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"Defining Us" : An Sabewan Series Planning Thread (Link to Fic Is Up)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction and Writing Resource' started by AERYN_SUN, Apr 23, 2003.

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  1. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Need help on the most important sequence...How Obi-Wan/Sabe react to each other during the first time they meet.

    ~aeryn
     
  2. KrystalBlaze

    KrystalBlaze Jedi Master star 5

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    Before this story, Obi-Wan and Sabe didn't have anything going on with them, maybe just a little bit of attraction. I think what you need is an old friend type of reunion, with the attraction still there. I don't like the idea of them rushing up to each other with open arms, because both of them don't strike me as that way, but maybe they could be smiling.

    Now, if you're going for a duty-bound, Jedi hardened Obi-Wan, he wouldn't even smile.

    But that's just me.

    I have to say you've got an excellent plot building up.

    My question is what is the climax?
     
  3. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    My question is what is the climax?

    I don't worry about the climax until I get a feel for the story itself and where it's heading. Let's not worry about that right now.

    I agree, thing should start out friendly, nothing rushed.

    ~aeryn
     
  4. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Up!

    ~aeryn
     
  5. Sabe126

    Sabe126 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Excellent ideas!!! Please let me know when you start writing. I really want to read this.

    Will have a think about your questions.
     
  6. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    I've already started writing. I finished working on Chapter 1 today.

    Because it's supposed to be 3 yrs. before AotC, I don't want it to be parallel to the movie and I'm currently looking for a beta-reader, too.

    ~aeryn
     
  7. KrystalBlaze

    KrystalBlaze Jedi Master star 5

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    Sign me up for beta but my time has been so sparse lately I won't do an excellent job with it.
     
  8. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    KrystalBlaze, if you can't do it, I understand. I'll still be looking. I know all about schedule conflicts, since I went through that with my last two beta's.

    ~aeryn
     
  9. SobiFan

    SobiFan Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Heya Obisgirl :D your series sounds very good... lol like I said, I'm also writing one, so I have loads of ideas... but most of them I am using! I'd love to beta read! Mwaha. I have enough time to spare, and I can't resist Sabiwan :D lol I also have Obi and Sabe getting together about 5 years before AOTC... but in a different way than you have planned! *wipes sweat off brow*

    :D
     
  10. Anyanka

    Anyanka Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Hi Aeryn, I finally made it over here. :) You have a lot of great ideas, and I know I'll definitely be reading when you start this fic. :D
     
  11. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    I'd love to beta read! Mwaha. I have enough time to spare, and I can't resist Sabiwan

    thank you, sobifan :D i have up to three chapters written and it's in novella format.
    pm me and we'll work out a schedule.

    ~aeryn
     
  12. SobiFan

    SobiFan Jedi Youngling star 3

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    *dances around* I am the beta, I am the muse, I am the re-writer, I rewrite things that I choose!

    .... yeah, anotherwords, I've read all the story that Aeryn wrote so far! :D it's very good... sweet and sexy rawr :)

    :D this is gonna be a good S/O series everyone!
     
  13. ForceAchtungBaby

    ForceAchtungBaby Jedi Master star 4

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    Looking better and better Aeryn!
    Make sure and PM me when you post it!
     
  14. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    thanks, FAB :D and i will ;)

    ~aeryn
     
  15. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Up!

    ~aeryn
     
  16. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    very important announcement. not tonight, but tomorrow, i will post the trailer for 'defining us'. i just have to finish up some coding and i'll post it on the fanfic-add on thread. i'll post the link here too.

    The Trailer Is Up [link=http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=3604701&page=14] Defining Us Trailer [/link]

    ~aeryn
     
  17. JazzyJedi

    JazzyJedi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Very cool trailer! I can hardly wait! :)
     
  18. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    thanks, jazzy :D i'm slowly winding down to finishing, but now i'm thinking i should expand some into episode iii.

    ~aeryn
     
  19. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    The first part of my Sabewan novella, Defining Us, is now up on "The Saga" board.

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=12235539&replies=13]Defining Us[/link]

    ~aeryn
     
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