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"Corellian Dreamer" AU (COMPLETE)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Matthew_Wolverine, Dec 28, 2002.

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  1. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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  2. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Chapter IX

    New Republic Intelligence Director Dif Scaur discovered that Senator Shesh was acting as a spy for Admiral Daala, and she was arrested and charged with treason. During interrogation, she told them about Daala?s plan to attack Yavin 4. The Fleet immediately began to mobilize. Daala would be in for a nasty surprise when she arrived at Yavin 4.

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    When the Scylla arrived at Hapes, Admiral Daala had Jaina and Kyp transferred to a cell on the planet while Tenel Ka remained onboard Scylla. Daala knew that there was strength in numbers and she thought that if the three Jedi were kept together they might manage to escape. She couldn?t have that.

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    Isolder was escorted to the Queen?s Throne Room by two royal guards. He knew what was coming. Daala probably had figured out what he had done. When he entered the Throne Room, Daala and the Sith Lady were waiting. The guards left and closed the doors behind them.

    Daala: ?I warned you that there would be severe consequences if you disobeyed me.?

    Isolder: ?Forgive me Your Highness. Please don?t kill me.?

    Daala: ?Oh, I won?t kill you. Lady Strega will take care of that.?

    Isolder felt an invisible fist closing around his heart.

    The Hapan people were told that Isolder had a heart attack. Which was true from a certain point of view.

    A few days later, Admiral Daala and Lady Strega returned to Daala?s flagship Scylla and made a hyperspace jump to Phindar to join the large fleet that was amassing there.

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    Shortly after the Scylla departed from Hapes, Jaina Solo and Kyp Durron escaped. After first breaking out of their cell, they fought their way past all of the Hapan guards. They were still handcuffed together at the wrist but they worked together in perfect synchronization. They disarmed all of the guards by using their telekinesis to pull their blasters out of their hands. Next they Force shoved the guards out of the way. Then they made their way to the hangar and stole a Lambda-class shuttle, but their ship was damaged and they were forced to make a crash landing in a forest.


     
  3. Matthew_Wolverine

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  4. Sara_Kenobi

    Sara_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 7

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    Isolder went in a hard way. 8-}




    That was another wonderful post Mathew! Keep it coming! :)
     
  5. Matthew_Wolverine

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  6. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Chapter X

    When their stolen shuttle crashed into the forest, Jaina and Kyp were somewhat bruised and banged up, but both were fortunate enough to avoid sustaining any really serious injuries. However, all of the ship?s instruments were pretty much destroyed including the communications so they couldn?t call for help. But even if they could by doing so they might alert the Hapans to the fact that they weren?t dead. As long as the Hapans believed they were dead they wouldn?t have to worry about any further pursuit. They exited the wrecked ship.

    Jaina: ?So what do we do now??

    Kyp: ?We should lay low for a while. Then after we?ve had some time to recover our strength we could go back and try to steal another ship.?

    Jaina: ?Ok. Sounds like a good plan.?

    Kyp: ?Now we need to find something to eat and see if we can find some fresh water.?

    They found a creek nearby and used a container from the shuttle to bring some water back to their campsite. And then they turned their attention to finding something they could eat. There was a bush of berries nearby but they were poisonous. Eventually, they came across a large snake. Unfortunately for the snake, instead of fleeing like it should have done, it was very aggressive and tried to attack them. Jaina used the Force to bestill its beating heart. Then they started a small fire and cooked the snake. Then they began to eat, but they had some difficulty doing that because they were still handcuffed together. Jaina only had her right hand free and Kyp only had his left hand free. Whenever either wanted to use their other hand they had to have the cooperation of the other. After they finished their meal, they went to sit by the fire and talk. They had found a log and placed it by the fire so they would have something to sit on. Kyp sat down and Jaina started to sit down next to him, but as she was walking by she tripped on a limb and fell into Kyp?s lap. He instinctively caught her.

    Jaina: ?Let go.?

    Kyp: ?What are you getting upset at me for? You fell and I caught you.?

    Jaina: ?I can see you?re enjoying it.?

    Kyp: ?So what if I am? You?re the one who sat on my lap. Maybe you fell on purpose.?

    The two stared angrily at each other for a few seconds and then kissed. For a long long time.
     
  7. Crimson_Sabre

    Crimson_Sabre Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Well, needless to say, I owe you about 5 ups for that *ahem* little excursion you took to the JC Election boards, so I'll get started right now.

