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Beyond - Legends Completely Yours {An A/T 'Fic} *Chapter 22, May 18th, page 14* ~Gotta hate Alema!~

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Courtney_Solo, Dec 24, 2005.

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  1. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    An entertaining, and VERY different update! :p

    =D=
     
  2. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks, y'all!
    Hmmm, this is weird, I sent out PMs to everyone...
     
  3. Yoda-i_am

    Yoda-i_am Jedi Knight star 2

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    HA HA HA loved the interaction between Tahari and Riina Cant wait for the next one
     
  4. Jedi_Kassandra

    Jedi_Kassandra Jedi Knight star 1

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    Cool pictures, I love the coverart, and very interesting post!

    Sorry it took me so long...switching schools is time consuming.

    ~kass
     
  5. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks, y'all!
     
  6. tempestblue

    tempestblue Jedi Youngling

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    Thank you, Courtney![:D]

    For all these wonderful fics.:D
     
  7. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    :D Thank you for the compliment. Update should be up shortly.
     
  8. JediKnight_Padme

    JediKnight_Padme Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Just read this whole thing, Master! I really like it. Add me to your PM list? [face_praying]
     
  9. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Sure! :D Thank you for reading. :)
     
  10. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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      @};- Chapter 20 @};-


    "What is she doing in that thing?" Jacen remarked, concern for his sister-in-law showing in his voice.

    "It keeps her alive, husband. Without it, she would die in unconsciousness," Tenel Ka whispered.

    "So, if we wake her up, she'll be alright?" Tanner asked thoughtfully.

    "And how do you propose we do that?" Anakin muttered.

    "Does she wake up when she's angry?" Jacen asked, sounding all the more like he was going to say something dumb.

    "Sometimes..,"

    "So, give her an adrenaline rush,"

    "And how do you propose we do that? Toss her off a cliff?"

    "Hey, that's not a bad-"

    "Forget it, butt brain," Kyp laughed. "We're not tossing Anakin Solo's wife off a cliff to certain death."

    "Then how do we wake her up?" Jacen asked.
    His wife shook her head in amusement.

    "I'm willing to bet the machine has a switch that does just that," Tanner remarked.

    "So, how do we get to her?" Jacen asked softly.

    "We'll need a distraction," Jaina stated the obvious.

    "Yes," Anakin remarked.
    Everyone looked at Jacen with a semi-evil expression.

    "What?" He asked, oblivious. "Oh no..."




    Did you hear that?
    [i]Umm, no.[/i]
    Someone is calling my name!
    [i]That means you're waking up.[/i]
    Yes!
    [i]So, um, talk to you later.[/i]
    *mumbles*
    [i]Whatever. You'd better wake up quickly.[/i]
    Fine. Later...

    [hr]

    "Tahiri, you've got to wake up, quick!" Anakin hissed to his wife. "Come on, Angel, I'm here now. We can go home," He stroked her cheek, paling when she didn't move. "Come on, baby, don't leave me like this."

    [color=sienna]We've gotta go, kid.[/color]

    Anakin hoisted his wife up into his arms gently and Force-leapt onto the platform. "Let's go."

    [hr]

    "Sir!"
    Nom Anor turned around abruptly, and the young human soldier gulped.
    The Yuuzhan Vong spy was always a terrifying sight.

    "What is it?" Nom Anor asked gruffly.

    "There are no passengers aboard the freighter."

    "Ahh," [i]They think they can get away with a rescue attempt.[/i] "Where is Tahiri Veila?"

    "She's still in place," the guard said in confusion.

    "Augh!" Nom Anor became frustrated. "This ship is not the onee we've been looking for. Rar tricked me into wasting my time. Continue your search! And dump the freighter, it is worthless." Anor turned around, and the guard left.

    [hr]

    "They're preparing the jettison our freighter with the rest of the garbage. If we hurry, we can even slip away unnoticed," Jaina said, helping Anakin carry Tahiri. "We have to run!"

    "Why won't she wake up?" Anakin muttered, his great concern for his wife growing.

