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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Jedi_Knight_Jenobi, Mar 13, 2002.

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  1. Jedi_Knight_Jenobi

    Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Jedi Youngling

    Mar 13, 2002
    The Jedi temple's halls were silent, not a single soul roamed the halls, except for one. Young Obi-Wan Kenobi was restless. Over the past few standard weeks on Coruscant, he's had a series of what seemed like endless dreams, or visions, and their not very pleasant ones at that. He let out an exhausted sigh as he walked down the dim hallway, he tried to keep his footsteps silent, he didn't need anyone wakeing up to question why he wasnt sleeping. He knew very well that it's been exactly 6 hours and 12 minutes since the temples lights were shut down, and everyone was suposto be sleeping.

    /How can I sleep when these dreams haunt me?/

    Obi-Wan headed for the one place that could possibly calm him, the room of 1,000 fountians. He pushed the door open with the palm of his hand and quietly walked in. A small smile pressed on his 20 year old lips. Obi-Wan sat down near the water, he felt the coolness of the grass benieth him. He closed his eyes and began to slip into a light meditation, but as soon as he did the vision flushed back into his mind.

    Blackness... utter blackness. He couldn't see anything, he felt panic start to rise, he reached out to the force....but it eluded his grasp.. it seemed to dangle just inches away. Suddenly the darkness shifted, and slowly it melted to a different color, red, but not just any red, blood red. He closed his eyes, but nothing could stop it. Every where he looked, it was there. Then he heard a fermiluar voice yell out. "Master! Master where are you?" he started to run, everywhere he went the red followed him, and it got closer and closer. It soon turned black again, "Master!" he yelled again, this time his voice sounded like a small child's, and not his. Then the darkness cut him off, she stopped, and looked everywhere for somewhere to go, but there was no where, suddenly everything was consumed by the darkness, and everything grew silent except for the beating of his heart. He heard a rolling sound, and he felt something nudge his foot. He hesitated..but leaned down and picked up, immedatly he knew what it was and he droped it, "NO!!!!!"

    "NO!!!!!" Obi-Wan's eyes shot open to find he was still sitting in the same spot..his breathing was heavy. He gathered the force up and wraped it around himself like a blanket.

    Well what do you think??
  2. Jedi_Knight_Jenobi

    Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Jedi Youngling

    Mar 13, 2002
    Made a few spelling mistakes where theres a she, it should be a he :D sorry lol

    BLADE_KENOBI Jedi Youngling star 1

    Jul 25, 2001
    Great start Jedi Knight Jenobi! I wonder what Obi found? Post more soon!

    Wow! Already got me hooked! Great description of the vision/dream. Keep up the good work!

    Blade :cool:
  4. shanobi

    shanobi Jedi Padawan star 4

    Dec 11, 2001
    Yes,very good start. Does Qui know of Obi's dreams?

    Cant wait for more. :)
  5. Jedi_Knight_Jenobi

    Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Jedi Youngling

    Mar 13, 2002

    <Master! Master where are you?>

    Qui-Gon sat up from his sleep couch, something had awoken him. He glanced around for his padawan but Obi-Wan wasn't in the room. He could feel Obi-Wan's fear, but it dissapeard just as quickly as it appeared. Qui-Gon got out of bed and slid into his cloak. He accessed the door pannel and stepped into the darkened hallway. He knew exactly where Obi-Wan was.

    The fountain room.

    Obi-Wan sat near the water, fighting internally with his emotions. /Should I tell Qui-Gon?/ Obi-Wan thought to himself. He stood up quickly, knowing there wasnt a way out of telling him now; he could sense his Master was awake. He stepped out, and into the hallway. Slowly he began to make his way back toward the Master/Padawan wing. He stopped, seeing Qui-Gon, with a worried expression on his face. "Whats wrong Obi-Wan?" Qui-Gon asked, he could sense his padawan's nervousness.

    "Master.. I need to talk with you."

