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Saga Clone Wars ~ Anakin/OC, Padme/Obi-Wan (New Chapter 10 - 11.11.03 Post!!!)

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  1. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Clone Wars (CH1)
    By Obi's Girl

    Disclaimer: I think we all know by now, who the creator of SW is.
    Note: I guess you can call this a sneak peak of one of my new upcoming fall/spring fics. So yes, I will complete it but I need the official script for AOTC. Not the early version, the current one, otherwise this fic won't work. If you happen to have the current script, e-mail me it ASAP. I'll look it over and see what I can do with it.

    This is a sequel to Padawan & the Prince. But you don't necessarily have to know that. Instead of Obi-Wan being a Jedi Knight and Master to Anakin, he's a senator. The story basically follows, or will follow the same outline of AOTC, the exception of character changes. I probably won't be able to post a CH2 until the movie is out on DVD and I can find the official script on the net.

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    This is a sequel to Padawan & the Prince. But you don't necessarily have to know that. Instead of Obi-Wan being a Jedi Knight and Master to Anakin, he's a senator. The story basically follows, or will follow the same outline of AOTC, the exception of character changes. I probably won't be able to post a CH2 until the movie is out on DVD and I can find the official script on the net.

    ~~

    There is unrest in the Galactic Senate as several hundred solar systems under the leadership of the rebel leader, Count Dooku, have declared their intentions to secede from the Republic. This separatist movement has made it difficult for the limited number of Jedi Knights to maintain peace and order in the galaxy. Senator Obi-Wan Kenobi, the former Prince of Naboo, is returning to Coruscant to vote on the critical issue of creating an army to assist the overwhelmed Jedi?

    ~~

    A yellow Naboo Fighter flew toward the planet, followed by a large Royal Cruiser and two more Fighters. The ships skim across the surface of the city landscape as the sun glinted off the chrome hulls of the sleek Naboo spacecraft as they navigated between the buildings of the capital planet.

    ~~

    As the two Naboo Fighters land on one leaf of a three-leaf-clover landing platform, the Royal Starship landed on the central lead, and the third Fighter on the remaining platform. One of the fighter pilots, Captain Typho, Senator Kenobi's chief of security jumped from the wing of his ship, removing his helmet. He huffed, scanning the area before walking towards a woman pilot.

    "We made it. I guess I was wrong, there was no danger at all." Typho reasoned as the ship's ramp extended, allowing two guards, Senator Kenobi, one handmaiden Verse and four troopers descended the ramp.

    Obi-Wan Kenobi, former Prince of Naboo is more handsome as he was ten years earlier, freeing his people from the yoke of the Trade Federation. The dignitaries started forward but as Kenobi reached the foot of the ramp, there was a blinding flash and a huge explosion.

    The dignitaries and pilots were hurled to the ground as the starship was destroyed. Captain Typho and the two escort pilots run to the fallen Senator as Artoo Detoo dropped down from the Naboo Fighter, rolling towards the wreckage. The male escort pilot knelt by the Senator, taking off his helmet, revealing one of Obi-Wan's decoys.

    Obi-Wan gulped, supporting his head in his lap, "Hamner?" Hamner's eyes opened, looking up at the Senator. Hamner had been Kenobi?s decoy since his days as the Prince; after Obi-Wan left office, he offered his former bodyguard a job as his decoy.

    "I'm sorry, m'lord... I'm... not sure I..." Hamner cried, dying.

    Kenobi shook his head, staring at Hamner?s face. Hamner had been his friend for a long time; it seemed impossible that something like this would happen, yet it did. ?No! No! No!?he cried, attempting to wake up Hamner from his slumber. Finally, Obi-Wan lowered Hamner to the ground. He stood up, looking around, tears in his eyes. ?I should not have come back."

    Typho leaned forward, almost whispering as if there were spies on the platform, ?M?lord, you are still in danger." Obi-Wan didn?t reply except step over Hamner?s body, looking in th
     
  2. Lady-Kenobi

    Lady-Kenobi Jedi Master star 3

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    Aeryn, I know that you're doing your Sabewan series, but thisis too good to leave hanging.
    Please write more when you can!!!
     
  3. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    maybe i should work on this. to be honest, the sabewan series has been very slow going. i always work better when i have something else to work on.

    ~aeryn
     
  4. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    yay! an update!!!
    That was great!!!
     
  5. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    thanks, snowbee. :D

    ~aeryn
     
  6. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    I am working on the next post, so maybe sometime this weekened, something will be up.

