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Dance of The SugarPlum Jedi(Add on..humor)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Uisceban, Oct 24, 2000.

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  1. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    That was great!
    This is only a short bit too.
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    "See ya" called Ki-an.

    "Hey do you think she will actually ask Obi-wan out?" she asked Kadi
     
  2. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Kadi thought for a moment. She didn't know how she felt about her friend asking her brother out. It was..weird.

    "I have no clue. Probably." Kadi grinned at her friend. "She has always had a way of doing what you least suspect.
     
  3. Katie_B_Potter

    Katie_B_Potter Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Ca'layka headed towards the Infirmary. Obi-wan was most likely there.

    _Okay Ca'layka you can do this. If you don't ask him someone else most likely will plus you don't want to ask someone you hardly know._

    She walked into the infirmary.

    "Hi, is Obi-wan here?" she asked Master Taka. (is this the right name?)

    "Yeah he's in the other room. Got burnt during sparring." he added at her puzzled look. "You can go in if you like."

    Obi-wan looked up as she entered the room.

    "Oh hi Ca'layka. What brings you here?"

    "Um I just needed to ask you something." The healer that was applying the bacta patch casually walked out of the room.

    "Is something the matter?" Obi-wan asked.

    "Oh no, I was just wondering if you're going to the Dance with anyone."

    Obi-wan, looking puzzled, shook his head.

    "Well, " _just do it Cal!_ "would you go to it with me?"

    Obi-wan's look of puzzlement turned into a look of surprise. "Me go with you?"

    "Sorry ,it was a bad idea, just forget it." Ca'layka said as she turned towards the door.

    "Wait Cal! It'll be fun. I'd love to go with you."

    A wide grin spread across Ca'layka's face.

    "Great!" she said. Then she turned and walked out of the Infirmary.

    _I've got to tell Kadi and Ki-an!_
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    What do you think?
     
  4. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I loved that! "Me go with you?"
    good job.
    I think i'm going to introduce Chogaigh in my next post but 'im not sure.
     
  5. Katie_B_Potter

    Katie_B_Potter Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I'm glad you liked it.
    Sorry but who's Chogaigh again?
    Post asap!!
     
  6. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Chogaigh is one of the male pawdawans. He has been friends with Ki-an for awhile and he is friends with Obi.

    He is just back from a mission with his master(haven't decided on his name yet)

    I was thinking that either Ki-an would have a crush on him and she doesn't want to ask him out( too nervous) or the he has a crush on her.

     
  7. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Chogaigh wasn't bothered that it was the girls asking the boys out this year. It should be fun he thought. He wasn't particularly worried about who could ask him out either. He paused by the mirror on the wall as he going out of the room. As he flicked his hands through his hair, his master suddenly called out," Chogaigh, I hope you have the preparation work done for our next mission"

    Chogaigh sighed "Yea" they were hardly back from one mission and they were being sent out on another.
    He walked out towards the centre of the gardens, he seen a group of male and female pawdawans he knew and was just walking over to them when he stopped mid stride. Smiling he went over to where he saw Ki-an and her friend talking.

    "Hey scruff"
    Ki-an whirled round to see who called her that and when she saw Chogaigh she just glared at him. Chogaigh burst out laughing at her, then noticing Kadi he said,
    "You must be Obi-wan' twin sister, let me say you are much better looking then he is" He then swiftly bowed before her and whispered "I would kiss you on the hand only that too many people are looking"

    Ki-an rolled her eyes at him behind his back while Kadi was trying not to laugh.
    "Chogaigh stop acting like you have the brains of a nerf and get up," Ki-an hissed.

    Chogaigh got up slowly grinning the whole time. "I just came over to tell you I have the files you were looking for and to come over whenever my master's not about to get them"
    Seeing her slight confusion he added, "He's going through another mid-life crisis either that or he's worried everyone will notice that he's started wearing a wig"

    His gaze wandered over to the other group of pawdawans, one of the female pawdawans turned round and beckoned him over.

    "Ladies I must leave you", he said over dramatically and Ki-an looked as if she were about to kill him.

    He started over confidently to the bunch of pawdawans and immediately began talking to them.

    Ki-an again rolled her eyes and muttered under her breath "Self assured Jerk"
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    You like?



     
  8. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Just upping this
     
  9. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I definitely liked it.
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    Kadi watched as Chogaigh walk over to the group, an eyebrow raised.

    "Ok, that was really weird." She said, then turned to Ki-An. "Is he always that crazy?"

    "Mmmmhhhmmm." Ki-An smiled.

    "So, who are you going to ask out?" Kadi asked, still keeping her eyes on Chogiagh. Maybe she would ask him out.

    Just then, Cal rushed in. She looked very excited.

    "You will never guess what just happened!" She exclaimed, pausing for a moment. Kadi and Ki-An shrugged, exchanging a confused look. "Obi-Wan is going to the dance with me!"

    Kadi's jaw hit the ground.

    "Thats great!" Ki-An excalimed.

