Story [Criminal Minds] Light to my Soul - Morgan/Garcia. Post: 01-05!

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  1. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    Title: Light to my Soul Author: Jade eyes Disclaimer: Borrowing with love.

    AN: This pairing -- woohoo! He reminds me of Kyp for some strange reason =P~ and she just -- rocks. Big mega time.

    Genre: Could be AU, but I hope not. LOL Mushy, alternating POVs.

    Note: Wiki or Google the show ;)

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    Derek

    To say Penelope is brilliant -- empathic -- and blamboyant - would be stating the obvious. She has been an integral part of so many solves and her determined optimism has definitely kept us all grounded.

    Did she ever, did I even know, that our flirting repartee might hold a hint, a promise of more?

    [face_thinking]

    We never got her balloons shaped like bears or candy to cheer her up; we never thought she needed it. One day, though, I just happened to run into her outside a Starbucks and noticed it was about to pour down rain.

    "I left my umbrella at the community theater."

    I decided to walk her to her car and then when we got there, she smiled and her phone buzzed with a page.

    "Old friend coming into town ... I don't want to answer this ..." She deleted the "missed call" alert.

    I felt a sudden pang. She had been having an on-off relationship with a colleague... It wasn't any of my concern, but I wanted her to smile and she was frowning.

    I asked if she wanted to talk; I could follow her home ...

    She was surprised but agreed.

    +++++

    TBC and yumsy! [face_love]
  2. Mira_Jade The NSWFF Manager With The Cape

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    Oh, how cool to see you branching out with another fandom! I know you have mentioned this a time or two, so I am psyched to see fic to follow. [face_dancing]

    This is definitely an adorable couple, one I hope to see more of in canon, but, until then, this fic looks to be loads of fun. Their 'voices' already look to be spot on, and I can't wait for more. :)
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  3. Hazel Force Ghost

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    I love Criminal Minds :D and I love this couple. I'm glad you decided to tackle it. [:D]
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  4. Master_Jaina1011 Force Ghost

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    OMG Deb you're writing Criminal Minds!!! And one of my favorite ships to boot! I love these two! You did them so well!!!

    Seriously flailing right now!
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  5. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    Morgan's brief foray into whatever with Agent Todd and mine with ... [face_sigh] I liked the feeling of having feelings more than needed the one I was with. [face_thinking] Morgan always took me seriously; made me feel smart and feminine all without losing a bit of professionalism. I like helping victims' families, makes me feel like I'm giving back and healing them and keeping myself sane and hopeful. Sometimes, it's a conscious choice to be as vivacious as I am. I feel like with Derek, I have permission to be every kind of me there is, and I'll still be accepted. :) So, even though I won't necessarily ask him to stay for breakfast [face_laugh] today, I definitely want to start on that particular journey. I have a feeling 60-70 years down the road, we'll pass off the scene together as tenderly as the couple in Nick Sparks's The Notebook. [face_shhh] Yes, I read that one.

    +++++

    Fin on that positive note.

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