Dialogue of AOTC, good or bad?

Like all other SW movies, it's a combination of good and bad dialogue.

 

Let's hear you write a more amusing Jedi mindtrick then, Tokyo
The audience I saw the film with certainly loved the line.

 

I decided to bump this up after seeing the film again yesterday. There was one line in the fireplace scene that just left me scratching my head in puzzlement.

Padme says, "We would be living a lie, one that we couldn't keep even if we tried."

How does one "keep" a "lie"?

 

Just let it lie and simply
keep it where it is...
No, but seriously, she
does of course refer
to the secret.
If they keep their affair
a secret they would be
living a lie.
The way it is said is of
course wrong but then
again who´s to say
that a senator
can´t have a
slip of the
tounge!
Just look at Jar Jar and
his "dellow felegates"!
"My tounge... it´s stuck..."