    "You did what?!" Kadi exclaimed. Her friends both gave her weird looks. "Obi-Wan?? My best friend and brother? That's just, just.."

    "Kadi, calm down. There's nothing to worry about."

    "Nothing to worry about! This is my twin we're talking about!" Kadi wasn't sure why she was acting this way. She had known that they kind of liked each other. But it felt weird now. "I'll catch up with you guys later. See ya." With that, she ran out of the room. Ki-An shook her head. Cal let out an exasperated sigh.

    Sometimes they weren't too sure about that girl.

     
  10. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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  11. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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  12. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    This is just a short post with loads of spelling mistakes. Sorry.
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    Ki-an turned to Cal and shrugged her shoulders.
    "Okay tonight you have to call me, tell me what you said, what he said, I want to know everything"

    Cal laughed at her "Sure, whatever"

    Suddenly Ki-an jumped. "Shoot, I forgot I go to go find my Master, She's in charge of the Decorating commitee."

    "What?!" Cal looked horrified.
    But Ki-an was already running down the hallway. "See ya later," She shouted back.

    Ki-an skidded to a halt as she turned the corner. Her Master had Qui-gon pinned. This time, she decided, I'll rescue him.

    She walked slowly up to them trying to regain her breath. Master Teara went mad when she caught pawdawans running in the halls.

    "Uh, um, excuse me"

    Both Masters turned round, Teara looked irriated and Qui-gon looked relieved.

    "What is it Ki-an?
    "Um, Master Mace told me to tell you that your on the Decorating commitee."

    Horror slowly dawned on Tearas face.

    "I'll see you later" Teara said sweetly to Qui-gon before running off down the halls.

    Ki-an fidegeted nervously,(What do I say now)

    Qui-gon too was trying to think what to say (How do I thank her for saving my life)

    He smiled down at her and Ki-an nearly fell out of her standing. She was getting very nervous fast.

    "Um, I have to be somewhere" she mumbled and scutteled down the hall. Qui-gon looked after her with a bemused look on his face.
     
  13. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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  14. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL!!!
    (By the way, there weren't any spelling mistakes. That I saw anyway. just thought you'd like to know.)

    Katie is going to try to post later on.

     
  15. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks, I thought I would have lots because I didn't bother Spell check it.:)

    Yippeee!! looking forward to that.
     
  16. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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  17. Katie_B_Potter

    Katie_B_Potter Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Okay I don't really know what to post so this will be short.
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    Ca'lyaka couldn't believe she'd just gone through with that.
    _I actually asked him!_ she felt like screaming and jumping with joy.
    Then as an after thought.
    _WHAT AM I GONNA WEAR!_
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    Sorry it's so short.

     
  18. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Obi-Wan looked up in surprise as a large banging suddenly started on his door. He let out a groan. Kadi had found out.

    "Come in Kadi." He called.

    "HOW COULD YOU!!!!" His twin yelled, bursting into the room.

    "Kadi, calm down." He said, standing up.

    "Calm down? CALM DOWN? You are going out with one of my best friends and you want me to CALM DOWN!" She screamed in his face.

    "We aren't going out. We are just friends. Nothing more. I promise." He said calmly, grabbing her arms and staring her in the eyes. She stared at him a moment, catching her breath.

    "Ok, I'm sorry. I'm calm." She said, then began to pace for a moment. Suddenly she stopped and spun around.

    "What are you going to wear?!?!"

    "Excuse me?"

    "If you and Cal are going out, you are going to look your best."

    "Um....Kadi..."

    "Don't worry, I'll take care of everything."
    She turned and walked out of the room, continuing to mumble. "Lets see, a dress, purple would be perfect. Pressed robes..." Her voice faded away as she left their quarters.

    Obi-Wan sat down with another groan.
     
  19. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Great post?s guys!! Woohoo. I?m kind a lost on what to do next.
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    As Chogaigh headed towards Obi-wans quarters he suddenly bumped into Kadi, knocking her over.

    ?Sorry, I didn?t see you?, he said and then offered her his hand to help her up.
    ?Are you after coming from Obi?s, my lady?, he asked as he pulled her up.
    Kadi smiled slowly, ?Yea, he still there if you want to talk to him?

    Choghaigh smiled back at her ?I?ll catch you later?

    They both walked off in the opposite directions and Chogaigh couldn?t help but look back. (Woah, she is cute.)
    ****
    Obi groaned as he was once more interrupted by loud banging.
    ?What? he yelled.
    Without answering Chogaigh entered.
    ?Oh its you?
    ?Is that anyway to say hello? Chogaigh responded.

    Obi responded by throwing a book at him.
    ?So are you going to the dance with anyone yet?? Chogaigh inquired.
    ?Yea, Cal, one of Kadi?s friends.What about you??
    Chogaigh looked thoughtful for a moment. ?Nope don?t know her.?

    ?Oh, I met your sister, you never told me she was so cute.? Chogaigh said.

    ?No!?
    ?No what??
    ?No you?re not asking her out!?, Obi all but shouted.