    ~aeryn
     
  7. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Clone Wars (CH6)
    by obi's girl

    A/N: Sorry for the lack of updates. I grew lazy during the summer, so I didn't write too much. The next couple chapters will be worked on.

    After the speeder had come to abrupt stop, Zam left the crashed speeder and ran through the crowd; elsewhere, Anakin picked himself up off the pavement and ran down the very crowded street.

    It was the seedy underbelly of the city. Broken sidewalks, garish lights reflected on the filthy puddles. The street was crowded with various alien low-life's, panhandling droids and the occasional group of upper-class slummers. The Padawan stopped running abruptly, apologizing the people around him and then looked around for his lost target. He saw a flicker of red a scarf vanishing around the corner and started running again, stopping at the door Zam turned into.

    "Anakin," I shouted, stopping before he went into the nightclub. Anakin huffed, annoyed at my late attendance but I ignored him.

    "She went into that club, Master,"

    I glanced around the square, then briefly at the club and looked at my apprentice, "Patience." I grunted, handing him his lost lightsaber, "Here. Next time try not to lose it."

    Anakin nodded, grabbing hold of the lightsaber and then jerked away as I held it back from him, "A Jedi's saber is his or her's most precious possession,"

    "Yes Master," he mumbled, once again reaching for the lightsaber but I pulled it back again.

    "You must keep it with you at all times,"

    "I know, Master," Anakin mumbled, looking away from me.

    I noted his annoyance with me and finally handed him the lightsaber. Any more banter and we'd lose our target, "Just remember, this weapon is your life!" Anakin nodded, finally grabbing of his lightsaber and hooking it again on his belt.

    "Why do I have this feeling you're going to be the death of me?" I muttered as we entered the nightclub. Everyone turned and looked at us for a minute and then went back to their business.

    Anakin shrugged, "Don't say that Master... You're the closest thing I have to a father...Well, a female version anyway. I don't want to cause you pain."

    I smirked and rolled my eyes, "Then why don't you listen to me?!"

    He hung his head low, avoiding my eyes again, "I will. I'll do better, I promise."

    I shrugged, scanning the area around us for our target. There were so many bright colors and didn't people and aliens in the bar. So many voices talking at once, I couldn't get a clear read of where he was through the Force. "Do you see him?"

    "Actually, I think he's a she..."

    I raised my eyebrow and nodded, "Then be extra careful..." I looked around the room one more time and then nodded to Anakin, "Check it out," As I started to move away, I could feel his disappointment and annoyance. I grinned and continued walking to the bar.

    Finally, I heard his voice call out to me, "Where are you going, Master?"

    //For a drink,//

    Anakin blinked in surprise, and then grunted, drifting amongst the crowd. Many of the aliens and humans he passed, looked back at him with hostility, suspicion, and invitation as he moved among the tables.

    I didn't really need a drink; I didn't need to be alone either but sometimes, Anakin and I worked better apart. Maybe it was because there was no distraction for him, mainly me to distract him. His feelings for me were weird. I didn't think of him in that way; I mean, I raised the kid since he was nine but I didn't love him, love him that way. It was absurd he even thought of me in a romantic way. I shrugged and signaled the barman.

    ~~

    A hand moved slowly to a pistol in its holster, removing the safety catch. The hilt of the holster hit the assassin?s thigh as she spotted her target and moved closer towards the bar. I was alone, which was an ideal situation for any assassins.

    ~~

    "Wanna buy some death sticks?" I heard a rough voice say beside me. I put down my glass, glancing briefly at the skinny boy. He had two antennae in his head, his face was dirty and he smelled funny too. He looked about s
     
  8. Lady-Kenobi

    Lady-Kenobi Jedi Master star 3

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    Hooray it's back!!!! Now Aeryn, I can't wait to see what YOU DO when it's time to go back to Naboo!

    P.S. Thanks for the PM!
     
  9. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    :D Not say anything Lady, but you know romance/angst is my specialty.

    ~aeryn
     
  10. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    I am working more on Clone Wars. Right now, I just need to get past the 'finding information period' in AOTC. Then I can move onto my specialty :D Romance, angst.

    I don't really have any other fanfics to worry about right now, besides my two beyond the saga fics, so i'll be working on CW more often. I swear this time, i'll write chapters every week. Two times a week if I need to.

    No more delays.

    ~aeryn
     
  11. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Upping this fic for people who have not reveiwed :D And I am working on future chapters.

    ~~aeryn
     
  12. CrystalKenobi

    CrystalKenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    Looking forward to more updates on this story.
     
