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Story [Doctor Who] The Devil's Due (10th Doctor/Rose Tyler) short one shot

Discussion in 'Non Star Wars Fan Fiction' started by brodiew, Apr 12, 2011.

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  1. brodiew

    brodiew Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Author's Note: This is my first Doctor Who fic. I have yet to see the final episodes of Series 2. So, yes, I'm a bit behind. I hope you enjoy this little bit off randomness. If so inspired, please drop me a note to let me know how I've done. Cheers!

    The Devil's Due



    "Did we really kill Satan, Doctor?" Rose asked as her companion locked in their next destination.

    "From a certain point of view," he replied absently.

    "I'm not sure what you mean," she replied, knitting her brows together in consternation. "Either we killed him or we didn't."

    The Doctor looked up from his ministrations. "You heard what I said to it, right? Which devil are you and all that?"

    "Yeah. So?" she challenged. "He claimed to be all of them."

    "Arrogant, don't ya think?" the Doctor replied, returning to the Tardis controls.

    "He knew things," Rose pressed, not willing to let the Doctor brush her concerns aside. "True things. He said I would die in battle."

    The Doctor stopped moving even as he was bent over the time dial. He turned his head and looked at her, his expression somewhere between frustration and fear. He straightened and took her shoulders in his hands.

    "The beast was a powerful telepath, Rose," the Doctor explained. "He was preying on your fears. He wanted you to fail; to give up. It would say whatever it took. Its power allowed it to look into our thoughts."

    "Then he was the devil!" she declared. "He possessed Toby!"

    "Interesting, that," The Doctor replied, stoically. "But not unheard of."

    Heat rose in her neck and cheeks as the Doctor's non answers grated on her. "Doctor!

    He froze.

    Again.

    "May I have a straight answer? Pretty please?"

    He looked at her askance. "I'm surprised at you, Rose. I never imagined that you would take this subject so seriously. After all you've seen, you still believe 'Satan' is real? One Satan, of the Judeo-Christian religion?"

    "Yeah. Maybe," she said tentatively. "Yeah. What about it?"

    "Even if there were only one Lucifer, which there is, I imagine it wouldn't have been so easy to kill him."

    "Easy?" Rose exclaimed in disbelief. "Easy? You call that easy? I could have died."

    "But you didn't," he added cheerfully. "I knew you wouldn't. I had faith in you."

    It only soothed her a bit. "If he is the real Devil, he could still be alive you know; laughing all the way into the black hole. "

    "Now, you're just teasing me," The Doctor said, thoughtfully rubbing his chin. "Though, I suppose if he was S-A-T-A-N, and we, indeed, shuffled him off, then there would be no evil left in the world. Brilliant!"

    Rose frowned and proceeded to stick her tongue out at him. "Who's teasing who, Doctor?"

    "Allons-Y!" he pronounced. "We're here!"

    "Doctor, if we killed The Devil, then God has no enemy!"

    The Time Lord rolled his eyes and pulled her along to the door.

    "He's got me to keep him busy, for now."

     
  2. RK_Striker_JK_5

    RK_Striker_JK_5 Force Ghost star 7

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    Okay, that last bit was spine-tingling. Although I think your title is a bit off-this is the Tenth Doctor, not the Ninth.
     
  3. GlindaForJediCouncil

    GlindaForJediCouncil Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Mmmm Rose is my favorite! You did a really good job with this fic.
     
  4. Mira_Jade

    Mira_Jade The (FavoriteTM) Fanfic Mod With the Cape star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    Good catch with the 9th there - I was wondering how you were going to make that work. :p

    First off - thank-you for taking up the DW call. I knew that this show would be something that you'd enjoy, but to see fiction as a result is enough to make my day! ;) And, that being said, you've certainlly done the show justice here. This was a really interesting one-shot - pointed and chilling, and it really made me think. ;)


    "I'm surprised at you, Rose. I never imagined that you would take this subject so seriously. After all you've seen, you still believe 'Satan' is real? One Satan, of the Judeo-Christian religion?"

    Yes! Erm . . . no. :p

    . . . yes?

    [face_laugh]

    Great point there. ;)


    "Doctor, if we killed The Devil, then God has no enemy!"

    The Time Lord rolled his eyes and pulled her along to the door.

    "He's got me to keep him busy, for now."


    This is what I like about your writing - this whole piece moved with a purpose, and then the punch at the end left me blinking at the screen for a moment as I processed. Classic. :cool:

    Wonderful job with this, brodie! I definitely can't wait to see what else you have brewing in this fandom. =D=


    [:D]


    ~MJ @};-
     
  5. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    now if that isn't the most interesting discussion ever, i don't know what is. :p

    =D=

    Dr. Who is very much like an old republic jedi LOL with the non-answers and certain point of view.

    :p

     
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