Saga Death From Within -- The Sifo-Dyas Story

Finished it....great ending, you gave a believabel stry of how the clones came about which was great. nice one

 

Great job!! That really fills in the story well.

 

awsome not only can you write good books but ur a poet.
liked the
"What good is the light when there is complete darkness within you?"

the story helps fill in many blanks.

 

Thank you all for the kind words!

I'm glad you all believe this filled in the blanks, as that was my main purpose for writing this whole thing. I'm sure everyone pretty much knew what the ultimate outcome was going to be, but I just wanted to make the story of how it ended up that way interesting and entertaining.

And thanks for finding the poetry in my words - that's a great compliment!

Thanks all!

 

Bravo! VaderLVR whistles wildy! Wonderful!

 

Why thank you.

 

Hey all,

Just wanted to thank everyone who took the time to read this and post their comments - it was a lot of fun writing this and I hope it turned out alright. I submitted it to the archives, so hopefully you'll see it there soon.

As some of you may know, I am in the Navy, and I will be going out to sea very soon for a couple of months, so you won't be seeing me around for that time.

I hope all of you get to see Episode III and enjoy it immensely (enjoy it for me), and I look forward to seeing all of you real soon.

May the Force be with all of you.

Brad (JMT)

 

Hey some military installations overseas are going to be playing Ep III (depending on if you get to go on land any time) Being in the Air Force I know all about overseas though from the 'ground level' mainly

Stay safe and take care of yourself 'over there'!

 

Thanks Kynstar! But unfortunately for me, being a submariner, my "over there" is "under there," and my type of boat does not come back up until it's time to return to port. Lovely, ain't it? Ah well, c'est la vie.

MTFBWY Kynstar

 

Take care, JMT!

 

Que dios te cuida y que le vemos tan pronto como sea possible.

3PO; Goda bless you and hope we see you ASAP!

 

Holy crap, yesterday was Cinco de Mayo, and I was working all day so I totally missed it. Ah well, just hafta celebrate today. =)

Thank you both, take care, and as always, MTFBWY!

 

i read this story ages ago and it was class, later.

 

good luck my friend, MTFBWY and God speed as you go out and do your job... I have enjoyed your stories and look forward to when you return.

 

Thank you both for the kind words, and I look forward to writing again as well. MTFBWY both.

 

Howdy Everyone!

Just wanted to let you guys know that I'm back from being "under da sea" (for all you who actually remember me) and I look forward to writing again and to reading all the good stuff I missed over the past couple months. And don't worry, I did actually get to see Ep. III!

Look forward to talking with all of you again, and as always, MTFBWY!

-The one and only JMT-

 

Yay! Welcome back! Can't wait!

 

I started reading this fic, and it's kriffin great.

I'm only up to chapter four, but I'm enjoying myself immensely. I love your characterisation of Dooku!
The dialogue is just slick, ha ha, especially the way he talked to the Council.

You tell em Dooku!

Poor Sifo... I gotta get some sleep now, but I can't wait till I get immersed in it again.

By the way, you work with submarines?


That is so neat!

How long do you stay under? How deep do you go? what do you do? have you ever been...attacked?

oh my, that is so cool...But I'm claustrophobic too, so I would combust.

 

Ha, I thought this story was dead and buried!

Why, thank you JOINME.

I started reading this fic, and it's kriffin great.

Thank ya! Kriffin?


Poor Sifo... I gotta get some sleep now, but I can't wait till I get immersed in it again.

Puttin sleep ahead of Sifo-Dyas, the nerve... =)

By the way, you work with submarines?

Yep!

That is so neat!

It's overrated.

How long do you stay under? How deep do you go? what do you do? have you ever been...attacked?

Couple months at a time. That's classified. We go in circles. Nope - we could be right under you and you'd never know it...

oh my, that is so cool...But I'm claustrophobic too, so I would combust.

No. You'd probably implode at our depth.

-- your friendly neighborhood JMT in a nutshell

 

Your answers to my eager wide eyed questions-

(I guess implosion would be better than combustion. Fire is ugly. And it would make everyone else die too. And classified eh? Damn. Maybe a few drinks would dredge up the info? )

This fic-

This is such a top notch story, the way you tie everything together, the poetic quality of the language, the explanations, the imagery, the symbolism, the fall of Dooku, the way Palps manipulated him, how Sifo contacted Kamino, the nature of Sifo's death, right down to his thought before he died...


MAN.

This is so brilliant, honestly! One of the best Star Wars stories I've ever read, and that ending, with Jocasta muttering and all, *whistles*


I'm so glad I found this, and you reminded me about it! Hope more readers discover this gem!

 

Me too.

Thank you, dearest padawan, for your kind words as always.

You tried.

 

I love this, and you bring up things I wondered about, things that bothered me about how things were set up in this galaxy.

The babies for instance, but not wanting to train someone that wanted to be a Jedi!


I will be going through and reading it deeper as my time permits.

Oh. and your opening was totally riveting. I wondered how the news would be spread.. would the media talk about such things, or how did their world react.

Thanks for getting this the attention it so richly deserves!