    "You know you can talk to me about anything, my padawan." Qui-Gon's words and smile reassured him.
    "I've been having dreams.. if thats what they are..more like nightmares.. and their troubling me." Obi-Wan looked at his Master with a tired glance, almost expecting to see a dissapointed look on Qui-Gon's face. He found nothing but a gentle knowing smile.
    "Padawan, dreams may only be dreams, but we shouldn't take this lightly, they clearly have disturbed you enough that you can't sleep, What are they about?"
    "Master, their horrid, I see nothing but blackness, and then blood. Slowly it faded into darkness again, and I was running, it cough me and I was swallowed up in the darkness. I heard you yell out, I felt panic, I called back, but you kept yelling. Then i felt something hit my feet...Master I.." Obi-Wan couldn't finnish. He immedatly felt relief wash over him, he was glad to finally tell someone. "They get more real, every time.." he added quietly.
    Qui-Gon looked as if he were in deep thought for a moment.
    "As i said, we shouldnt take this lightly. In the morning I'll see to it that you talk with someone about these dreams." Qui-Gon put a hand on Obi-Wan's shoulder. He had almost forgotten Obi-Wan wasn't a child any longer. Qui-GOn smiled as he remembered how clumsy Obi-Wan had been, and now, he blossomed into a young man at the age of 20 right before his eyes. Qui-Gon nudges the half asleep apprentience towards their room. "Come, we have to get some sleep"
    they both went back to their room.

    Obi-Wan grumbled slightly as he heard a loud continous beep, he realized it was his comlink. He sighed. Lazily he reached over and picked it up. "Obi-Wan here?"
    "Padawan, we have been summoned before the council."
    Obi-Wan heard his Master's voice radiate through the com loudly.
    "Yes Master." he mumbled.

    Qui-Gon was waiting outside the Council's chambers when Obi-Wan came running to his Master's side.
    "Forgive me Master, for being late." Obi-Wan huffed.
    Qui-Gon nodded, and the chamber doors opened.
    They both stepped in the circle silently. Obi-Wan could feel Jedi Master Mace Windu's eyes shift and settle on him.

    :D Thanks for the replies! and You'll soon find out what Obi-Wan picked up :)

  6. TheFallen

    TheFallen Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 27, 2001
    * GASP! *

    Another story to follow! Yay! I liked the beginning... And we all want to know what he picked up. :D
  7. Nat

    Nat Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jan 11, 2002
    Hmmmm.... [face_mischief] Very interesting! I'll check for updates.. Post soon! :)
  8. PadawanKitara

    PadawanKitara Jedi Master star 5

    Dec 31, 2001
    You caught my interest
  9. Jacka_Leval

    Jacka_Leval Jedi Youngling

    Jan 16, 2002
    Just found this story, Great job so far. You have my interest peaked. Can't wait to see how this all develops :D
  10. Jedi_Knight_Jenobi

    Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Jedi Youngling

    Mar 13, 2002

    Master Yoda was the first to speak.
    "Disturbed we are."
    "Yes, we are." Mace Windu added in his two cents.
    Yoda glanced at Mace and tapped his grimer stick.
    "Know you do, Obi-Wan; why you are here, yes?" Yoda's gaze shifted to Obi-Wan, who didn't look surprised.
    Obi-Wan nodded.
    "Dreams some of us have had. Know we do, you have had simular."
    "Three of us have had strange dreams, all different, but all connected. The force has told us this." Mace looked at Qui-Gon.
    Obi-Wan looked up at his Master.

    /He's had dreams too./

    Qui-Gon nodded slowly.
    "These dreams all forsee something unimaginable." Mace glanced from Qui-Gon's taller form to Obi-Wan's shorter.

    /Gee, they sure know how to stare you down../

    "Spoken to Qui-Gon, we have." Yoda sighed.
    "You will not be going on this next mission with Qui-Gon." Mace stated flatly.
    Obi-Wan was shocked.
    "What?? No! You can't do that..I--" Obi-Wan began to protest but he was cut off by Yoda's yelling.
    "You will stay behind, you must! Obey our rules you will!" Yoda narrowed his eyes at the Apprentice.
    Obi-Wan quickly stopped and bit his bottom lip, hard.
    "Go now, Obi-Wan." Yoda frowned reluctently.
    Obi-Wan bowed and left. It took most of his control to stop himself from screaming in protest. Obi-Wan could feel this was wrong.

