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Death Haiku

Discussion in 'Archive: Your Jedi Council Community' started by Son of Kenobi, Sep 22, 2000.

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  1. Son of Kenobi

    Son of Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Aug 21, 1998
    A haiku poem consists of:

    first line: 5 syllables
    second line: 7 syllables
    third line: 5 syllables

    The theme, obviously, is death, loss, or destruction of something (or someone) that was once very dear to your heart ... or (since death is celebrated as a beginning in many cultures), something that is coming close to its natural, fitting end.

    My first:

    Once shining and new,
    now vile and desecrated:
    The Jedi cesspit.
     
  2. the Ghost of Modal

    the Ghost of Modal Jedi Youngling

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    Oct 1, 1999
    I celebrate death
    I like it alot i do
    help people get there
     
  3. FishandChips

    FishandChips Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Sep 18, 2000
    Are you gothic ?
     
  4. Son of Kenobi

    Son of Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Gristle, marrow, blood.
    A corpse several sections long.
    Carrion for vultures.

    A haunting-eyed ghost,
    A disaffected 'old' man.
    "Revenge," they speak.


     
  5. Son of Kenobi

    Son of Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    No civility.
    Puppets on a well-trod stage.
    While we mourn the loss.
     
  6. Jade's Fire2003

    Jade's Fire2003 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I think of the dead
    I remember the times when
    They were still living
     
  7. sorcha

    sorcha Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Sep 9, 2000
    Death comes in stages:
    Commences in dark terror.
    Ends softly in peace.
     
  8. sorcha

    sorcha Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Sep 9, 2000
    Brother tastes my blood
    Sister releases my soul
    Death is family
     
  9. Commander Wedge Antilles

    Commander Wedge Antilles Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Apr 13, 1999
    specialize in pain
    keep you locked inside my head
    lonely far too long
     
  10. Son of Kenobi

    Son of Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Aug 21, 1998
    Stick it to the fools.
    Wave the vultures far away.
    This fine corpse is ours.
     
  11. Norman

    Norman Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Feb 3, 1999
    With a sallow face
    Greedy, wanting, heartless soul
    Forever w(r)eaping

    (I had to take some liberties with spelling. How it pains me so.)
     
  12. Mirax Terrik

    Mirax Terrik Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    first line: 5 syllables
    second line: 7 syllables
    third line: 5 syllables

    I saw Death today,
    the truth, the myth, and the life,
    I am not afraid.
     
  13. Son of Kenobi

    Son of Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Innuendo rules.
    Trust and respect have died.
    On and on it goes.

    Miscommunicate.
    Your rumors, you celebrate.
    Let old hurt kill you.

    Old friends beleaguered.
    Carrying JC's dead weight.
    Strength fading away.

    I shake my 'old' head.
    I see the same old arguements,
    the same old bull----

    Watch the skein twisting.
    See the frustrations mounting.
    Good minds turning bad.

    Do you listen, hm?
    Do you hear the other side?
    Do you type in vain?

    I think you all do.
    Feasting upon this dead corpse.
    While your heads inflate.

    No civility.
    Only politics you seek,
    turning in the gyre.

    No interest in truth.
    Only the settling of scores.
    A depressing sight.

    So I post thoughts here.
    I take a long, cleansing breath.
    And shake my 'old' head.


     
  14. Son of Kenobi

    Son of Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    We're not together.
    Five months, dead to the other.
    I miss you sometimes.
     
  15. Edith Wife of Beowulf

    Edith Wife of Beowulf Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jun 6, 2000
    You people are all sick
     
  16. Nothing

    Nothing Jedi Youngling

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    Sep 15, 2000
    I pray for an end
    Nothingness to take my pain
    God wont let me rest
     
  17. Son of Kenobi

    Son of Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Aug 21, 1998
    Have courtesy, child.
    If you post disgust in here,
    write it in haiku.
     
  18. PreacherBoy

    PreacherBoy Jedi Youngling star 5

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    Aug 3, 1998
    I ate rat poison.
    Now my stomach is on fire.
    Why is it so dark?

    Took 4 seconds. Thank you.
     
  19. Edith Wife of Beowulf

    Edith Wife of Beowulf Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jun 6, 2000
    You people are sick
    Mental help is needed here
    Now love will cure you
     
  20. mt1881

    mt1881 Jedi Youngling star 7

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    Aug 14, 2000
    nobody is loved
    we just exist then we die
    there is nothing else
     
  21. Eric-Clapton

    Eric-Clapton Jedi Youngling

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    Sep 24, 2000
    SoK: Stop whining and get lost already.
     
  22. Red Lightsaber

    Red Lightsaber Jedi Youngling star 4

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    Nov 8, 1999
    my head hurts real bad
    my life sucks major buttock
    my gun ends the pain

    give up all your hope
    let your life evaporate
    death is life's relief
     
  23. mt1881

    mt1881 Jedi Youngling star 7

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    Aug 14, 2000
    look up the barrel
    choose to pull or not to pull
    fall to the ground dead
     
  24. mt1881

    mt1881 Jedi Youngling star 7

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    Aug 14, 2000
    watch friends come and go
    feel the pain as they leave u
    choose death over life
     
  25. Eric-Clapton

    Eric-Clapton Jedi Youngling

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    Sep 24, 2000
    It's not a sockpuppet.

    PS: eat me
     
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