Beyond Dawn of a New Era I: Jedi Resurrection (post-SbS AU) - K/J, J/T, A/OC - COMPLETED 3/27

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  1. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    Ah, this is my first attempt at a fan fic. I know the post is kinda short but don't be hatin' :p

    *Disclaimer: all Star Wars characters named in this story, with the exception of my original characters (Kitana Secura, Aliyah Jade Skywalker, Sienna Durron, Sierra Durron, and J'ron Grahrk) are the property of the Great Flanneled One and of LucasFilms Ltd. In other words, it's George's world and I'm just playing in it. :)*


    Dramatis Personae

    The Jedi
    children
    Sienna Durron (female human)
    Sierra Durron (female human)

    Padawans
    Jysella Horn; apprentice to Leia Organa Solo (female human)

    Knights
    Tenel Ka Djo (female human)
    Zekk Durron (male human)
    Alema Rar (female Twi'lek)
    Kitana Secura-Solo (female Twi'lek)
    Aliyah Jade Skywalker (female human)
    Anakin Solo (male human)
    Jacen Solo (male human)
    Jaina Solo (female human)
    Tahiri Veila (female human)

    Masters
    Cilghal (female Mon Calamari)
    Kyp Durron (male human)
    Aayla Secura (female Twi'lek)
    Luke Skywalker (male human)
    Mara Jade Skywalker (female human)
    Leia Organa Solo (female human)
    Vergere (female Fosh)

    with the military
    General Wedge Antilles; retired (male human)
    Colonel Gavin Darklighter; Rogue Lead (male human)
    Baron Soontir Fel; CEDF Commander (male human)
    Prince Isolder; Pride of Hapes Commander (male human)
    Traest Kre'fey; NR Supreme Commander (male Bothan)
    Captain Garik 'Face' Loran; Wraith Lead (male human)
    Grand Admiral Gilad Pellaeon; Imperial Navy Supreme Commander (male human)
    General Han Solo; Smugglers Alliance (male human)
    Kell Tainer; Wraith Squadron (male human)

    with the New Republic
    Teneniel Djo; Hapan queen (female human)
    Cal Omas; NR senator (male human)

    with the Yuuzhan Vong
    Lomi; Dark Jedi (female human)
    Nom Anor; Executor (male)
    Tsavong Lah; Warmaster (male)
    Onimi; Shamed One (male)
    Danni Quee; Sith (female human)
    Shimmra; Supreme Overlord (male)
    Welk; Dark Jedi (male human)

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  2. Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager

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    Hey. I'm a member of Reachout. We can help you select a title if you want the help. Also come to us if you ever need any help with other aspects of your story.

    Otherwise, that was a good start. UP!
  3. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    Spike2002: thanks for offering. I'll be sure to let you know if and when I need any assistance. here's chapter one. in case anyone's wondering, I changed it around a bit. why? because I can! :p

    Chapter 1: Flight from Myrkr

    "We'll come back for you Jacen. I'll come back for you."

    Overcome with anger and grief, Jaina Solo woke up. The pain of losing both her brothers still rang fresh in her mind. Less than a day had passed since the survivors of the Jedi strike force had fled the worldship above Myrkr. Less than a day since Jaina had been forced to leave a huge part of herself behind. Fighting back the tears, she made her way to the cockpit of the stolen Ksstarr. All her life, Jaina had heard that fear and anger led to the Dark Side but at this particular moment, she didn't give a damn. A slight smile crossed her lips as she recalled frying those Yuuzhan Vong warriors with Force lightning. Tremors of pain shook Jaina's body as she remembered the traitorous Vergere handing her twin brother off to Nom Anor. Jacen and her had been a part of each other since before they were born. Now he was gone. The Yuuzhan Vong had gone too far this time. They had crossed the line and made this war personal. Killing Anakin was bad enough but taking Jacen was the last straw. Now, they would pay for what they had done. By any means necessary, they would pay.

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  4. C3SoloP0 Jedi Master

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    *Comes in strolling while singing the merry old tune of, what the hey!!, Star Wars!!!*

    I am going to be reading this!!! :)
    Anything K/J attracts MY attention!! Hehehehe.....