    /Qui-Gon couldn't have agreed to this..or could he have?/

    Obi-Wan sighed. He took slow steps as he headed down the hall towards the lift. He looked up and saw someone heading for him.. it was Bant.
    "Obi-Wan.. I'm sorry..I knew.." She looked at his face and knew he was upset.
    "Why? Why didn't you tell me?" Obi-Wan shifted his weight from his right foot, to his left.. He wasn't in the mood for this.
    "I couldnt.. you have to understand.." Bant's Mon Clamarian eyes eyes reflected sadness back at Obi-Wan's blue ones.
    Obi-Wan nodded silently, and brushed past her and into the awaiting lift. He pressed the button to close it, before Bant could turn and say anything more.
    "Oh...Obi-Wan.." Bant frowned.

    "You didnt have to be so harsh on him." Qui-Gon said as the chamber door's closed with a slight bang.
    "Done it is, harshness was required." Yoda turned to look at Mace.
    "We trust you'll be fine on your own?" Mace asked Qui-Gon.
    Qui-Gon nodded.
    "I'll manage.. what of Obi-Wan?" he asked.
    "He will be needed here,we're sure of this. We can not prevent this danger from occuring, it has already begun. It will happen reguardless of what ever actions we take at this time, all we can wait." Mace sighed.

    :) Can u guess whats going on?

  11. TheFallen

    TheFallen Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 27, 2001
    I hope you think of a name soon... Hmmm...

    But I don't care, either way, I really like how this is coming out.
  12. I love Sci Fi

    I love Sci Fi Jedi Master star 4

    Jan 21, 2000
    oooo, very interesting....I wonder what's happening, is this AU?
  13. Jedi_Knight_Jenobi

    Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Jedi Youngling

    Mar 13, 2002
    Obi-Wan walked down the temple's hall. Anger was in his thoughts. Were they not telling him something? Had he done something so wrong that the council was going to remove him? But what? And most of all, why?
    His thoughts were drowned out as he found himself at a demistration. Obi-Wan peered inside at the children. He smiled softly, his anger dissapearing. Obi-Wan watched the children playing and talking as a Jedi Master tried to gain their attention, he got an idea.

    The children looked up as they heard someone noisly step inside the room.
    "Hey, listen up here! My name's Obi-Wan Kenobi, and I'll sit in on this lesson, if you all will." Obi-Wan nodded to the Master. All the children quickly quieted down.

    "You will find him, along with the few others, and..dispose of them. Understood?" A dark form turned to face a smaller form. "Yes, I will do as you wish, my Master."

    Obi-Wan grinned as he had three children no older than 2 climbing onto his lap and planting themselves there as the master went into an explination of what they should do in certian situations. The lesson was short, but the children managed to pay attention with Obi-Wan there. He was like a child magnet.
    A woman came in and escorted the children out of the room, many of them waved and yelled goodbye. Obi-Wan stood up, and streched.
    "I should have you sit in more often, Obi-Wan." The Master smiled, "Thank you for your assistance."
    Obi-Wan smiled, nodded in return and headed out of the room.

    A small form watched the scene from above in stands. Master Yoda sighed sadly. "Fear I do..Hope I do..make right decision you will..Obi-Wan."

    Obi-Wan walked into his room and grabbed a towel. He headed to the refresher, but stopped. He had a message. Walking to the machine he pressed a button and a holo appeared. It was Mace Windu.
    "Hello Obi-Wan I trust if your hearing this..well, that you have this message. I'm sur eyour wondering why we havn't called you before the council. Well theres a reason. We have reason to believe there are spy's among the temple, some may be in the upper levels near the chambers. This information we can't afford to let leak out. We have reason to believe the temple will be attacked. Qui-Gon has been sent to stake out what might be the spy's headquarters. We are unsure of when these spys will attack. The dreams some of us have had are a warning. We're sorry we couldn't explaine to you before the council, but it was nessicary that you believed it was real. You are not going with Qui-Gon because we fear we might need you here incase of an attack." The figure of mace seemed distressed. "And there will be an attack." If you happen to run accross anything important, contact me immediatly. Mace, over and out." Mace flashed a peace sigh as the image dissapeared. Obi-Wan smiled slightly, but then again frowned. He had been wrong, and let his thought's outrule his instincts. Obi-Wan slung the towel over his shoulder and headed into the refresher.

