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Dance of The SugarPlum Jedi(Add on..humor)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Uisceban, Oct 24, 2000.

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  1. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Love your new name Cal :)

    Kadi that wasn't iffy it was great!
     
  2. Calayka_Bele

    Calayka_Bele Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I agree that was really good.
    Here's another shorty.
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    Cal spotted Kadi.

    "Kadi! Wait up!"

    Kadi turned around.

    "Oh hi."

    "So did you hear the news?"

    "What news?"

    "Earlier Yaddle cornered Yoda and asked him to go to the dance."

    A look of astonishment came over Kadi's face.

    "It's the talk of the temple. I almost feel sorry for Yoda. Apparently he didn't think anyone would actually ask him to go."

    "So what's up? You looked a little glum?"

    "Um nothing."

    "Okay. I guess I'll see you when we go shopping."

    "Bye."
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  3. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Chogaigh felt like killing Dev, he always seemed to turn up at the wrong time.

    ?So going with anyone yet or has Strella dumped you again??
    Chogaigh glared at him. ?I broke up with her months ago,? he said icily.

    Dev was surprised at Chogaigh, he usually didn?t mind been teazed a bit.

    ?So is Ki-an going with anyone yet??, Dev asked a little too casually.
    Chogaigh turned to him, ?Hopefully yes.?
    ?Huh?!?

    ?I?m trying to set her up with Si-teh.?
    ?They hate each other!?
    ?Excactly?

    ?Look I?ll see you later, okay?? Chogaigh started ?I?ve got to be somewhere.?

    *****************************

     
  4. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL!

    "They hate each other!"

    "Exactly!"

    I love it.

    I'm having a writers block right now. :(

    Keep posting!
     
  5. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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  6. Calayka_Bele

    Calayka_Bele Jedi Youngling star 3

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  7. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ok, here's a tiny bit. Darth Writer's Block is still bothering me.
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    Kadi quickly ran to Ki-An's quarters. She had realized while walking that she had no idea where Chogaigh lived.

    Force, she was out of it when she was nervous.

    Punching the chime button, she tapped her foot impatiently. She just wanted to get this over with.

    "Kadi! What are you dong here?" Ki-An asked, noticing how nervous her friend was.

    "Um....what is Chogaigh's quarter number?"

    "Chogaigh? Why..ohh." Ki-An smiled knowingly. Kadi groaned. She wasn't making this any easier.

    "Please, don't give me any troble Ki. What is it?" Kadi was relieved that she quickly told her.

    "Good luck!" Ki-An called after her.

    Too soon, she was standing in front of Chogaigh's quarters.

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    Next!
     
  8. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Up! that was great.. I'm not going to get to post until friday :-((

    Oh I wrote this tiny little thing(about 1/2 a page) nothing really to do with this fic but I used yours and Cal'laykas characters, so I was wondering do you two want to see it?

     
  9. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Put it up!

    We would both love to see it.
     
  10. Calayka_Bele

    Calayka_Bele Jedi Youngling star 3

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    UP!

    Well let's see it!
     
  11. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Like I said this doesn't really have anything to do with this fic but here it is anyway
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    ?Come on, it will be fun!?

    ?Were too old!?

    ?Has that ever stopped us before?

    A few moments later, Ki-an, Kadi and Cal?layka were heading for the gym. Making sure no one was looking they took out part of the gymnastic equipment and removed their boots.

    ?Wheeeeeeeee?

    ?Told you it will be fun!?

    ?It so long since we done this.?
    ?I think I?ve just got a hole in my socks.?

    Oblivus to the sound of the approaching footsteps they continued pulling the longs ropes back that dangled from the ceiling and sliding across the wooden floor.

    Obi-wan and Chogaigh entered the the room, looking curiously at each other as they heard laughing.

    ?What are you doing?? Obi-wan asked amused.

    Ki-an tried to stop mid slide but instead went crashing into Kadi sending her flying into Cal-layka. They all ended up in a muddeled heap on the floor.

    ?I thought you three had some level of maturity?, Chogaigh said sarcasticly.