    That was a very good start JediMasterKobe .
  5. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    C3SoloPO: thanks you. I may or may not post the next chapter tonight after I get home from Matrix Reloaded. [face_devil] hehe. it depends on my mood. :p
  6. EBrooklynW Jedi Knight

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    Yes.. More K/J stories... Our Numbers are growing! Soon we will be able to take over the Universe!!!... wait scratcht that... thats my Personal plan for world domination... *shifts throught domination file* Ah yes here we go: Soon we will be able to have them get rid of Jag Fel and his Imperial superiority complex hide! *doublechecks* yup thats the right one.

    Excellent story please continue por favor!
    *hands over some sugar-coated Kyps and throws in a couple of sugar-coated Jacens for the heck of it*
    Enjoy!

    ~EBrooklynW
  7. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    EBrooklynW: hey, I was planning on world domination! :p yes, I agree...Jag must die!

    As promised, heeeeeeeeeeeere's the post! BTW, Matrix Reloaded was excellent. I suggest y'all go see it if you haven't already.

    Chapter 2: A Stolen Kiss

    Once the frigate had entered hyperspace, Jaina left the cockpit. Rage filled her more and more as she gazed upon the other Jedi. Nine remained, nine out of the 17 that had gone on this mission. A tear streamed down her cheek as she looked at the still form covered by a white sheet. It was so unfair. Anakin was not even 18 yet. Glancing to her brother's left, Jaina felt a pang of sadness. Tahiri Veila. The young blonde had been Anakin's best friend since meeting him at the praxeum on Yavin 4. In recent times though, she and Jacen had been on the edge of a relationship even deeper than the one she enjoyed with Anakin.

    Jaina recalled the kiss shared by Jacen and Tahiri just prior to boarding the Lady Luck and heading for Myrkr. Those had been happier times. Crying out with disgust, Jaina slammed a fist into the wall of yorik coral. Ignoring the looks of the others, she turned and stalked back to the pilot's chair. A few minutes later, she felt a familiar presence settle down next to her. Opening her eyes, Jaina felt an enormous relief at the sight of Zekk, her best and oldest friend. Jaina offered Zekk a trademark Solo grin. Suddenly, she wrapped her arms around him, finally unable to contain her flow of tears.

    "Zekk, they're gone. I'm all alone now."

    "Jaina, you'll never be alone. I'm here for you."

    After several minutes, Jaina pulled back. Wiping away the tears, she felt grateful to have such a good friend. She lowered her lips to his and brushed them softly. Jaina broke off to gaze deeply at Zekk's emerald green eyes. She kissed him again, this time with a bit more passion. Wrapping her arms around his neck, Jaina whispered softly in Zekk's ear.

    "Don't you think you should check on the others?"

    Zekk blinked twice in disbelief. Groaning loudly, he got up and headed for the back. He turned once to see Jaina blowing him a kiss. Rolling his eyes, he left the cockpit.

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  8. C3SoloP0 Jedi Master

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    Well....that was certainly unexpected...I really didn't think she was gonna kiss Zekk...



    More?
  9. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    C3SoloPO: hehe, just trying to build up a little competition between Kyp and Jaina... [face_devil]
  10. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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  11. JainaDurron Jedi Master

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    This one has caught my eye. Must keep a lookout for more.

    ~~Jilly
  12. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    JainaDurron: I appreciate the feedback. I'd also like to add that your Insanity fic is a good one. :p
  13. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    Here's a little post to tide my readers over while I work on the next part.

    Chapter 3: Fight Club

    Several days later, the young Jedi Knights exited hyperspace. Expecting to see the bright lights of Coruscant, they got the shock of their lives when they found that they had entered a warzone. Thousands of Yuuzhan Vong coralskippers and New Republic starfighters were fiercely engaged in a spectacular battle above the planet-wide city. After a brief but harrowing chase, Jaina reached out with the Force and found her mother aboard the Millenium Falcon.