    And, it doesn't hurt a bit that Kyp Durron is my favorite character, does it? I certainly wouldn't mind being handcuffed to Jaina... would you? [face_devil]
     
  8. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Nope. Wouldn't mind at all. :)
     
  9. Kyp_side_of_TheForce

    Kyp_side_of_TheForce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I love that 'for a long time'... really adds something :p
    MMMMMMMMMMOOOOOORRRRREEEEE??????????????????
     
  10. Deneveon

    Deneveon Jedi Master star 4

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    Wow! I like! :D You have a new reader!

    More soon?

    --Den
     
  11. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thanks. And here's more.

    Chapter XI

    The Imperial fleet exited hyperspace just outside of the Yavin system. Their plan was to catch the Jedi and the Republic by surprise and destroy the Jedi Academy on Yavin 4. However, things obviously were not going according to plan. They were greeted by a large Republic fleet.

    Admiral Daala: ?Damn you Shesh!?

    Lady Strega: ?She has betrayed us.?

    Daala: ?No. I think the foolish woman allowed herself to be caught.?

    Strega: ?And she lacked the willpower to resist their interrogation??

    Daala: ?Yes, I think that?s exactly what happened. I never should have depended on her.?

    Strega: ?We will still be victorious.?

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    Luke Skywalker, who was onboard the New Republic Star Destroyer Bail Organa, was glad that they had gotten an advanced warning about the attack and been able to evacuate Ben and the rest of the Jedi children on Booster Terrik?s Errant Venture. Mara had went with them. On the forward viewport he saw Admiral Daala?s flagship Scylla. He sensed two strong Force presences onboard the Scylla. The young Dathomirian Jedi Tenel Ka and a Sith witch. Jacen Solo also sensed them. Luke informed General Garm Bel Iblis fleet that there was a Jedi being held captive onboard the Scylla, and Iblis instructed the fleet to disable the Imperial flagship. Then Luke organized a rescue mission. Jacen would go to the detention area and rescue Tenel Ka while he confronted the Sith.

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    Onboard the Millenium Falcon; which was flying in formation with the Republic fleet; Han, Chewie, Leia, Anakin, and Tahiri Veila looked out the forward viewport at the Imperial fleet. Anakin and Tahiri sensed the same thing that Luke and Jacen had sensed.

    Tahiri: ?Tenel Ka is being held prisoner onboard their flagship.?

    Han: ?Is Jaina there??

    Anakin: ?No. She and Kyp must be somewhere else.?

    Anakin and Tahiri went back to the gun turrets as the Falcon entered the fight.
    Almost immediately Anakin blew up a TIE interceptor. Tahiri blew up another interceptor almost simultaneously. Then they were surrounded by four more interceptors and a pair of TIE defenders. Tahiri lined up one of the interceptors in her sights and fired. It was destroyed. Anakin destroyed another interceptor. But that still left four enemies that they had to deal with. Han and Chewie?s skilled flying had allowed them to avoid enemy fire so far but they wouldn?t be able to keep that up indefinitely. Suddenly, both defenders burst into flames. Two X-wings had come to the Falcon?s aid.

    Corran Horn: ?Face and I thought you could use some help Han.?

    Han: ?Thanks.?

    Face Loran: ?No problem. We were bored. ?

    Corran destroyed another interceptor. Anakin targeted the final interceptor and fired. It avoided his shot but its escape vector took it directly into the path of Tahiri?s lasers.

    Han: ?You got him!?
     
  12. Matthew_Wolverine

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  13. Kyp_side_of_TheForce

    Kyp_side_of_TheForce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Face is always bored :p
    unless he's pranking :p
    I like :D
     
  14. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    lol

    He is, isn't he. :)

    And thanks.
     
  15. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Chapter XII

    Jaina Solo was awoken by the light of the morning sun shining in her eyes. Kyp was already awake, and was grinning like a Cheshire cat.

    Kyp: ?Good morning, Goddess.?

    Jaina: ?Good morning. And what are you smiling at??

    Kyp: ?You.?

    Jaina: ?Why??

    Kyp: ?Because you?re beautiful.?

    Jaina: ?I love you.?

    Kyp: ?I know.?

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    The Imperial fleet was reeling. They had been unprepared to face such a formidable force and they were losing badly. Their flagship Scylla had been disabled, its weapons and engines rendered totally useless. Much of the fleet had been destroyed. Those ships that were still functional were attempting to flee. It was a decisive victory for the Republic.

