Saga Clone Wars..Erie and Kree..and Maul

Ok people here is my fan fic..it takes place during teh clone wars...and please don't flame me to harshly....

The beginning of a new order
(This is my first Star Wars fan fic, this takes place during the clone wars)

The Jedi named Erie Monarch was new to the whole Jedi thing. He was just assigned his first Padawan. The young Padawan was a Kamino girl. With blue hair reaching her shoulders. Her jet black eyes were lovely on her smooth orange face. (She was some unknown race?though she was from Kamino. she might be related to the Jedi Plo-Koon) She was a lovely girl about 14 or so.

Now Erie was a tall skinny knight. His silver hair went perfect with his green alien skin. His narrow white eyes had strange markings all around them. He was also from an unknown race. His light saber?s hilt bared a resemblance to Mace Windu?s. except Erie?s blade was the color blue. Erie and his Padawan Kree Amot were assigned to guard the cloning facility on Kamino.

Erie walked down the hallway in the Jedi Temple. His boots met the floor with a thud as he stopped by a large door.
?Master Windu?? Erie asked.
The door slid open to reveal a tall Black man. He was bald and his eyes would make even the most skilled Knight cower in fear.
?Your ship is awaiting you, along with your apprentice Kree? Mace said closing the door.
?Alright?fine? Erie said dashing towards the hangar.
?Master!!? He heard the mature female voice of his apprentice yell.
The ship was inches above the ground about o take off. Erie leaped on the ship. His cloak waving behind him.
?Now Sir?? Asked the pilot of the ship.
?Yes Commander Cory?
?Alright Master Erie?
And with that the ship took off.

Kamino
( 5:30 P.M)

The ship landed on the docks. The rain hitting hard.
Erie put his hood on and leaped out. 3 clone troopers behind him and Kree.
A blast wizzed by them hitting the ship. In a hurry the ship lifted up and tried flying away. 3 Droids rolled up to them. Un packing them selves. The droids shields flared up and in an instant its blasters tore through the escaping ship. Erie drew his light Saber. Its blue blade escaped from the hilt. He swung it, barley penetrating the droids shield.
?Master!? Kree yelled her green blade leaped out. Kree had a very short fuse. If you made her angry she could be more powerful than a experienced Sith Lord. A blast landed at her feet, scaring her as she fell back wards. She tripped off the platform. The rain loosening her grabs at the side. She slid down fast. A clone trooper leaped over the side. His gloved hand reached out for her.

Grabbing his hand she felt safe. ?This Way Master Kree? The trooper yelled flinging her up to safety. The trooped fought against the rain but alas, risking his life for hers he fell into the dark ocean. Kree grabbed her Saber.

A battle droid snuck up on her. Realizing this she did a back flip hacking the druids head off. She grabbed its blaster and shot a vulnerable point of one of a shielded droid. The droid shut down. Satisfied, Erie raised his hand throwing one droid off the platform into the water.
?GO!!? The Clone trooper yelled escorting the Jedi to a safe room.
?Stay here please, the Droids have not made it IN here yet. We can probably hold them off with a basic Z maneuver? the Clone Trooper said.
?Until they break through our defend-? He was cut short by a blast from a few corridors away. The Commander ran across the white floor, flung the door open and ran out. Within minuets a Battle droid ran into the room.
?FREEZE? the droid yelled.
Kree glared at it. She drew her saber, in a flash it was blasted from her hand. Erie pushed Kree aside. And ran at the droid. His saber flew to his hands from his belt. The second it touched his hand it went through the droid?s neck. ?Young one I?m afraid-?
?IM NOT YOUNG!? Kree yelled grabbing her saber.
?You are but your temper says other wise?
?JUST SEE I AM GOING TO BECOME THE GREATEST JEDI-?
A grenade flew past her. It exploded sending her flying through the window of the room. Clamping on to an antenna on the building she loo

 

chapter 2 will be ready if you want it!!