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Beyond - Legends DON'T FORGET (Post Star by Star song fic, Anakin/Tahiri)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Idrelle_Miocovani, Apr 23, 2005.

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  1. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Feb 5, 2005
    Title: Don?t Forget
    Author(s): Idrelle_Miocovani
    Genre: Song fic
    Timeframe: Post- Star by Star
    Characters: Tahiri, Anakin
    Summary: Anakin is dead, but his spirit continues to follow Tahiri.
    Notes: This is my first song fic and the plot bunny just bit my nose when I was listening to my soundtrack of Troy (I hate the movie, but love the music). This is un-betaed and due to suck. :p

    The song is called Remember, from the Troy soundtrack, preformed by Josh Groban.

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    DON?T FORGET

    She runs. The black oblivion of death has incased her. She knows nothing except death.

    She is being followed.

    Remember, I will still be here.

    She stops, panting. She brushes her hair out of her face, her eyes adjusting to the darkness. She half-turns, glancing behind her. Something stirs in the black void, pushing it back.

    As long as you hold me, in your memory.

    She blinks, memories flooding her as the light drifts towards her. All she can see is Anakin? Anakin.

    Why did he have to die? Why did he even create the idea of this stupid mission? Why?

    Why?!

    Was there anyone who could answer that question?

    Remember, when your dreams have ended,
    Time can be transcended,
    Just remember me.


    She sinks to her knees, allowing the distant light specter to approach her quivering form. All she wants is to go back? to return in time, to save him from the clutches of death itself.

    I am the one star that keeps burning so brightly,
    It is the last light to fade into the rising sun.

    The ghostly light shines, wandering ever closer.

    Was her life so utterly destroyed because he was gone and he wasn?t going to come back?

    I'm with you,
    Whenever you tell,
    My story,
    For I am all I've done.


    No, there were too many things that his death had placed on her. She would have to relay the tale of his death many times, to herself, to others? to all the others who wanted to know what had become of their greatest hero?

    In that way, he would live on. In her? through her.

    Remember, I will still be here,
    As long as you hold me, in your memory,
    Remember me.


    The light shines directly in her face. She glances up, a breeze stirring her hair.

    Her lips mouth his name as she looks into his face. She recoils in shock.

    He lifts a hand out to her, his voice echoing in her mind, calling her name over and over again.

    Tahiri?

    She tries to respond, but her mind is fogged with the sound of his voice calling her name, and her tongue refuses to form the syllables of his name.

    I am that one voice, in the cold wind,
    That whispers,
    And if you listen, you'll hear me call across the sky.


    She gasps quietly, and sits down, gazing up at the specter, listening to her own name resounding in her head.

    As long as,
    I still can reach out, and touch you,
    Then I will never die.


    The specter attempts to grasp her hand, but his form passes right through her flesh.

    He calls her name aloud, ?Tahiri.?

    His voice wavers and echoes.

    She smiles slightly, her eyes wet with tears, and shakily says his name.

    ?Anakin.?

    Remember, I'll never leave you,
    If you will only,
    Remember me.


    ?Don?t forget,? he murmurs.

    ?I ? I won?t.?

    He grins, that familiar, typically Solo grin.

    Remember me...

    ?Aren?t you going to ask what you shouldn?t forget??

    She covers her face with her hands, sobbing.

    ?Tahiri?? He tries his best to sound comforting.

    Remember, I will still be here,
    As long as you hold me,
    In your memory.


    ?You?? she struggles with the words. ?You?re dead.?

    He sighs. ?Yeah, I am. But I not dead for you? not yet, anyways.?

    ?What??

    Remember,
    When your dreams have ended,
    Time can be transcended,
    I live forever,
    Remember me.


    ?I live on in your memory, Tahiri,? he says quietly, his form beginning to fade.

