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Before - Legends Contentment - Drabble - For the First Sentence Challenge, AU, Qui-Gon

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Jinngerbread, Feb 9, 2009.

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  1. Jinngerbread

    Jinngerbread Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sep 2, 2007
    Title: Contentment
    Author: Jinngerbread
    Characters: You'll just have to see.
    Author's Notes: This was written for the first sentence challenge. Enjoy!





    It was always messy cleaning up after a murder.

    The smells of ozone, the grisly corpse with lightsaber markings, the look of confusion, of horror, on the victim's face, but those were not his concern.

    His only concern was that justice had been served at last.

    He felt relieved, as if a weight had been lifted from his shoulders and now that this one was dead, he could sleep peacefully knowing that his former apprentice could no longer haunt his dreams.

    The betrayal had left him weakened and wounded, but no more.

    And Qui-Gon Jinn was at last at peace.
     
  2. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Feb 5, 2004
    The betrayal had left him weakened and wounded, but no more.

    And Qui-Gon Jinn was at last at peace.


    Loved it! =D=
     
  3. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Master star 4

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    Mar 27, 2004


    Very interesting first sentence, or rather the second. The look of confusion and horror on the victims face. If Qui-Gon is at peace because his former Apprentice can disturb his dreams no more.
    Why the look of confusion and horror? Mysterious[face_thinking]

    Or perhaps that person didn't expect to be beaten by Qui-Gon.o_O

    I liked it.=D=
     
  4. Ara-gon

    Ara-gon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Dec 31, 2005
    Lovely! Haunting description in such a spare form.

    (See, I made it!)

    Ara-Gon
     
  5. ardavenport

    ardavenport Jedi Master star 4

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    Dec 16, 2004
    Oooh, very dark and mysterious. Peace is messy. [face_mischief]
     
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