Do What You Want To ( Based On The Song By Chicane and Brian Adams)

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  1. Lyf Mantoe Jedi Knight

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    This is about a girl who hates what she does. She discovers a holo-vid, and she begins imagining herself going away and fighting evil, like Jedi. Pretty soon, she finds herself doing just that... Or something similar.

    <BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Geneva,Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR> Don't give,
    You know it's true,
    Gotta do what you wanna do

    Pilli, Capital of Pallita, The Outer Ring

    Yui Hamaati sighed, pulling the black hood up and over her short raven hair. Another day, another training lesson, learning to become a servant. She looked in her small cracked mirror, making sure that everything was perfect (she was punished for having a hair sticking out from under the hood). She got up and walked out of her small crowded room, ready to begin another boring painful day.


    At The Jedi Temple

    Jedi Knight Dandin Gonff walked briskly to the Jedi Council Chamber. He had been called upon for a mission. He stopped at infront of the door, and someone bowed him in. Dandin nodded, and walked into the circular room. He faced Master Windu and Master Yoda, then bowed.

    "Yes, Masters?" Dandin said.

    "Mission for you, we have," Yoda told Dandin. Master Windu nodded.

    " We have heard that there is a group that is forming against the Senate on the planet of Pallita. They have called themeselves the New Senate. We want you to go to Pallita and clear these people up."

    Dandin bowed. Yoda bowed his head in return.

    "Go, and May the Force be with you."

    "And you, Masters."

    Dandin bowed again and walked out of the Chamber.

    Back In Pilli

    Yui looked up to the front of the room, sighing, then looked down at her datapad to write:
    "Happiness is an unproductive condition."

    She looked up to the front of the room again, but looked back down at the table she was sitting at. She frowned, and picked up the disk, looking at it.

    "Yui Hamaati, get back to your work!"

    "Yes Ma'am..."

    Yui put the disk away into her pocket, and quickly wrote down what was on the screen at the front of the room.

    So... What do you think?
    Lyf Mantoe

    [This message has been edited by Lyf Mantoe (edited 05-30-2000).]
  2. Alli-Wan Jedi Knight

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    Intriguing. (How did this thread fall between the cracks?) You could do many many things with this. Looking forward to seeing what you will do with it. --AWK
  3. jedi jaffacake Jedi Master

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    This looks like it's going to be interesting Looking forward to more.
    Kind of a creepy coincidence, but the song this story's based on (which I really like)was on the radio not five minutes ago. How could I not read it? *lol* Glad I did!
  4. Lyf Mantoe Jedi Knight

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    Wow! Two people have read this story!! YAY!!

    <BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Geneva,Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR> Don't worry if the sun don't shine,
    You've seen it before
    (Actually, Yui has never seen the sun in her whole life)

    Back In Pilli
    Yui flopped down onto her small sleep-couch, and began to pull off her robes when she felt something. She frowned, sitting back up and feeling around in her pocket. Her long fingers touched a cold round thing. Frowning even more, Yui pulled out a little disk, and suddenly remembers what it is. The Holo! Looking around her small room, Yui tried to find her old holo player. Finding it, she pushed the holo into it, sat back and watched. Her eyes widened at what she saw. The Sun! The beautiful, beautiful sun! Different coloured flowers, miles and miles of beautiful fields. Her eyes were glued to the image in front of her. Yui had never, ever seen things like this. Pallita was a planet with no air. It was one big dome, with no sun, just artificial lights, and things like that. Yui jumped when she heard a loud knock on her door. She quickly turned off the holo, and opened the door.

    "Yes? Oh, hello Madam Joone."

    Yui bowed down to her main teacher, a stern little woman, who just looked down at Yiu.

    "Yui Hamaati... In ten minutes time, go to the main hall." Madam Joone said in her high squeaky voice. Yui nodded, and Madam Joone walked away. Yui stood up. This meant only one thing. She was going to be sold.

    Lyf Mantoe
  5. Alli-Wan Jedi Knight

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    Poor thing. Hope she finally gets out of the dome. Keep up the good work. --AWK
  6. light_sabe_r Jedi Master

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    Iteresting,

    Looking forward to more.
  7. jedi jaffacake Jedi Master

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    She's going to be sold? Poor Yui! Post more, soon!
  8. Lyf Mantoe Jedi Knight

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    sorry I haven't posted in a while... Too much Homework!!

    In Pilli

    It was eight minutes after Madam Joone had come into Yui's room and told her to go to the Hall. So Yui was plonding to the Hall as slowly as she could, not wanting to be sold. But then, she might not. She was never picked when a buyer came along. "Too tall," they would say as they looked at her. Most buyers wanted small servants that could not be easily seen. That's why most of her friends had been picked. She sighed. It seemed like she was the only one going to the Hall. That meant that she was chosen, and she could do nothing about it. She reached the Hall, walking into it, and realising she was three seconds early. Madam Joone would be happy...
    Yui knew what to do. She's had thirteen years practice.
    She stood in the middle of the room, looking down at the floor. She heard Madam Joone talking to a man. They entered the room, and stood infront of Yui. The man looked her up and down, walking around her.

    "Yes... She looks strong."

    Madam Joone nodded quickly. Whenever she got a buyer, she always wanted them to go home with their bags.. no, sorry, their hands full.

    "Yes, she is very strong. Very, very strong. She's the strongest out of the all the children." Madam Joone replied.
    I'm a teenager, not a child... Yui thought. The man nodded, continuing to walk around her.

    "She can fight?" He asked. Madam Joone nodded again.

    "Yes, very well." Madam Joone answered. The man nodded, and took Madam Joone aside. Yui could not hear what they were saying, but she knew.

    Five Minutes Later
    Yui was sighing, packing her few things. She stopped as she came to the holo. She frowned, takingthe disk out, slipping it into her robe, and putting the player into her bag.

    Somewhere in Space

    Dandin Gonff looked out the window, at the stars streaking past it. Soon, he would arrive on Pallita. Soon, his first official big mission on his own would begin.


    Lyf Mantoe
  9. Jean Jedi Knight

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    Upping for the move
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