    ?Don?t worry I?m not,? Chogaigh responded innocently.
    Obi looked relieved for a moment.
    ?I?m hoping she will ask me out? he then continued mischeivously.

    Obi promtly gave him a dig into the ribs.
    ?What was that for??, Chogaigh asked rubbing the bruised spot.

    ?You know what for?, Obi growled.
    Chogaigh stood uop and sniffed, ?I know when I?m not wanted and was exiting when Obi called out again, ?You better not ask her out.?

    ?Don?t worry, I won?t? Chogaigh yelled and ducked as a pillow flew his way.

    Just ignore this post if it mess?s up what you wanted to do.

     
  20. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    No,that was great! It helped actually.
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    Kadi stared down at her plate as she thought about the dance.

    "Something happen today Padawan?" Her Master asked.

    "Huh, what? Oh, sorry Master. What did you say?"

    "Kadi, your mind is wandering again. What's bothering you?"

    "You know the dance?"

    "Mmmhhhmmm. I'm thinking about asking Mace Windu. If I can find him." Kadi stifled a laugh. Thinking back, she couldn't remember seeing any of the male Jedi around today.

    "Good luck. Ki-An's master is going after Qui-Gon."

    "Have you invited Ki-An and Calayka if they want to join us yet?"

    "Yep. They're both coming, along with their Masters." Kadi looked back down at her plate.

    "What is it?" Her Master pushed.

    "There's someone I to ask, but I'm not sure how without making a fool of myself."

    "Just say whatever comes. Be yourself and he won'tble to say no." She said with a smile. Kadi couldn't help but laugh.

    ***** The Next Day*****

    Kadi looked around the garden. Chogaigh was here somewhere.

    "Hey Kadi!" She spun around to see him walking over to her. She took a deep breath.

    Ok Kad, just ask.

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    Next!




     
  21. Valiowk

    Valiowk Chosen One star 6

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    Oh man... I seriously wonder if Kadi's Master can find Mace Windu *giggle giggle*

    I can't stop myself from laughing my head off!!! Yoda must have taken into account that no one's gonna ask *him* out!!! Or is anyone? ;)
     
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  22. Katie_B_Potter

    Katie_B_Potter Jedi Youngling star 1

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    You made a good point about no one asking Yoda out. So here's my next post. *giggles*
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    Yoda hobbled down the corridor trying in vain to escape his pursurer. He glanced back and saw that Yaddle was still only feet behind.

    "Yoda! Ask a question of you I must!" Yaddle practically screamed.

    Yoda knew what that question would be.

    _Start this dance I should have not!_

    Finding himself tiring and feeling that Yaddle would not give up, he finally stopped.

    "Help you can I?" Yoda asked innocently.

    "Yes. Go to the dance with me you will." she replied making it more of a statement then a question.

    "Not will I."

    "Your idea this dance was, go you must."

    "No."

    "Torture all the male jedi you have, therefore tortured you also must be!"

    "No. This dance intended for me it was not."

    Yaddle, being 400 years younger than Yoda, quickly grabbed his gimer stick and knocked gently across the head.

    "Go to the dance with me you will."

    She handed his stick back to him and then walked back down the corridor.

    "Last word females always have. Uhhh."
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    Whatta ya all think?
    I hope it wasn't to confusing.
    I'm thinking about changing my user name so my next post might be under the name Ca'layka_Bele.
    Don't worry it's just me.
    K?
     
  23. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I couldn?t stop laughing at the last two posts! . I was curled up in stiches.
    Here?s just a short bit. Its not really funny, sorry.
    Chogaigh wandered aimlessly round the gardens, he wasn?t even too sure why he had come here. He was still waiting for Ki-an to come to collect the files, he had a favour to ask of her. One to ask her about her friend Kadi and the second, he grinned to himself, if she still hadn?t got a date, he had a friend coming back to the temple who hadn?t being caught yet.

    Chogaigh found his thoughts preoccupied. ?I wonder if she will ask me out.?
    Twice he nearly trampled two of the initiates. ?Why do they make them so small,? he muttered.

    Suddenly he seen Kadi. He smiled, ?Hey Kadi!.?

     
  24. Calayka_Bele

    Calayka_Bele Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Well here I am with my new name.
    Sorry for the lack of originality but great post!
    I'll try to post more soon.
     
  25. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    "Oh....a.....hi Chogaigh was is it?"

    "Yes."

    Get it over with Kadi.

    "I was wondering..."

    "Hi Kadi!" They both spun around to see another Padawan, Dev Katoa, coming towards them.

    Great, just great. She could ask Chogaigh out in front of him.

    "Oh, uh, hi Dev. You know Chogaigh right?"

    "Yep, we have the same astro-physics class."

    "Um, I'll see you guys later. Bye!" With that, she ran out of the gardens. Once in the hall, she leaned against one of the walls.

    Why was she being so stupid about this? It wasn't like they would be going steady or anything. It was just a dance. She peeked into the garden. They were both gone.

    Now she had to go to Chogaighs quarters to ask.

    Sighing, she started to walk there.

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    Ok, that was iffy. Who's next?

     
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