    "Quick! Get on!" Kyp exclaimed softly. He helped his wife on first, followed by Anakin, who was carrying Tahiri, Jacen, Tenel Ka, and Tanner. The second the hatch closed, all the trash plus the vessel was jettisoned into space. Kyp let the stardestroyer get about one fourth of a par sec away before starting the engine and zooming off towards Yavin IV.

    [hr]

    Anakin stroked his wife's hair gently. "The last time I felt like this; it was our wedding day, and Nom Anor and Alema had been up to no good. Do you remember?" Tahiri remained unconscious. "I see that your wounds have healed. I'm glad. I was worried about you, Angel," No response. Anakin lay his head on his wife's shoulder, looking up into her face. "I'm still worried."

    Anakin heard a baby's cry in the back of his mind.
    He sat upright and looked around; no one else had seemed to have heard.
    Suddenly, Tahiri jolted awake with a gasp.
    Anakin gathered her tenderly in his arms, holding her close.
    "Owen!" She exclaimed, her arms wrapped around her husband tightly. Anakin paled. "Ani, we need to check on our son."
    She whispered in his ear. Right then, he didn't hear her. He was too relieved to have her alive.
    He held her to his chest and kissed her for all he was worth.

    [hr]

    [b][u]Missing:[/b][/u]

    [i]Owen Solo (3 Months old)
    Allana Solo (2 years old)
    Ben Skywalker (14 years old)
    Adonie Secura (20 years old).[/i]
     
  11. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Tahiri's safe and awake but the kids are missing now? :eek: Oh dear...


    Good update. :)
     
  12. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Force Ghost star 4

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    :eek: The kiddies have gone missing, eh? Not good.

    Glad to see Tahiri awake though. :)

    Nice update. Looking forward to the next.
     
  13. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Aiii! I'm back! :p
    Thanks, y'all!
    The next uppie should come soon enough... :D
     
  14. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Ookay, so I'm TRYING to post Chapter 21, and TF.N isn't letting me.
    Grr. I am quite frustrated.
    Oh, well. I'll try again later.
    Even though I've tried over 5 times.

    C @};- S
     
  15. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    I'm sorry about the triple post, but here's the update:

    Chapter 21

    C @};- S

    PS: Please R & R here. :)
     
  16. SWpants

    SWpants Force Ghost star 5

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    Great update! Oh boy, Anakin & Tahiri aren't going to react well to the threat to the kids. The Ben/Allana team was great, she's so cute
     
  17. Jedi-Ant

    Jedi-Ant Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ooh! They're in trouble now!!!

    :eek:

    [face_worried]

    Just when I thought they were going to escape, you go and end the chapter like that!

    Evil [face_devil] Courtney!


    And the way Ben helped Allana out was really cute. :D


    Thanks for the PM!


    Ant. ]-}
     
  18. Jedi_Kassandra

    Jedi_Kassandra Jedi Knight star 1

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    Oooh, that was a nastie cliffie. Great chapter, and thanx for the pm.

    ~kass
     
  19. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Force Ghost star 4

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    Glad to see Tahiri awake. =D= Now they can find the kids. Hopefully. [face-praying]


    Great work. =D=
     
  20. Stormtrooper_TK-421

    Stormtrooper_TK-421 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Great update! Loved seeing Nom Anor, and I liked Alema actually doing evil things when she's on the dark side instead of just dressing skimpier. :p And the kids were good, too.

    Thanks for the PM! :)
     
  21. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Interesting... loved the journal entry and the "I'm Sorry" kidnapping letter.


    Good post. :) (would have replyed sooner, but missed the link...)
     
  22. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks, y'all!
    For some reason, TF.n hates me.
    I hope next time I post it'll actually show up, lol.
     
  23. PrincessBrookSolo

    PrincessBrookSolo Jedi Youngling star 2

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    that was cute master I like the last post with everyones thoughts oh there you are TK Thats me again moron LOL that part made me fall out of my chair[face_laugh] more soon mesa hopes [face_praying] :D
     
  24. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Did you see the link to Chapter 21?
     
  25. PrincessBrookSolo

    PrincessBrookSolo Jedi Youngling star 2

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