi Halcyon
  2. Deren Jedi Knight

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    Anyone interested? confused.gif
  3. Deren Jedi Knight

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    May 23, 2000
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    Here is the first part of my story:

    Characters:

    The Antilles Family

    Deren Antilles
    Wedge Antilles - Deren's father
    Iella Wessiri-Antilles - Deren's Mother
    Farrah Antilles - Deren's Sister

    Raina Horn - Deren's Fiance and the Daughter of Corran Horn

    The Crew of the Pilot's Legacy

    Tycho Celchu
    Winter - Tycho's Wife
    Wes Janson
    Hobbie Klivian
    Corran Horn
    Mirax Terrik - Corran's Wife

    Other Characters:
    M2-D2 (Emtoo) - Deren's Hover-Droid
    Gate - Wedge's R5 Droid
    NG-8D (Nag) - Pilot's Legacy Quartermaster


    [This message has been edited by Deren (edited 06-11-2000).]
  4. Deren Jedi Knight

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    "Deren, please join your father in the cockpit," Emtoo's digital voice rang out in Deren's small room on the Gus Treta, the Antilles' family's MP-6000 Correllian Transport. Deren rose from the bed and hit the keypad beside the door. The door slid open wiht a hiss. He walked forward, past the converted cargo compartment that served as his parents' bedroom. Deren stepped inside and glanced at the holo on his father's bedside table. - His Mother - Iella. He had not seen her for so long, and he was going ot see her now. His eyes wandered throughout the room. As he glanced in ht emirror, he realized that hsi mother would barely recognize him now. In the six months since he had last seen her Deren had changed. He had turned 22, and he looked quite different. His dark hair was not cut very close, and he had shaved off the beard he used to have a Raina's request. People said he looked a lot like his father, especially his eyes. They were the same dark brown, that seemed to hold great depth and intelligence.

    "Deren, please join me at the cockpit, we are almost ready to leave hyperspace." His father's voice interupted Deren's thoughts.

    "Sorry Dad, I'll be right there."

    Deren hastily left the bedroom, and climbed the short ladder to the cockpit. He threw himself into the large nerf leather co-pilot's chair. "So, Dad," Deren said to Wedge, "let's go get Mom."

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    So, what do you think? Please comment, and submit your own stories.

    Thanks,

    Deren
  5. Jedi Master Mara Jade Jedi Master

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    Nov 8, 1999
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    Good idea!

    Nice start, too.

    Keep up the good work!

  6. womp_rat208 Jedi Master

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    Nov 8, 1999
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    Wow. Great idea, and good first chapter. Keep it up!
  7. Deren Jedi Knight

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    May 23, 2000
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    Please submit your own stories. We need more than just mine. Chapters 2 & 3 coming tomorrow.
  8. Deren Jedi Knight

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    May 23, 2000
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    Here is chapter 2. Three will come later.

    Note: THis story takes place 30 years adter RoTJ. Wedge is approx. 55 years old, Deren is 22.

