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Before - Legends Destroyer of the light - Seeker of Dreams - Obi,Qui, 27th Dec " Love Found "COMPLETE"

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Gkilkenny, Nov 1, 2005.

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  1. Ani-maniac

    Ani-maniac Jedi Knight star 4

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    Jul 5, 2005
    Ummm weren't you a Jedi before you were a Sith???

    I was raised by Darth Mom, I have always been a Sith. ;)

    And despite being a Sith, I am so glad that Obi-Wan is alright, and that Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan are Master and Padawan as they should be! :)

    But wait... *thinks of Obi-Wan's destiny* [face_thinking]

    I shouldn't be happy about that... he helps defeat the Sith... :eek:

    Meditate on this I must. [face_blush]

    I hope you had a very merry Christmas! [:D]

    Ani-maniac
     
  2. kenobiwanobi

    kenobiwanobi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jun 26, 2005
    Amazing.=D= I can't wait to read your works when they are published. :D
     
  3. LilQui-Gon

    LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Jul 29, 2004
    Yay! [face_dancing] [face_dancing] [face_dancing] Another great story completed. PM me when you come up with another!

    @};- [:D] [face_love] @};-
     
  4. Star_Drifter

    Star_Drifter Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jul 18, 2005
    ?P-please I am so sorry,? but please don?t leave me here I?m scared,? I don?t want to die,? my head hurts, and I feel sick,
    p-please save me! please don?t let me fall? he was crying pitifully now and it made Qui-Gons heart wrench at the depths of despair radiating from Obi-wans aura.

    ?Obi-wan please listen to me, I am not going to leave you, I have come to save you, please just hold on.
    I am coming down to get you, just hold on a little while longer, please do not give up young one I am coming.?


    Wow! What a great ending with Qui-Gon having to rescue Obi-Wan before he fell! =D= =D= =D=

    You made Obi-Wan see how much he needed Qui-Gon, and, at the same time, made Qui-Gon realize how much he really cared about Obi-Wan! :D

    Obi-wan was a Seeker of dreams and had sought to realise his dreams of becoming a great Jedi, and it was going to happen, and instead of Qui-Gon being the Destroyer of the light that was Obi-wan, he had found a reason to save not only Obi-wan but himself as well.

    Even if I am a Sith, I love it! [face_dancing]

    And, now, my Sithly friend, I look forward to another great story from you in the future! Please PM me when you start one! [face_batting]

    You are one of my favorite authors, and I always love the situations you put your characters in! :)

    [:D] HAPPY NEW YEAR ! [:D]

    Star



     
  5. obi_webb

    obi_webb Jedi Master star 4

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    Aug 4, 2005
    a wonderful ending to a wonderful story! =D=
    i loved how it began with a flashback of sorts as obi was regaining his memory! that was a good idea!
    and then qui saving obi from falling was PERFECT! and saying that in the end, not only did he save obi, obi saved him as well!
    again, =D= !
    you are a truly talented writer and i look forward to reading your next one! if you are pming people when you post your next story please pm me too!
    i hope you had a great christmas and you have a happy new year!
     
  6. maychorian

    maychorian Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jan 7, 2005
    Ah, what a beautiful ending. It's so good to see them both back where they belong. [:D]

    Thanks for writing this story! I enjoyed it very much.
     
  7. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 27, 2004
    Bastet Thank you kindly
    I am glad you liked it.[:D]
    I'm such a sucker for happy endings!

    Yes so am I;)
    I will start a new story next year:D

    Ani-maniac Thanks,
    I did have a nice Christmas as I hope you did as well[:D]

    I was raised by Darth Mom, I have always been a Sith

    Yes and what a wonderful job in raising
    a Sith she did.[face_devil]

    kenobiwanobi Thank you.[face_love]
    That is sweet of you to say, I just enjoy writing[face_dancing]


    LilQui-GonThank you ever so much and I will be sure to let you know.[:D]

    Star_Drifter Thank you I enjoyed writing it.

    Even if I am a Sith, I love it!
    I sensed that about you, I might have to write a sith Obi story
    one day.[face_laugh] [face_devil] @};-


    obi_webb i loved how it began with a flashback of sorts as obi was regaining his memory! that was a good idea!
    Thank you I try to keep it interesting[:D]

    maychorian Your very welcome, and thank you[:D]

    [face_dancing] HAPPY NEW YEAR TO EVERYONE [:D]







     
  8. AriaJediKnight

    AriaJediKnight Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jul 9, 2005
    *Sniff.* [face_worried] that was...beautiful:_| . I'm happy that their bond was fixed. Yay Obi and Qui. great story. To bad it's over. You MUST let me know when you post your next one. I love reading them.=D= =D= =D= =D= [face_cow]
    Rachel
     
  9. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 27, 2004

    AriaJediKnight Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed
    it.[:D]

    A new one coming next week:D
     
  10. Star_Drifter

    Star_Drifter Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jul 18, 2005
    I might have to write a sith Obi story
    one day.


    :D Now that would be perfect, GK! ;)

    I hope that you do! [face_laugh]

    Thanks, my friend! [:D]

    Star
     
  11. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 27, 2004


    Star_Drifter
    Ok I have started to put sithly Obi on paper[face_devil]
    but I keep wanting to make him come to his senses
    and be good.O:)
    It is going to be hard to write[face_laugh]

    GK
     
  12. Stella_Ripple

    Stella_Ripple Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jul 29, 2005
    Lovely ending! I love the way you can play on my emotions so well- that was a really touching piece! =D=Bravo!
     
  13. Jedi_Tigris

    Jedi_Tigris Jedi Knight star 4

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    Mar 7, 2005
    Oops, didn't realized I hadn't replied yet. Love how Qui saved Obi, and they mended their relationship. :D Love happy endings! Great job!
     
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