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Saga Destiny's Eye (ROTS AU- Anakin is made a Jedi Master. Can he avoid his destiny?), new story link!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Rassick, Nov 14, 2005.

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  1. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    It wasn?t evil, it was merely the act of doing all that was necessary.

    I'm glad Anakin was able to seperate the two.

    And good riddance to Lola :D

    Wonderful update!!!

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  2. michaellover

    michaellover Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Yes!!! the wacko is out of the building!!! :D :D :D
    And both padme and the babies are allright!![face_love]
    Now all we need is the jedi order to redeem Ani :p
     
  3. rumsmuggler

    rumsmuggler Chosen One star 7

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    That was cool.
     
  4. Jazz_Skywalker

    Jazz_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oh, amazing and awesome ending! And the mush at the end about the baby.... awww! And I'm so glad that Lola is dead, along with Palpy and Rorlak - there's no one left to hurt Anakin and his family.... I'm eagerly awaiting the epilogue!

    jazz
     
  5. Rassick

    Rassick Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Thanks Jazz! As for that "mush about the baby"...did you notice Padme was saying she thinks it's a girl? Earlier in the story, she said she thought it was a boy. :D
     
  6. mixza

    mixza Jedi Padawan star 4

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  7. Rassick

    Rassick Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Thanks mixza. *takes a bow* :)
     
  8. Star_Drifter

    Star_Drifter Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Lola chuckled, amazed at this person?s stupidity, amazed that she had ever loved him?

    Then felt her heart race as she realized she?d been tricked.

    The floor shattered beneath her feet. Her legs flailed about, trying desperately to locate some purchase?

    And finding none.

    She fell?


    Buh-bye, Lola! I don't think that you enjoyed the landing very much, but that's what happens when you fall! [face_whistling]

    Great story! Can't wait for the epilogue! [face_dancing]

    Thank's for the PM! [face_batting]

    Star
     
  9. Darth-Buddy

    Darth-Buddy Jedi Knight star 3

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    Nice job. I am glad that Anakin used his head and not the dark side of the force. Excellent way to get rid of that pathetic Lola.
     
  10. wee_jedi

    wee_jedi Jedi Youngling star 1

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    just caught up on this fic, choice work Rassick, be kinda cool if the jedi council accept heir wrong doings and for what the chosen one really stands for and Anakin still seems himself as a Husband/Father and a Jedi.

    :)
     
  11. Farra_Sti

    Farra_Sti Jedi Master star 2

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    That was a wonderful update. Glad to see Lola dead. Bring on the Epilogue.
     
  12. Pokey

    Pokey Jedi Youngling star 2

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    poor little Lola, such a little freak. Can't say I'm sad she's gone. Anyone who hits Padme that much has to go.
     
  13. Rassick

    Rassick Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Bigtime. :D
     
  14. ulien

    ulien Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Wow, the duel was really great. I can`t wait for the epiloge. Will Anakin return to the temple? Will he ever want to return?
     
  15. jpauln

    jpauln Jedi Master star 3

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    Another brilliant ending Rassick! You always tie things up very nicely. I can't wait to read the epilogue. Good job!
     
  16. Rassick

    Rassick Jedi Youngling star 3

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    And here's the epilogue. This is certainly my favorite of all the fanfics I've done, and hopefully you all have enjoyed it as well.

    Up up uppies!!! (For the last time) :(










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    Anakin reflected that he had always longed for a life greater than that of an ordinary Jedi; a life of significance, of conscience.

    He had certainly lived through one.

    And what of his destiny?

    He had been prophecized to restore balance to the Force and destroy the Sith?

    And in the last week he had cleansed the galaxy of its greatest scourges.

    But was that all he was meant for?

    The Jedi Council just might have an answer.

    They might even welcome him back into their ranks after learning of his deeds. They might apologize and admit the error of their ways and even beg him to come back.

    But Anakin would have none of that.

    He would be the most intelligent and powerful of its members by a long shot, and Anakin knew he was above all that.

    Indeed, he was too good for the Council.

    He had certainly proven himself as such.

    Perhaps all that he had to do now was be a good husband and a good father; Padme and the baby would undoubtedly need him.

    And he would certainly love them both.

    It was a humble charge, certainly far from the glory that he would enjoy as the galaxy?s greatest Jedi.

    Yet, Anakin had had his fill of glory.

    Now was the time for compassion and love, something the other Jedi would never understand and never allow.

    Now was the time for family.

    It was a modest fate, to be sure. Was raising a family all that destiny had remaining in store for him?

    Would he achieve fame and prestige by living in obscurity with his wife and child?

    No, Anakin thought. Besides, those things didn?t matter. Only life mattered.

    Love mattered, too.

    And love was more than enough.





    THE END :_|
     
  17. rumsmuggler

    rumsmuggler Chosen One star 7

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    Nice way to end the story. Anakin decides to live with his family and let go of the Jedi. I do wonder what the Jedi will think of that when they finally learn the truth of what truly happened and realize that he brought balance to the force and is married. I at least hope that Obi Wan and Anakin will remain on good terms.
     
  18. SHADOW_MASTER_W

    SHADOW_MASTER_W Jedi Knight star 1

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    Bravo! Bravo!

    Will there be any Epilouge revealing what the Council or Obi-Wan does concerning Anakin?
     
  19. Ceethreepio

    Ceethreepio Jedi Knight star 5

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    Nice conclusion for a great story. I too would like to know if there would be something for Obi-wan.
     
  20. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Anakin decides to put Padme and the children first [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    I love it!

    What a perfect ending to a wonderful story. Thanks for keeping me alerted to all the updates, and if you should write anything else in the future (hint, hint), please feel free to PM me.

    Bravo!

    =D= =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  21. Jazz_Skywalker

    Jazz_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ditto all of it (especially about the "in the future"). I've loved this story so much and have been looking forward each day to that mail in my inbox that said "story update"! The epilogue was awesome, and I'm glad that he made that choice, to stay with Padme and his kids. This will definitely stay at the top of my favorites pile for a long time!

    jazz
     
  22. ChewbacaRocks

    ChewbacaRocks Jedi Youngling star 3

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    :_| :_| It's over. It was so beautiful!!!

    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE say that you are doing a sequal.

    Thanx for all the pms and the great story[face_peace]
     
  23. michaellover

    michaellover Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Indeed, he was too good for the Council.

    Definitly!!! It's their loss! :p


    Would he achieve fame and prestige by living in obscurity with his wife and child?

    No, Anakin thought. Besides, those things didn?t matter. Only life mattered.

    Love mattered, too.

    And love was more than enough.



    So glad Anakin realized that's all he needed to live happily [face_love]

    :_| :_|:_|:_|:_|:_|
    I'm gonna miss this!!!! a sequel perhaps?? :*
     
  24. jpauln

    jpauln Jedi Master star 3

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    Nice ending! I liked that Anakin was now ready to focus only on his family, though with the children he will raise, his Jedi days probably aren't quite over ;)
     
  25. SBD-518

    SBD-518 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    That, was very good. If only the Canon had been like that...
     
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