    ?Anakin!? she cries, reaching out for him, her hands
     
  2. YodaKenobi

    YodaKenobi Former TFN Books Staff star 6 VIP

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    May 27, 2003
    Aww, that was really sad but comforting. I'm glad Tahiri got to speak with Anakin one last time a litttle and hopefully get some closure. Nice use of the song, and I enjoyed the descriptions of Tahiri's despair.

    Good fic :) I'll add this to the A/T index in the next update after the boards move :D
     
  3. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Feb 5, 2004
    Beautiful! I'm not familiar with the song, but this makes me want to rush over to iTunes and download it! :D
     
  4. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    YodaKenobi: Aww, that was really sad but comforting. I'm glad Tahiri got to speak with Anakin one last time a litttle and hopefully get some closure. Nice use of the song, and I enjoyed the descriptions of Tahiri's despair.

    Thanks! :)

    VaderLVR64: Beautiful! I'm not familiar with the song, but this makes me want to rush over to iTunes and download it!

    Thanks, and yes, you must listen to the song! :)
     
  5. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Mar 26, 2001
    Wonderful, mijita. I liked the "Not for you" comment. So true.
     
  6. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    HOw sad, though I agree there's a measure of comfort in being able to speak to a loved one gone on. Really sweet Idrelle. :)
     
  7. Tahi

    Tahi Jedi Knight star 5

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    I agree that the song is very appropriate for Anakin and Tahiri. :)

    She tries to respond, but her mind is fogged with the sound of his voice calling her name, and her tongue refuses to form the syllables of his name.
    Sad but a beautiful description. :)

    Lovely song fic.
     
  8. Gr8terThanSumOfParts

    Gr8terThanSumOfParts Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jan 27, 2004
    This is Tahi here again. :)

    I've posted a little plug for this songfic at
    Anakin and Tahiri's Place - which is the support thread for all the A/T writers and readers. Feel free to pop on in anytime. :)


     
  9. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    DarthIshtar: Thanks, master! :)

    Healer_Leona: HOw sad, though I agree there's a measure of comfort in being able to speak to a loved one gone on. I thought so too.

    Really sweet Idrelle. Thanks! :)

    Tahi: Thanks! :)

     
  10. DathomiranAuthor

    DathomiranAuthor Jedi Knight star 3

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    Jan 18, 2005
    Beautiful piece. It's very touching and well written.
     
  11. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    DathomiranAuthor: Thanks. I try. :)
     
  12. TahiriSoloFan

    TahiriSoloFan Jedi Padawan star 4

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    May 20, 2003
    Very nicely done! =D=

    I have always felt that Anakin & Tahiri (and all us A/T fans) were cheated out of a real good-bye. One more reason for our sadness at Anakin's untimely demise.
     
  13. FelsGoddess

    FelsGoddess Jedi Master star 5

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    Sep 5, 2004
    Awww, great job. I wasn't happy about Anakin dying at all.
     
  14. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    TahiriSoloFan: Very nicely done! (clapping) Thanks! ::bows::

    :p

    FelsGoddess: Awww, great job.

    Thanks! :)

    I wasn't happy about Anakin dying at all. Same here. :( Were any of us (except a select few)? I stopped reading for three days after they killed him.
     
  15. Astarel_Undomiel

    Astarel_Undomiel Jedi Youngling

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    May 1, 2005
    Upping for others to enjoy... for the last time.
     
  16. Draconarius

    Draconarius Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Feb 27, 2005
    Thanks for the up, otherwise I would have missed this.

    That was so sad. It is good that Tahiri and Anakin got one last chance to talk. Great writing.
     
  17. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Thanks for reading! :) :) :)
     
  18. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Mar 27, 2003
    Oh, very well done. =D= It was great, albeit sad, to see Tahiri get a real goodbye from her beloved Anakin.

    Great job, Idrelle_Miocovani. :)


    JD.
     
  19. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Thanks, JDH3. :) I thought this was not going to pop up again, lol. :p
     
  20. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Oct 2, 2004

    lovely and sad piece

    ~Mags~

     
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