SWRPF Archive corruption:a cloud city rpg.

this rpg takes place 500 years after rotj on cloud city.
read my bio for the story details.

rules are:
no godmodding
no cussing
be fair

And the story is small so it can easily be built apon.

Name:triin galin
Age:23
gender:male
Race:human
Home World:cloud city
Religion:none
Fraction:revolutionary
Equipment:basic machine blaster.
bio:triin was abandoned by his parents when he was a baby.Found by a revolutionary leader,he was told of the greed of the cloud city gov.drug dealers,spice smugglers,and thugs have struck deals with the city to have the officials look the other way while the sell thier wares and do other buseness.this has coused them to have the power and have turned the once beutiful cloud city into a city of corruption.triin vows to take down the standing government and start cloud city anew.

I think you need rules and more storyline.

OOC: I agree, this won't be here any longer...try to find a better storyline and write up more rules and instructions to make it professional.

MAGAX_DESTROYER