  13. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Clone Wars
    Chapter 7
    By obi?s girl

    "Track down this bounty hunter you must, Padmé,"

    I nodded, side-glancing at Anakin standing beside me. I'd talked to him earlier about what the Council might suggest be the next action in our assignment. He didn't like what I had to say, of course, but he didn't say anything about it. I knew he was more worried about my safety, well, more or less from Senator Kenobi than from any bounty hunter.

    "More importantly, find out who he's working for," Mace added.

    I glanced at Anakin and nodded, stepping closer, "What about Senator Kenobi? He will still need protection."

    "Handle that you will, Padmé," Yoda replied. Without turning, I felt Anakin's anger over the situation. He wanted to say something against the arrangement, but I knew he wouldn't speak against the Council, only to me in private.

    "Padmé, escort Senator Kenobi back to his home planet of Naboo. He'll be safer there. And don't use registered transport...travel as refugees," Mace advised.

    I shrugged and added, "As the leader of the opposition, it will be very difficult to get Senator Kenobi to leave the capital,"

    Yoda grunted and his eyebrows furrowed, "Until caught this killer is, our judgment, he must respect,"

    "And my Padawan?" I asked, "He can't track this bounty hunter by himself. He'll need some help, also someone to keep him out of trouble,"

    "Aware of this we are, Padmé. Chosen, a Knight has been assigned to accompany him,"

    I looked curiously at Master Yoda, trying to pick out the name from his mind but he was blocking me. I glanced at Anakin and then looked at Mace for a straight answer. The answer was not to my liking. "You're going to pair him with Her?"

    Mace rolled his eyes, "We are aware of your distrust of Knight Morgan Sharr, Padmé, but she's the best we have and currently, she doesn't have any other assignments lined up or a Padawan to worry about,"

    "You can't pair Anakin with Morgan. She's trouble, irresponsible, unpredictable...The girl follows her own set of rules. Masters, you can't do this!" I argued.

    Anakin smirked behind me and almost laughed. Someone's jealous...

    I turned to him, giving him a look that basically said, Shut-up! and he frowned again. "Masters, please reconsider your choice."

    "The decision has been made, Padmé and Morgan?s on her way here to meet with your Padawan," Mace concluded, "Please, respect our judgment Padmé,"

    "Yes Masters," I bowed and glared at Anakin. As we both turned to leave, Mace called me back, "....Go to the Senate and ask Chancellor Palpatine to speak with him about this matter." We bowed again and left the room.

    ~~

    "...I understand, Master. Why don't you trust this Morgan? Who is she?" Anakin asked as we made our way towards the balcony. "What is it?" he asked again and I rolled my eyes. "Come on, Master. I want to know why you despise this woman so much,"

    I rolled my eyes again and looked at Anakin, "Morgan and I were involved in this lightsaber competition when we were initiates. I was a week shy of my thirteenth birthday, but Morgan was a year older than me. Also at the match were several Jedi Masters looking for Padawan?s to take on. Master Qui-Gon was among those Masters..."

    "Wait a minute, you met Qui-Gon on Naboo...He came along with Mace to protect your parents from assassination attempts? You'd both already bonded then. Why did you have to wait for a lightsaber match to become Master and Padawan?"

    "Because Anakin, because I had to train for a year. Yes, Qui-Gon and I already bonded but the Council wouldn't allow him to take a Padawan and then the match happened. We spoke briefly after he arrived. He wished me luck and I promised not to let him down. But I did. Morgan won the first round and we were paired again for the second round, and she won that too."

    Anakin frowned, "If she won, doesn't that mean Morgan should have been Master Qui-Gon's apprentice and not you?"

    I smirked, "Well, it was later determined that the moves Morgan used were too dangero
     
  14. Lady-Kenobi

    Lady-Kenobi Jedi Master star 3

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    OOO...........a black leather gown. Looks like Senator Kenobi wants to rekindle a flame with a certain Jedi Master. Thanks for the PM. Can't wait to read more Aeryn!
     
  15. CrystalKenobi

    CrystalKenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks for the pm.

    Another good post. worth the waiting.

     
  16. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    And it gets even better, espicially once we get to Naboo ;)

    ~aeryn
     
  17. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Up!

    ~aeryn
     
  18. CrystalKenobi

    CrystalKenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    Waiting for Naboo. On pins and needles.


    but being very patient. :)
     
  19. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    I will get to posting more chapters, maybe tomorrow since I'm home. They are being worked on. Not to worry :D

    ~aeryn
     
  20. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    THANKS FOR THE PM!
    that was great! Very much worth the wait!
    Seems like Obi's planning ahead...;) can't wait for more....\
    Naboo should be good!
     