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    Beep?Beep?Beep?Beeeep! ?Ready Deren?? Wedge asked. Deren nodded. Wedge pulled back on the lever, pulling the Gus Treta out of hyperspace over the planet Adumar. On the sensor board Deren saw several white dots, indicating six flightknives of Adumari Blade-38?s. Wedge twisted the steering yoke, setting the Gus Treta onto the course indicated by the blades. Though they were still a long way from the planet, they could already see scattered dots of light across the night side of Adumar.
    ?Deren, I want you to take her down. Land her on Aduamer.?
    ?What!?? Deren exclaimed, unable to believe what his father had just told him. All his life, having full control of the Gus Treta was a forbidden thing, not even his mother had done it. It had always been Wedge in the pilot seat, and only Wedge. Yes, Deren had spent over a hundred hours controlling the ship from the co-pilot?s seat, but always with his Dad in the pilot?s seat.
    ?I said, Deren, that I want you to land her so we can pick up your mother. C?mon Deren, I know you can do it.?
    ?Wow Dad, are you sure??
    ?Yes Deren,? Wedge said, ?I have full confidence in you. And if you have an ytrouble, I?ll take your place in the co-pilot?s seat.?
    ?Thanks Dad,? Deren said, as he switched places with his father, realizing the trust Wedge had given to him by letting him land his ship.
    A rush of adrenaline coursed through Deren as he grasped the steering yoke. He looked at his controls. 100 miles to entry. 4 minutes, 52 seconds Deren put on the forward shields to protect the ship and leaned forward, ready to guide the ship into Adumar?s atmosphere.
    The second they entered the air they were thrown about by the turbulence, and the ship was rocked violently. ?Keep her steady Deren,? Wedge said, ?You can do it.? As Deren guided the ship lower he twisted on the repulser lift coils, and glided the ship over the planet. Deren thumbed on the comm.
    ?Gus Treta to Aduamr Control, where is your escort taking us? Where do we land??
    ?Adumar Ocntrol here, you?re headed to Yeadgon City, Ambassador Wessiri-Antilles is meeting with the Adumari High Council now, she will be done with the meeting in several hours. Meanwhile, Escalion, the former perator of Yegadon wishes to meet with you.?
    ?Tell him we look forward to seeing him,? Wedge said, ?Gus Treta Out.?
    ?Lets go Deren, to Yedagon it is.?
    The ship cruised quickly over the main continent, crossing over Cartann while it slept. Soon they were over Adumar?s green-blue oceans, and then over land again. The lights of Yedagon were bright, blazing away ahead of them. Deren glanced at the control board. ?It says we?re to land outside the Adumari High Council building. On a VIP landing pad.?
    ?Ok, Deren, just take it slow and you?ll be fine.?
    Deren pulled on the steering yoke, taking the ship in a long low loop over the High Council building. Cranking up his repulsors, he slowly lowered down towards the landing spot. Twisting another button he lowered the landing gear. He lowered the repulsers, and slowly touched the ship to the ground. Deren leaned back, suddenly exhausted.
    ?Great job,? Wedge said enthusiastically, ?I?ve never seen you fly better.?
    A smile crossed Deren?s face. Compliments about his flying from his father were rare, because his father had been the best pilot the New Republic had had. ?Thanks Dad.?
    ?Now let?s shut this thing down and go see Escalion. And then, we?ll see your mother.?
  9. Deren Jedi Knight

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    May 23, 2000
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    Does Anyone read this? PLease comment.
  10. maramijade Jedi Master

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    Looks great so far, when your done can you send the whole story to me, I'm interested in putting it up on my fan fic page.

    please send it to me at princess_ami_jade@yahoo.com


    thanks!!!

    Mara Jade/Tenoh Haruka Fan fic Center
    http://members.aol.com//Michiru511//Center.html http://members.aol.com//Michiru511//Center.html

  11. Purp Jedi Knight

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    Apr 19, 1999
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    Okay, Deren, this is ridiculous. When I gave you that tip in the other thread, I assumed that you just didn't know better. But your actions here are deplorable. You started four other threads, all within five minutes, all for one express purpose: to get people to visit this thread.

    Now if no one had answered this thread, I might, might, be able to understand this. But you already had people who responded! If you continue these actions, it seems clear to me that you are writing for one purpose only: to be 'the most popular kid on the forum.' I find that sad, and if this is the case, I doubt you will ever be even moderately successful as a writer.
  12. Deren Jedi Knight

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    May 23, 2000
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    Sorry, Purp. I shouldn't have done that. I just wanted people to read this. I won't do that type of thing again. Once again Sorry.

    Deren
  13. Purp Jedi Knight

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    Apr 19, 1999
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    It's understandable, Deren, and I think your response shows that you really are interested in writing. I know the need for feedback can be a little overpowering at times, but don't worry about it. You just make your posts the best they can be. If there still isn't anyone responding, that's their loss.
  14. Deren Jedi Knight

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    May 23, 2000
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    Thanks Purp. I'm going to write more tomorrow.

    --Deren
  15. Deren Jedi Knight

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    Please submit your own stories. Please, Please, PLEASE! I'm begging. send them to me at mailto:max@webpunch.net">max@webpunch.net Thanks a lot.

    Deren

    P.S. More of my story coming soon!
  16. Deren Jedi Knight

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    May 23, 2000
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    More coming soon! (THis means when I get around to it) My finals end Friday so I'll have lots more time.
  17. padawan lunetta Force Ghost

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    May 15, 1999
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    Mesa liking your story so far Deren!! And I would write one, but I gotta finish my long one first!
  18. Deren Jedi Knight

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    May 23, 2000
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    Thanks, Lunnetta When you finish yur stories, please write one for this. My piece is coming Sat., it's almost done.
  19. Deren Jedi Knight

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    I'm out of school now, and I have a lot more to post. More coming tonight!
  20. Jedi Gaeriel Jedi Padawan

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    Jun 9, 2000
    Cool story so far Daran. I'll write one and post it as soon as you finish w/ yours. It could be pretty difficult to distinguish both stories if they ran at the same time :p
  21. Deren Jedi Knight

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    May 23, 2000
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    Thanks, Jedi Gaeriel Please e-mail me your idea.
  22. Deren Jedi Knight

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    I have finnally finished the next segment. I'll post it tonight!
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