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Before - Legends Conflicting Closeness ~ Anakin Skywalker poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Sgath, May 25, 2004.

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  1. Sgath

    Sgath Jedi Youngling

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    Disclaimer: don't own SW and I'm not making money of this.

    -_-_-_-


    Conflicting Closeness


    Out on the border
    Every endless night
    I lie awake alone
    Dreaming of demanding dreams
    Of immortality and infamy


    Luring lurid dawn
    Sweet Sadness
    Unified Emptiness


    Fiery fires of my soul?s
    Deadly dear emotions
    Uncontrolled I wait
    Alone and crowded with thoughts
    Of times past never to come again


    Lighten my darkened shade
    Angelic darkness
    Divine depravity


    -_-_-_-
     
    Sgath, May 25, 2004
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  2. AnakinsHeir

    AnakinsHeir Jedi Youngling star 3

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    May 2, 2004
    Beautifully written! I loved it, your language was lyrical and touching. Wonderful!
     
    AnakinsHeir, May 25, 2004
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  3. Layren

    Layren Jedi Master star 5

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    Oct 28, 2003
    Very very well done! beautiful language and imagery.
     
    Layren, May 25, 2004
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  4. Sgath

    Sgath Jedi Youngling

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    AnakinsHeir: Thanks :) Lyrica is what I do best. I can rhyme...only just once or twice in a year ;)

    Layren: My thanks to you too! The imagery was actually kind of hard. I had to keep it real...even for a little ;)
     
    Sgath, May 25, 2004
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