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    Luke and Jacen boarded the Scylla. They were met by a squad of stormtroopers. The two Jedi dispatched them quickly. Then Jacen headed to the detention area to find Tenel Ka, and Luke went to confront the Sith. When Jacen reached the detention area, he encountered another squad of stormtroopers. He deflected their blaster shots back at them, taking out several. Then he sliced and diced his way through the remaining troopers. Finally, he found Tenel Ka?s cell.
    He sliced through the door and entered the room, deactivating his lightsaber. Tenel Ka smiled at him.

    Tenel Ka: ?Long time no see, Stranger.?

    Jacen: ?Yeah. You okay??

    Tenel Ka: ?Fact.?

    Then she kissed him.
     
  16. Kyp_side_of_TheForce

    Kyp_side_of_TheForce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    lots of mush... awwwww.... nice...
     
  17. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Glad you like it. Thought you would. :)
     
  18. Kyp_side_of_TheForce

    Kyp_side_of_TheForce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    more soon??????
     
  19. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Soon. I've wrote half of the next chapter. Just have to finish the other half.
     
  20. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Chapter XIII

    Luke sensed the Sith before he saw her. She had been attempting to sneak up on him. But he felt a sordid, vulgar, repulsive essence that alerted him to her approach. He turned to face her. She was strikingly beautiful. A little taller than him with gorgeous long black hair, brown eyes, and bronze skin. And a perfect body. Too perfect in fact. Obi-Wan Kenobi had told him many years ago not to trust his eyes because they could deceive him. In this case, it was his eyes themselves that were being deceived. She was using her darkside powers to create an illusion of beauty. But by using the Force, Luke was able to see through her illusion. Her true appearance was as hideous as her outward appearance was beautiful. Obviously, the darkside had ravaged her body like a vicious disease just like it had done to Emperor Palpatine. But unlike him, she chose to disguise her appearance. Luke imagined that Palpatine probably could have done the same if he had wanted to. It reminded Luke of an old holodrama he had seen once where an ugly old witch used magic to make herself appear beautiful. She smiled at him malevolently.

    Then she attacked him with bolts of Force Lightning. Luke blocked her attack with his lightsaber, and deflected the lethal bolts back at her feet. The floor where she had been standing a moment before was scorched black.

    Lady Strega: ?Impressive, Master Skywalker. Let?s see how you handle this.?

    Next she attempted to Force Squeeze Luke?s heart. Utilizing his own mastery of the Force, he easily repelled the attack.

    Luke: ?Did you seriously think that would work??

    In response she used her telekinesis to hurl her lightsaber at Luke like a spear. He shoved it aside with a gesture. She used the Force to cause her lightsaber to return to her hand.

    Then she reignited her lightsaber and the duel began. She leaped in fury and unleashed her vengeful attack. Their lightsabers clashed. She fought ferociously, with intensity and skill that would have overwhelmed a lesser Jedi, but Luke parried every blow. She grew frustrated and desperate. So she attempted to gain an advantage by using her telekinesis to hurl a large metal container at the back of Luke?s head but he sensed it and used his own telekinesis to redirect the projectile towards her. It hit her and she fell and lost her grip on her lightsaber. It skidded across the floor. She kicked up and did a backflip to put some distance between herself and Luke.

    Strega: ?You?ve won this battle Skywalker but we will fight again and next time you will die.?

    Then she fled but she stopped to retrieve her lightsaber from where it had came to rest. But as she reached for it, the lightsaber moved away from her into the shadows of a darkened corridor. She was perplexed by this and wondered what was happening. But before she could figure out the mystery she felt her own lightsaber plunge into her heart. Then Tenel Ka stepped out of the shadows. The last words
    Strega ever heard were:

    ?You killed my mother. You die now. Fact.?

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  21. Matthew_Wolverine

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  22. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    up, up, and away
     
  23. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Epilogue:

    The New Republic was victorious. The Imperial fleet was decimated. A few ships escaped but the rest were either destroyed or captured. It was almost a complete victory for the Republic. However, they failed to capture Admiral Daala. She somehow managed to slip through their fingers and escape.

    After Luke, Jacen, and Tenel Ka returned to the Bail Organa, she filled Luke and the others in on the Hapan situation and that Jaina and Kyp were being held prisoner there. The fleet went to Hapes. Hapes was liberated from Imperial control and Tenel Ka became the new Queen Mother. Jaina and Kyp were found and rescued.


    THE END for now

    TO BE CONTINUED


     
  24. Kyp_side_of_TheForce

    Kyp_side_of_TheForce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Those were really good :)
    I liked Tenel Ka's ending :)
     
  25. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thanks. I was going to paraphrase Inigo Montoya(from The Princess Bride); "You killed my mother. Prepare do die", repeat, repeat; but I ended up doing it a bit differently.


     
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