    //Mom, we need help.//

    //Jaina? Where are you honey?//

    //We stole a coralskipper.//

    //Are you ok?//

    //Yes and no. We're being chased by X-Wings.//

    //Ok, hold on. I'll address the fleet.//

    //Thanks mom.//


    True to her word, Leia Solo broadcast a warning that her daughter was in command of a stolen coralskpper. Wedge Antilles then volunteered the services of Roque Squadron as an escort. After consulting with the other Jedi, Jaina notified Rogue Lead that she was headed for Ryloth. Colonel Gavin Darklighter, in turn, sent word to Leia and Wedge about where they were headed.

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  14. Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager

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    Reloaded is out already?? It isn't out here yet. :_|

    Uh, a coralskipper? Don't you mean frigate?
  15. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    Spike2002:yeah, I meant frigates. thanks for the 411. I changed it in the story.
  16. Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager

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    Yeah I know, but a coralskipper is just a one-man fighter. As far as I know they call bigger yorik coral ships by their analog type.
  17. C3SoloP0 Jedi Master

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    That was good!!!

    I want more!!! Where's Kyp at anyways? What's he doing? (Because I don't think he's in the same ship as Jaina and Zekk right?)


    Hey Jilly!!!! Good to see you here....
  18. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    Spike2002: I get what you're trying to say and yes, there are frigate analogs around but the bulk of that space battle is fought by the coralskippers. I already changed it.

    C3SoloP0: no, Kyp is not on that ship. That's the coralskipper that the survivors of Myrkr stole. Currently aboard are Jaina, Zekk, Tahiri, Alema Rar, Ganner Rhysode, Tesar Sabatyne, Lowie, Tekli, Tenel Ka and Anakin's body. As for Kyp, he's somewhere around and you'll never guess where! [face_devil] hehe. anyways, he doesn't come into the story until after the return of 2 Jedi, one of which is from the Old Republic and survived the purges.
  19. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    oh, I posted a partial Dramatis Personae just before the first chapter. I'll be adding more as the story moves along.
  20. DarkLady_Q Jedi Padawan

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    B/C i know u personally ;)I've got only great things to say about ya...Great job and keep up the good work...u better email me ur updates.

    Peace, Q
  21. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    Hellooooooooooooooooooo...anybody out there? guess not. :( well, I'll UP this anyways in preparation for the next post.
  22. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    uh-oh, looks like it's about that time again!

    Chapter 4: Meeting of the Jedi

    A week and a half later, the coralskipper and Rogue Squadron exited hyperspace above the Twi'lek homeworld of Ryloth. It was Alema Rar who had suggested this particular destination. After obtaining permission to land, Jaina felt a strong presence in the Force. The young Jedi expanded her awareness and was shocked to find that the presence originated from the planet. She quickly gathered the others and advised them to remain alert at all times while on Ryloth. Upon disembarking the skip, which she named Trickster, Jaina Solo set out in search of this mysterious individual.

    Tracking the Force-signature proved easy, as it stood out like a beacon of light in a sea of darkness. Following her instincts, Jaina soon found herself facing an old and run-down building. Summoning her courage, she stepped to the door and knocked. As the door slowly creaked open, a feminine-sounding voice emanated from inside.

    "Hello Jaina Solo, I've been expecting you."

    Jaina gulped, "Wh-who are you and h-how do you know me?"

    "I am Jedi Master Aayla Secura. Please enter."

    Her curiousity now piqued, Jaina stepped inside. Almost immediately, the lights turned on and the door shut behind her. Jaina's jaw dropped as she realized just how powerful a Jedi this Aayla Secura truly was. The cerulean blue Twi'lek sat in the middle of a sparsely furnished room. Appearing to be deep in meditation, she smiled as Jaina approached.

    "Sit please, we have much to discuss."

    Jaina hesitated briefly, then took a seat. Aayla levitated a glass of blue milk towards the younger Jedi.

    "Now, Knight Solo. Perhaps you would like to know why you are here?"

    A speechless Jaina could only nod in agreement. This was all getting to be a bit too much for her to handle.

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  23. JainaDurron Jedi Master

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    This is getting more and more interesting. :) More?

    ~~Jilly
  24. Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager

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    Why didn't I guess Aayla Secura would be in this?
  25. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    JainaDurron: I have the next chapter ready for posting but I think I will wait until I come back from my Star Wars FanForce anniversary party to put it up.

    Spike2002: oh I don't know, maybe it's my icon and my signature? :p
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