    The girls pulled themselves of the floor and dusted themselves off.
    ?Just trying out some new routines?
    ?Uh, yes and were just leaving?
    ?See ya?
    With that the girls ran out of the room embarrased.

    ?Kids, muttered Obi, Now where is the trampoline??
    ?Me first!? yelled Chogaigh.

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    Sorry if that was just stupid, what did you think?
     
  12. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    That was really funny!

    It wasn't stupid at all.

    UP!
     
  13. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks Kadi! :)
    I was meant to be doing my homework in study when I did it. Opps
     
  14. Calayka_Bele

    Calayka_Bele Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I loved it!

    PM back soon!
     
  15. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hehe :), Heres just a little bit. Writers block is spreading lol.
    ***************
    Mace and Qui-gon were both slowly backing into each other.
    "Ahh!" Qui-gon shouted as he bumped into Mace.

    "Sith, I thought you were Master Teara or any other female master for that matter."

    Mace began to laugh at his friend.
    "Sorry I can't say the same for you, you're way to ugly,"he quipped.

    Qui-gon gave him a heated look. They both continued on the lookout down the hall. Most male padawans and masters alike were trying to stay out of the females way. They were getting very predatory.

    "Hey, you thought I was Master Teara? Are you saying I walk like a girl? Mace suddenly protested.

    Qui-gon sighed.
    ***************
     
  16. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    A Master Kadi had never seen before opened the door. She guessed he was Chogaigh's master, unless she had gone to the wrong room.

    "Yes, may I help you?"

    "Um, yeah. Is Chogaigh here?"

    "Yes." He looked at her for a moment. "Oh, you must be Kadi-Wan Kenobi." Kadi looked at him, surprised. "I've heard alot about you."

    "Kadi?" She jumped and turned to see Chogaigh standing there.

    "Oh, uh...hi Chogaigh." Kadi paused for a moment, glancing to make sure his master had went back into their quarters. "I was wondering..."

    "Yes?" She paused for a moment. Had that actually been excitement in his voice?

    "Doyouwanttogotothedancewithme?" She blurted out, not sure if he had even understood her.

    "Yes." He said with a grin.

    "What?" Was she hearing things? For a moment she had thought he actually said yes.

    "I would love to go with you." She couldn't hel but grin in relief.

    "Great. I guess I'll see you later then." With that, she spun around a ran down the hall. Just wait until she told Cal and Ki-An.
     
  17. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wooohooo!! she asked him out! Heres my next bit, I had to post it before I forgot.
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    Ki-an waited and waited. Checking her chrono watch she was sure Kadi would have asked Chogaigh by now.
    ?Master I?m just heading over to Chogaigh?s, she called out, I need to get some files.? That was half the truth anyway. She did need to get the files but that was not her only reason for going.

    ?Okay Ki but I need you back within the hour?, her Master answered back. But Ki-an was already half way down the hall.

    Pausing for breath, she knocked on the door.
    ?What a surprise to see you Ki-an,? Chogaighs Master said dryly.

    Ki-an smiled sweetly up at him.
    ?Heya, is Chogaigh?s here??

    ?Do you know you are the second young lady to ask that this evening??
    (Yes!) Ki-an thought.
    ?Go on in, I?m just going out, I have somehow been roped into the decorating committee? he replied mournfully.

    Ki-an tried not to laugh at him and went in.
    She entered and found Chogaigh sitting on the couch eating.
    ?They?re in my room? Chogaigh said between mouthfuls.
    ?Your room!, I might die of toxic poison if I go in there.? She teased.
    A few minutes later she re-merged from his room holding her breath.
    Sitting down beside him she released her breath slowly.
    ?What do you have growing in there.? Not waiting for an answer she continued, ?So are you going to the dance with Strell or not??
    ?Why does everyone keep asking if I?m going with her?, Chogaigh shouted, she?s going with someone she totally deserves, Bruck?

    Ki-an laughed, ?So you are definitely going with Kadi then.?
    He nodded.
    ?Great!, finally you are going with someone nice.?

