"Defining Us" : An Sabewan Series Planning Thread (Link to Fic Is Up)

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  1. AERYN_SUN Jedi Grand Master

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    Need help on the most important sequence...How Obi-Wan/Sabe react to each other during the first time they meet.

    ~aeryn
  2. KrystalBlaze Force Ghost

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    Before this story, Obi-Wan and Sabe didn't have anything going on with them, maybe just a little bit of attraction. I think what you need is an old friend type of reunion, with the attraction still there. I don't like the idea of them rushing up to each other with open arms, because both of them don't strike me as that way, but maybe they could be smiling.

    Now, if you're going for a duty-bound, Jedi hardened Obi-Wan, he wouldn't even smile.

    But that's just me.

    I have to say you've got an excellent plot building up.

    My question is what is the climax?
  3. AERYN_SUN Jedi Grand Master

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    My question is what is the climax?

    I don't worry about the climax until I get a feel for the story itself and where it's heading. Let's not worry about that right now.

    I agree, thing should start out friendly, nothing rushed.

    ~aeryn
  4. AERYN_SUN Jedi Grand Master

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  5. Sabe126 Jedi Master

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    Excellent ideas!!! Please let me know when you start writing. I really want to read this.

    Will have a think about your questions.
  6. AERYN_SUN Jedi Grand Master

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    I've already started writing. I finished working on Chapter 1 today.

    Because it's supposed to be 3 yrs. before AotC, I don't want it to be parallel to the movie and I'm currently looking for a beta-reader, too.

    ~aeryn
  7. KrystalBlaze Force Ghost

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    Sign me up for beta but my time has been so sparse lately I won't do an excellent job with it.
  8. AERYN_SUN Jedi Grand Master

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    KrystalBlaze, if you can't do it, I understand. I'll still be looking. I know all about schedule conflicts, since I went through that with my last two beta's.

    ~aeryn
  9. SobiFan Jedi Knight

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    Heya Obisgirl :D your series sounds very good... lol like I said, I'm also writing one, so I have loads of ideas... but most of them I am using! I'd love to beta read! Mwaha. I have enough time to spare, and I can't resist Sabiwan :D lol I also have Obi and Sabe getting together about 5 years before AOTC... but in a different way than you have planned! *wipes sweat off brow*

    :D
  10. Anyanka Jedi Knight

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    Hi Aeryn, I finally made it over here. :) You have a lot of great ideas, and I know I'll definitely be reading when you start this fic. :D
  11. AERYN_SUN Jedi Grand Master

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    I'd love to beta read! Mwaha. I have enough time to spare, and I can't resist Sabiwan

    thank you, sobifan :D i have up to three chapters written and it's in novella format.
    pm me and we'll work out a schedule.

    ~aeryn
  12. SobiFan Jedi Knight

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    *dances around* I am the beta, I am the muse, I am the re-writer, I rewrite things that I choose!

    .... yeah, anotherwords, I've read all the story that Aeryn wrote so far! :D it's very good... sweet and sexy rawr :)

    :D this is gonna be a good S/O series everyone!
  13. ForceAchtungBaby Jedi Master

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    Looking better and better Aeryn!
    Make sure and PM me when you post it!
  14. AERYN_SUN Jedi Grand Master

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    thanks, FAB :D and i will ;)

    ~aeryn
  15. AERYN_SUN Jedi Grand Master

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  16. AERYN_SUN Jedi Grand Master

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    very important announcement. not tonight, but tomorrow, i will post the trailer for 'defining us'. i just have to finish up some coding and i'll post it on the fanfic-add on thread. i'll post the link here too.

    The Trailer Is Up Defining Us Trailer

    ~aeryn
  17. JazzyJedi Jedi Master

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    Very cool trailer! I can hardly wait! :)
  18. AERYN_SUN Jedi Grand Master

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    thanks, jazzy :D i'm slowly winding down to finishing, but now i'm thinking i should expand some into episode iii.

    ~aeryn
  19. AERYN_SUN Jedi Grand Master

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    The first part of my Sabewan novella, Defining Us, is now up on "The Saga" board.

    Defining Us

    ~aeryn
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