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Beyond - Legends Distorted (AU, after Rebel Stand, updated 10/18) It is finished! Finished! Mwahahahaha!!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by flowerbee, Aug 30, 2004.

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  1. Anastasia_Fel

    Anastasia_Fel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sep 10, 2004
    Just call me Ann, I get sick of hearing Sam get yelled around the house


    Sequel, Sequel, Sequel

    *crickets chirping*

    Join in guys, Sarah won't listen to me all alone

    *more crickets*

    Someone will start in the morning

    ~Ann
     
  2. Exploded-Girl

    Exploded-Girl Jedi Master star 2

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    Oct 12, 2004
    I'll join you Ann!!

    Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Sequel,
     
  3. Exploded-Girl

    Exploded-Girl Jedi Master star 2

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    Wow! That was 574 sequels!! Hey, can we have that many sequels?!
     
  4. Nomad-2

    Nomad-2 Jedi Master star 4

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    May 23, 2004
    No you can't!
    For all the posts I missed......Great! :D
     
  5. Exploded-Girl

    Exploded-Girl Jedi Master star 2

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    Oct 12, 2004
    [whining_voice] Ah! Come on! Maybe Sarah would be willing to write that many!! [/whining_voice]
     
  6. Nomad-2

    Nomad-2 Jedi Master star 4

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    May 23, 2004
    This is *our* sarah we're talking about?
     
  7. Exploded-Girl

    Exploded-Girl Jedi Master star 2

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    Oct 12, 2004
  8. Nomad-2

    Nomad-2 Jedi Master star 4

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    May 23, 2004
    Very good point.
     
  9. VadersMistress

    VadersMistress Jedi Knight star 6

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    Apr 7, 2004
    Did somebody say sequel? Hmmm... Maybe if we beg she'll do it. :D

     
  10. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Those were great, Sarah!!!

    I think she mentioned that she's writing a sequel.
     
  11. Exploded-Girl

    Exploded-Girl Jedi Master star 2

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    Oct 12, 2004
    oh yeah! I forgot about that.
     
  12. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 29, 2004
    Wooo. Hey, Kelsey? Don't do that, the mods don't like it. And I told you, I have something like a sequel already WRITTEN, you silly people!

    And Meg, dearest beta who's practically seen the whole story...:rolleyes:
     
  13. Anastasia_Fel

    Anastasia_Fel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sep 10, 2004
    *grins sheepishly*

    Ah... Um....

    Well...

    All that chanting was for the sequel to the sequel

    :D

    Is it to early to ask for a sequel to the sequel?

    ;)

    Anyways, Sarah, we aren't silly, WE ARE CRAZY !! 8-} 8-} 8-}

    Luv Anastasia
     
  14. Jagsgrl412

    Jagsgrl412 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Aug 28, 2004
    OMG I go away for a little while and now there are only 2 posts left!!! * cries, begs on hands and knees for sequel* I think I saw Fel and Nomad getting along!!! Oh yeah great posts!!!
    ~Tess
     
  15. Nomad-2

    Nomad-2 Jedi Master star 4

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    May 23, 2004
    I can't believe it two posts left!!!

    Yep I get along with kelsey now........ until I get a new ship! :p
     
  16. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 29, 2004
    I changed my mind. THIS is the last post!!!


    Tahiri started to follow her fiancé down the corridor, but decided to see about the Wraiths instead.

    "Hiyah Auntie!" Kell greeted her, "Why are you outa bed?" she grabbed a table for support,

    "I don't like staying still."

    "Well we're sure.. Argh..." Wes flew into a supply cabinet. "Moving alot over here!"

    "Why don't you strap in?" Tahiri questioned, motioning to Tyria, who was placidly watching her husband's antics from a crash harness.

    "Because," Kell grinned, "That wouldn't be any fun!"

    "You're crazy!"

    "Yep. It's fun too." he smiled at her, "You should try it sometime." she was about to snap something back at him, when Anakin's voice flooded the comm,

    "We got it!" Han slammed his hand down on the hyperdrive lever, and Tahiri was thrown back. She used the Force to keep herself and the Wraiths from flying into a wall.

    "It worked!!!" Han shouted, and the entire ship erupted into giddy chaos.
    ~~~

    Anakin stood up, rubbing his head.

    "Remind me never to do that again." he stumbled, his leg refusing to support him any longer, Jaina caught him.

    "Back to bed little brother," she raised an eyebrow, "And stay there this time." Tahiri soon joined them. Jaina made sure they actually went in, and then she locked the door. She was amused to hear the inner lock click at the same moment.