  21. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Clone Wars
    Chapter 8
    by obi's girl

    Anakin quickened his pace as he walked down the Senatorial halls. He was late meeting with Knight Sharr and the Chancellor. He found it odd that rather than listen to a debriefing from the Council, Morgan would listen to the Chancellor instead. Of course, Anakin had walked these halls many times, seeking guidance from him. The Chancellor had become his second mentor?

    The Padawan stopped abruptly as he came upon the Chancellor?s office. His secretary nodded it was all right for him to enter. Anakin thanked her and quietly entered the office; Knight Sharr was there, relaxing in one of three chairs in front of the Chancellor?s desk.

    ??I am most grateful the Council appointed you, Knight Sharr to work with Anakin. He?s a very powerful JedI, very talented. You two will work together perfectly,? he finished, glancing up as Anakin entered the room. The Chancellor smiled, beckoning him closer. ?Tardy, are we, Padawan Skywalker??

    Anakin fumbled, looking nervously at Sharr, ?I?m sorry, your excellency. My Master was lecturing me, we only parted briefly.?

    Sharr grunted but didn?t say anything, except stand up from the chair, extending her hand to Anakin. Palpatine stood between the two Jedi, ?Padawan Anakin Skywalker, Knight Morgan Sharr,?

    ?It?s a pleasure to meet you, Knight Sharr,?

    ?Knight Sharr?? she muttered, ?Please Anakin, call me Morgan. There will be no formalities on this mission. It?s rather irritating for someone to call you ?Knight Sharr? all the time,?

    Anakin nodded as he turned to the Chancellor, ?You have debriefed her, your excellency??

    Palpatine smiled, about to say so but Morgan jumped forward, answering for him, ?Yes, he has, Anakin. I look forward to working with you, Skywalker. As I?m sure you know, your Master and I aren?t exactly friends but hopefully, she hasn?t rubbed off too much on you during the time you have trained with her,?

    ?Master Maberrie is an excellent Master,? he cried, ?Padmé is a great mentor, as
    wise as Master Yoda and as powerful as Master Windu. I am truly thankful to be her apprentice,?

    Morgan smiled, ?I know, Skywalker. I have no doubt of her abilities?? She paused suddenly, ?You?re very devoted to her, I admire that but hooking up with me, Skywalker, you?ll learn there?s a lot more to being a great Jedi than simple knowledge of the Force,? Her smile slowly transformed into a frown as she glanced at the chrono. Captain Typho, Obi-Wan and I were already on our way to the dock for departure. ?Come young, Skywalker.?

    ~~

    ?Are you excited to be returning to Naboo??

    I heard a voice ask me as I stared out the window of our docking transport bus. I turned to the voice and smiled timidly, ?I?m sorry, m?lord. I was distracted??

    ?There?s no need to apologize,? he said and started to stand up as the transport docked. He grabbed a luggage and I took one as well. I glanced outside of the transport, looking for my Padawan and Sharr. I?d notified Anakin of the location of the transport; he should have been here by now unless Sharr prevented him from coming. I wouldn?t be surprised if she ?forgot? about me and went along with the mission without talking to me first.

    I shrugged and turned my attention to the Senator. He was saying goodbye to his bodyguard and another decoy. I smiled, how many men on Naboo looked like him? There couldn?t have been too many.

    ?Be safe, m?lord,? Captain Typho said, ?I know the Jedi will take care of you,?

    Ben smiled, ?Thank you, Captain. Take good care of Dormé... the threat's on
    you two now,?

    ?He'll be safe with me,? the handmaiden smiled. I watched as her face suddenly turned sour and she started to weep.

    ?You?ll be fine,? he assured her, bracing her shoulder.

    Dormé nodded, ? It's not me, M'lord. I worry about you. What happens when they realize you?ve left the capital??

    Obi-Wan turned briefly, smiled and then looked again at Dorme, ?Then my Jedi protector will have to prove how grown up she is,?

    I smiled, listening to the exchange as I scanned t
     
  22. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    ooooh!
    That was good!
    Nice work Aeryn!
    two posts in one week! we are spoiled readers...but we like it! ;) cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!
     
  23. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    more new posts soon :D

    ~aeryn
     
  24. Lady-Kenobi

    Lady-Kenobi Jedi Master star 3

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    I like how you introduced Morgan. I wonder if she and Anakin will become.....(well you know). Hope to see the Naboo chapter. Maybe we'll meet Ben's family?
     
  25. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    I like how you introduced Morgan. I wonder if she and Anakin will become.....(well you know).

    I was thinking about that, so it could happen, Lady ;)

    ~aeryn
     
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