    Chogaigh decided while Ki-an was in a good mood he?d better ask her.
    ?I have someone who would like to go to the dance with you.?
    Ki-an attention pricked up immediately.
    ?It?s a blind date so I can?t tell you who it is.?
    ?Sometimes , I just hate you? Ki-an replied.
    (Not as much as you hate this person, Chogaigh thought.)
    ?He doesn?t know who you are either,? Chogaigh insisted.

    Ki-an made a face.
    She glanced at her chrono, ?I gotta go now, see you later Chog.?

    ?See you Ki? he called.





     
  18. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL! Ki-An is going to be furious!

    I'll try to post some b at least tomorrow.

    Darth Writers Block. UGH!

    Keep posting!!!
     
  19. Calayka_Bele

    Calayka_Bele Jedi Youngling star 3

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    LOL!!
    Those were both really great!
    I'll post a bit.
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    Ca'layka was sitting in her room tinkering with some parts from the infirmary.

    (By the way Cal is a healer and loves working with ships and droids and anything she can get her hands on.)

    "Cal?"

    She spun around to see her master standing there.

    _This could get ugly._ Cal silently thought to herself as she quickly put the tertiary limb motor from the med droid away.

    "I'm going out for a little while."

    Cal sighed with relief she hadn't noticed what she was dismantling.

    "Alright." she replied.

    "I'll be back within the hour."

    Cal nodded her head.
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    Master Mira walked down the corridor to the Infirmary. Master Tekka was there.

    _Cal asked Obi-Wan out, so how hard could it be for me to ask Master Tekka out._

    As Cal's master walked into the Infirmary she noticed that one of the medical droids was sitting in the corner not moving.

    _CAL!! You took the motor again!_ she thought _So that's what she hid in a hurry!_

    "Hello Master Aova." Master Tekka addressed her.

    "Oh hi. Um I was wondering if you would go to the dance with me." she said quickly so as to get it over with.

    "The dance? Sure. I'll go with you."

    Suddenly Master Mira burst out laughing.

    "What's so funny?"

    "I can't believe I just went through with that."

    Soon they were both laughing.
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    Whatta ya think?
     
  20. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    great post! Awful case of writes block hitting me at the moment. Just a question for you both, whats your favourite song??
     
  21. Calayka_Bele

    Calayka_Bele Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I'm not sure I love lot's of songs.

    It's probably Breathless by The Corrs.

    Ever heard of them?

    What's yours?
     
  22. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I had all their albums until their new one came out lol

    At the moment I love
    Could I have this kiss forever by Whitney and enrique (I cant spell his name)
     
  23. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Right now I like
    Best For Last by Vannessa Williams, but Steps and The Corrs are my 2 favorite groups.
     
  24. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Mind if I post a little bit more?
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    A thought suddenly came into Chogaigh's mind. Jumping up, he shouted, "Ki-an wait!"

    "What?, she swung round."

    "What's Kadi's favourite song?"

    "Uh, oh, um "Best for last", I think.

    Chogaigh looked at her with a confused expression.

    "An old Earth song," Ki-an said.
    Chogaigh still had a dum expression on his face.

    "Look. don't worry, I'll make sure it's played at the dance."

    Chogaigh grinned, "Thanks scruff."
     
  25. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I don't mind at all. The more the better. Is Chogaigh planning something?

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    Qui-Gon and Mace backed up against panting hard. They had running all day, but hadn't been able to ge away.

    "This is it Qui old buddy." Mace panted, watching as 2 shadowy figures began to approach.

    "I am not old." Qui-Gon reminded him.

    The figures got closer.

    "Now, now, now ladies." Mace said, holding his hands out as if they would keep them away. Ava approached him.

    "Finally, you two looked like a Rancor was after you. Now, will you go to the dance with me?!"

    "Yes." Mace said in a small voice.

    "And you, will you go with me?!" Teara demaded, stepping closer to Qui-Gon.

    "Yes." He said in a small voice.

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    Next.

     
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