Before Circle (a Xani fic with a bit of a twist) [replies added finally]

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  1. female_obi_wan Jedi Knight

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    Title: Circle
    Author: female_obi-wan
    Charcter: Xanatos
    Summary: Rather...interesting Xanatos story
    A/N: A plot bunny walked up to be and whispered 'Pssst...d'ya know that Xanatos's death took place in the same year
    as...something else? This is the result. Enjoy.



    Circle

    What are you supposed to feel before you die?

    Maybe he was already dead. He seemed to be floating in a void. The agonizing stinging was fading, too. Yes, he was dead.

    It was dark...very dark.

    Where was he? Sith hell, perhaps? Xanatos felt a ripple of fear- fear he hadn't felt in months. Even when about to jump to almost certain death, he hadn't felt it.

    There was nothing here...no-one else. No monsters. No torture devices.

    Surely Sith hell was a bit less...dull? He'd imagined there to be slightly more eternal pain. Not that he wanted it, of course, but the plain blackness was unnerving him.

    I can't stay here forever.

    The fear increased.

    Can I? He began to feel a little hysterical. "Can I? I'd be bored to death here." he called. "Ha ha ha."

    Maybe more than a little hysterical.

    The blackness gave no answer. It seemed to be crushing him. It was getting hard to breathe- what?! Why was he BREATHING?

    "Get me out of here!"

    So he was stuck here forever, was he? This was the punishment for revenge on the man who'd betrayed him?

    "SHOW ME MY MASTER!" he roared, and didn't know why he'd said it. But it seemed to work.

    In an instant the blackness had completely gone, and he saw them. His old Master, and his old Master's new apprentice, walking away from from the acid that Xanatos had jumped into, as if it was nothing. Not quite...were there tears on the older
    man's face?

    I don't want him crying for me!

    None of the people he could see gave any answer at all.

    An uncontrolable rage rose up inside Xanatos. "Qui-Gon Jinn and Obi-Wan Kenobi, I wish you were both dead! No, I wish the darkness would kill you both, in the most painful way possible. Beause darkness will come-" wait a minute, that was true...something was wrong...."-and all you loved will die. It'll seperate you, too-you will suffer."

    Then the blackness was empty. Xanatos was gone.

    *****

    The suns were setting.It was sometimes a pretty sight, but Shmi Skywalker had no time for it. She held her newborn baby to
    her.

    "My miracle...my Anakin."
  2. VadeyFan2002 Jedi Master

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    Sep 30, 2002
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    Ani, as reincarnation of Xanatos?

    Well, if you see it like that, then Xan got his death wishes fulfilled.

    Vadey
  3. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    Feb 21, 2003
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    Wow.

    O.O

    Woah.

    YES!!!!

    But.... If that's true..... Why do I love Xan but hate Bratikin??

    Hm....

    Must meditate on this........
  4. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    Wicked plot twist indeed.
  5. Happy_Hobbit_Padawan Force Ghost

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    Oooooooooohhhhhh ..... Anakin as reincarnated Xanatos--well, that certainly explains a lot! ;)

    An uncontrolable rage rose up inside Xanatos. "Qui-Gon Jinn and Obi-Wan Kenobi, I wish you were both dead! No, I wish the darkness would kill you both, in the most painful way possible. Beause darkness will come-" wait a minute, that was true...something was wrong...."-and all you loved will die. It'll seperate you, too-you will suffer." It's sad that his unknowing curse on them comes true!

    His old Master, and his old Master's new apprentice, walking away from from the acid that Xanatos had jumped into, as if it was nothing. Not quite...were there tears on the older man's face? :_| Poor Qui-Gon.

    He began to feel a little hysterical. "Can I? I'd be bored to death here." [face_laugh]

    This is a really intriguing idea! Will you be writing more? :D
  6. Padawan_Jess_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    [face_shocked] Wow!! Great idea here, Sarah! Very original!! :D I also adore Xani, but I hate Anakin. Ah well, Xani rocks! ;) Great little viggy, I really loved the new concept!
  7. female_obi_wan Jedi Knight

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    VadeyFan2002: Yep. :)

    Agent_Jaid: I've always wondered why people like Xan but hate Ani, since they did really do pretty much the same thing. :confused: Ah well. Thanks for reading!

    jacen200015: Thanks!

    Happy_Hobbit_Padawan Thanks. :) I may write more at some point. :)

    Jess: I'm starting to become rather fond of Ani. I think he's treated a bit unfairly in the fic. :( (I also have a minor obsession with Hayden's teeth, but let's not get into that) Oh well...to each his/her own or whatever it is they say. ;)
  8. Xanatos_son_of_Crion Jedi Knight

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    Whoa! [face_shocked]

    Bratakin is Xani reincarnated?!? [face_shocked]

    NOOOOOOOOO! Not wonderful Xani! *Kills the brat and releases Xani*`

    More please?
  9. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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  10. Xanatos_son_of_Crion Jedi Knight

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  11. Xanatos_son_of_Crion Jedi Knight

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  12. female_obi_wan Jedi Knight

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    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl: I don't think there'll be more, but you never know. :) Thanks for reading!

    Xanatos_son_of_Crion: Thanks for the ups!
  13. Xanatos_son_of_Crion Jedi Knight

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOO! [face_desperate]


    This is good! You have to write more! :(

    How else are we gonna know what happens? :D


    UP
  14. Xanatos_son_of_Crion Jedi Knight

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  15. Angel_Jaid Jedi Knight

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    Female_Obi_Wan: I've always wondered why people like Xan but hate Ani, since they did really do pretty much the same thing.

    It might be the fact that Xan was incredibly hot and wasn't all googoo-gaga over a stupid-although-beautiful ***** of a senator.

    That just might be the reason....



  16. female_obi_wan Jedi Knight

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    *shrugs* Fair enough :D

    (Although I like the A/P romance ;) )
  17. Xanatos_son_of_Crion Jedi Knight

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    I don't like Bratakin because of his arragant attitude. Xanatos is evil, but he at least has charm. Also, Qui-Gon was a buckethead, and Obi-Wan wasn't. So I also hate Anakin because he hurt Obi-Wan, but I could care less about Xanatos betraying Qui-Gon.

    *Shrug*

    That's just my opinion, though.
  18. Sarahthenerd Jedi Knight

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    <<Qui-Gon was a buckethead>>

    Was not! 8-} (Sorry [face_blush] I relate to him most of all the characters and defend him like a...mad rabid fangirl.)

    Anyway, I just realised that I couldn't really write a sequel to this, because if Xan really is Anakin, then you just need to watch the movies to find out what happens ;)

    (Although you never know...I might be able to get an AU out of this one day...)



    (BTW, I am f-o-w...this is my new name :D)
  19. Xanatos_son_of_Crion Jedi Knight

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    Oh.

    It was an awsome beggining, though.
  20. Sarahthenerd Jedi Knight

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    Thank you :D (Hmmm...I'm getting ideas for a sequel now. Darn :D)
  21. Xanatos_son_of_Crion Jedi Knight

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    YES! YES!

    SEQUEL! :D


    8-}

    Don't mind me. I'm just a little hyper. Sequel, Please?
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