Saga Deception and Deceit Episode II: A/P, OC AU Chapter 11 Updated September 27

good, he's anakin again. but how long will this last? at least obi-wan decided to help him out.

i also think padme's playing a dangerous game here, but maybe that's the only way to save herself. just don't make them sleep together, that would be too...gross.

 

Nice. I think Padme's finally discovering that being the Cold murderous Empress is a whole lot different than being the idealistic Senator from Naboo. She's pratically friendless now in this life threatening situation.

Nice way of having Anakin renounce the Sith.

Now more!

 

Yay! He's Anakin again! Atleast for now...never know with you...lol

Padme's playing a dangerous game, I hope she knows what she is doing.

 

lady_sapphire - well, Padme does live on the edge..... did i just say that? n'mind. yeppers Anakin is back, so all you ladies can rejoice and dance with my ewoks, they need some lady friends anyway.

Juliet316 - more.... more you say..... i will try my best to get another chapter up on wednesday or so.

jmsbndgrl - anakin this... anakin that.... blah blah blah blah blah.

ZANTHOS RULES AND WILL KILL EWOKS FOR DINNER, MUAHAHHAA!

 

Yay! Ani's back to the light!

I don't think Padme's enjoying herself, do you? I think karma's kicking in. That's what you get for becoming a power-obsessed dictator!

 

Weeee!!!Anakin is again...Anakin

That's a good news but Padme and Zanthos is a bad news
She is playing a dangerous game. Let's see who will win

PS.Thanks for PM

 

Anakin's back! Can't blame Obi-Wan for being somewhat wary of his words, though. Padme's situation seems to just grow more perilous. She is definitely playing with fire.

 

Oh nice chapter. Poor Padme, what she has to deal with now. *shakes head* And yeah, I hope you don't put the to sleep together that would be just wikid gross. lol.

And I'm lovin' Anakin

 

astarael - yea, i just like the girl in distress, makes it a whole lot more fun when Ani and Obi show up to kick some dark lord booty.

Starshine - everyone has picked up on the little game she's playing, and if you realize how evil Zanthos really can be... it's actually quite something he's being as patient with her as he is. the lingering effects of Kaldo!

Gina - oh my poor Padme... what ever will she do... now she is stuck with my alter ego... she best just watch herself.. muahaha.

Lieutenant_Jaina - no, no sex between these two now. Zanthos is a bit scary looking, and has grey skin, and is bald headed, nasty eyes, but a damn good built body, if i do say so myself. muahaha... but yea, she ain't gunna give it up this time.

thanks for reading everyone, more to come soon!!!

 

Anakin's turning back to the good side Awesome!

And now he's going to go rescue her, and he has freed Obi-Wan! Wonderful !

 

Yes! Awesome post! Continue!

--RP

 

Up!
Are you planning on an update soon?

 

hey! i just started reading this story and it's truly amazing. there are so many twists and turns, i never know what's going to happen next! i love how you portray anakin/vader...yay i'm so happy he's anakin again! can't wait for the next chapter...

 

Up!

 

someone write the next chapter for me, i'll give you a dollar.

 

realy?

 

http://boards.theforce.net/Fan_Fiction_Resource/b10304/20610988/?6


check that out.

 

Quick question: How will you get us the dollar?

 

I have given this story up for adpotion and Juliet316 has jumped at the opportunity to continue this story.

She is a big fan of this story, which i'm grateful for and I know she will nuture this story and do it justice. She said she already has some good ideas, so I have confidence that it will be good, and I hope all the readers continue to read, because I know I certainly will.

one reason I've adopted this story out is because I have just not had any inspiration to write this story in the last few weeks and I have other ideas I want to explore at this point.

I've done 32 chapters with this story, and I don't see myself doing anymore, I feel honored that she even wants to take a crack at it.

as far as I know the new chapters will still be in this thread.

also, my new story is down right da bomb, I promise you that.

Qui Gon, Anakin, Obi, Padme, Dooku!!!

oh yes, it is going to be awesome.

but anyways, give your support to Juliet316 she is a huge fan of this story so please show her the same support you've shown me.

 

Congratulations Juliet316!

 

Thanks for the support.

Like darksideyesplease has said, I have adopted this story. I know in a sense where he planned to take the story, and I have some ideas on how to bring that about. Let's just say, without giving too much away, that Anakin's renewed vows as a Jedi and his marriage vows may very well put him in a rock and a hard place. But only if the Team can actually defeat Zanthos and find Padme.

On a lighter note, stay tuned for a long awaited conversation between Anakin and his former Jedi Master as the next part. The boys really need to clear the air if their going to rescue Padme.

Hopefully it should arrive within a couple of days.

See ya soon!

EDIT: Sometimes writing at 2am isn't good for your spelling skils, LOL!

 

Good luck Juliet
I am waiting for your posts with great interest

 

Congrats and good luck Juliet, I'm sure you'll do great!

 

Is there ever gonna be an update to this story?

 

Yes, there will be. DRL has just been kicking tail the last few weeks. Expect a new part within the next few days.