    Jaina turned when she heard some one call her name, it was Jag. She broke into a run, and hit him square in the chest. The force of her hug knocked them both into a wall. They didn't bother with words, none were needed.

    Theirs was an odd match, an unlikely one; yet, they were perfect for each other, meant to be.

    She slowly turned her face upward, to look into his pale, green eyes, that held so much warmth, and they began to kiss, passionately. They stood like that for a very long time, as if they were the only two people in the universe.

    And, just at that moment, to one another, they were.
    ~~~

    Anakin and Tahiri were kissing as well, only not nearly as passionately. Theirs was a kiss of love's infancy, tender and sweet, full of urgency born of heartbreak, and a lingering fear of the unknown.

    But their budding romance was no less loving than the mature, tempered ones all around them, probably more so. They broke off, and snuck out of the room, softly whispering to each other, oblivious to all else.
    ~~~?

    Jacen quietly watched his brother and his fiancé melt into the adjoining cabin. They probably did not even realize that he was awake.

    He was lying on a bunk, staring at the ceiling. To look at him, one could see all that he had been through, his face was thin, pale, and bruised, his chest and arms were covered with lacerations and burns. His eyes were sunken and red-rimmed.

    He heard some one tap the door, not realizing his brother had locked it, he just sat up.

    "Jacen Solo, you open this door!" hissed a voice, an irritated, female voice. Another, male, voice soothed.

    "It's okay, Mara..." then something snapped, and the door flew open.

    "Did you have anything to do with that stunt with the engines?" his aunt demanded. He shook his head, and Mara swept out after Anakin. Jacen winced, and sent Anakin a quick warning.

    His uncle sat down on the side of his bed. Jacen kept his eyes fixed on the bed.

    "You know that was a very foolish thing you did." Luke said softly, "You underestimated the Dark side." he smiled, "As I did, when I was your age." he lifted Jacen's chin, "Look at me." Jacen did so,

    "I should have known better...I.."

    "Was trying to protect your family." Luke shook his head, "I tried to teach you, but, only experience could make you fully understand. I'm sorry that you had to learn your lesson the hard way. I need you to trust my judgment, or I can't trust you. Do you understand?" Jacen just nodded, and accepted his uncle's hug with relief. Luke sighed, "You know now."

    Luke left Jacen to think, while he went off to save Anakin from his aunt's illogical wrath.
    ~~~

    They made the rest of the trip to Naboo, a
     
  17. Jaina_Solo_59

    Jaina_Solo_59 Jedi Master star 4

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    Aug 30, 2004
    magnificent!
    now when will the sequel be up?
    ~~Kat
     
  18. Nomad-2

    Nomad-2 Jedi Master star 4

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    May 23, 2004
    Great post......


    Can we have the sequel now?
     
  19. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 29, 2004
    Kat- Tomorrow. If you all are very, very good. [face_devil]. Anyway, Kat, you have been my most loyal reader as of late, thank you! [:D]

    Nomad- *sticks out tongue* Thanks! Nomad, you are my favorite Fel-Killer, and an all around goof. :*

    Well, I'm going to do one more round of replies. (If anyone else shows up) Then, it's off to the sequelish thing.

    [:D] :* :p 8-} :D

    @};-
     
  20. Jaina_Solo_59

    Jaina_Solo_59 Jedi Master star 4

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    Aug 30, 2004
    yay!
    have i been your most loyal reader lately? i had no clue!
    ~~Kat
     
  21. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    That was sooooo sweet!!! I love it!!

    Since you've got 3 replies will you put the sequel up?
     
  22. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 29, 2004
    Kat- Yeppers.

    Nat- *breaks down* Okay!
     
  23. Yun-Harla_loves_Jag

    Yun-Harla_loves_Jag Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Aug 23, 2004
    I loved it so sweet
    you really should have a squeal that would make me very happy
     
  24. Exploded-Girl

    Exploded-Girl Jedi Master star 2

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    Oct 12, 2004
    Hey what about me?! I beat Robin! I killed him!! You can ask him!!

    I feel so unloved! *sniffles*
     
  25. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 29, 2004
    Yuny- Ask and you shall receive! :D

    Kelsey- [:D] To my favorite maniac!

    *points my spoiled readers over to new story*

    Well, I'm outta here!

    [:D] :* [:D] :* [:D] :*

    @};- :) @};- :) @};- :)

    To any latecomers: Respond, then follow!

    :D Thanks to all, and to all a goodnight!
     
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