    Qui-Gon ducked behind a metal beam as a figure passed by. It had been 4 hours, and he had learned nothing yet. Not that he expected to learn much, this operation was highly secretive.
    He watched three human's load boxes into a shuttle, couriously he raised his binoculars to see if he could figure out what their cargo was. He felt his senses jump to life as he quickly turned around. A Grungy looking man stood there, blaster aimed at Qui-Gon's neck. "Jedi. I should have known." the man hissed. Qui-Gon slowly stood up. "Don't move Jedi." The man turned his gaze from Qui-Gon to reach for his communicator. Big mistake. Qui-Gon stepped into action. In one fluid motion he snapped his arms out to shove the man backwards. The man taken off-guard stumbled backwards. Qui-Gon raised his hand before the mans face. "You will tell me what's in those cargo boxes."
    "I'll tell ya whats in those boxes, their shippin' bomb's to a secret location. Their after some guy..a jedi, named...Ah whats his name..thats not important." the man studdered slightly.
    "Yes, it is, you'll tell me who the Jedi is." Qui
  14. Jedi_Knight_Jenobi

    Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Jedi Youngling

    Mar 13, 2002
  15. TheFallen

    TheFallen Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 27, 2001
    Aaahhh! Post soon...

    -- falls out of chair --
  16. Princess Jedi

    Princess Jedi Jedi Youngling star 1

    Mar 8, 1999
    This story has my attention. Hope you post again soon.
  17. Arwen-Jade_Kenobi

    Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Jedi Knight star 5

    Feb 9, 2002
    More PLEASE!!!!!!!
  18. Nat

    Nat Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jan 11, 2002
    Yes I like! More!!
  19. PadawanKitara

    PadawanKitara Jedi Master star 5

    Dec 31, 2001
    More please
  20. I love Sci Fi

    I love Sci Fi Jedi Master star 4

    Jan 21, 2000
    great post!!!!!!

    OK , does this story follow the books?
  21. Jedi_Knight_Jenobi

    Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Jedi Youngling

    Mar 13, 2002
    The Fight Against Darkness (Pre-tpm)

    Well heres more!

    Obi-Wan waited outside the council doors. He yawned.

    /Why did the council call me here at this hour?/

    Obi-Wan glanced around the hall back towards the lift. It was 2 o'cloak am standard time. The lights were still off in the hall, he wondered if this was some kind of prank. He was sleeping in his nice cozy bed...he yawned again, suddenly feeling a bit more tired. He opened his eyes to rub them, but noticed something glimmer near the vent.
    "What the..." he stepped closer picking the object up.
    "Bloody hell!" He dropped the shell and ran down the hall towards the lift. He had found the shell from a bomb of some sorts, and the gasses were leaking through the vents of the temple. Obi-Wan pushed the button for the lift to open, but it was jammed.
    "Sithspawn!" he kicked the lift door. He turned to the window.
    "This will be an interesting discussion for the matienance men..." he said as he unclipped his lightsaber from his belt, and sliced a nice neat hole in the window. He carefully pulled the slab of glass inside and set it down. he glanced outside, and pulled his grappling hook from his belt, just in case.
    Obi-Wan stepped out onto the ledge and started to make his way to the end of the ledge. He looked accross at how far it was to the next, and mustered up the force. He leaped and with the aid of the force he landed perfectly. Time was of the essance, he needed to shut of the vent systems. He slid down a slopeing ledge and leaped into the air soaring for the balcony, his Jedi cloak fluttered behind him as he was nearly there, he reached out with his hands and grabbed onto the ledg. He pulled himself up and ran to the door. He entered the access code.

    Access Denied.

    "..Someone changed the pannel codes."
    Obi-Wan slammed his fist up against the machine.

    Access Granted.

    Obi-Wan grinned, that was a trick he and his friends used when they forgot codes. He took a deep breath, and ran inside, entering a dark hallway.
    He looked around, not seeing anyone. His senses were on high alert as he ran down the hall towards the lower levels. Another lift.
    "Looks like this time I'll take ths stairs." he opened the door for the staircase and ran down them. He slowed down as he heard something. It sounded like something scattering accross the floor... He took slow steps as he desended the stairs, he couldn't see and had to rely on his senses to guide him.
    Realization hit him.
    This was a trap! Whoever had done this had set him up to walk right into this. He turned to run back up the stairs but something metalic landed on the previous platform. Obi-Wan's hand went insticntivly to his lightsaber. He could hear the joints groaning. It was a droid of some kind. Obi-Wan stepped backwards down another step. The droid leaped out at Obi-Wan. Quickly Obi-Wan menuvered himself away from the droid, but not without getting a slash on his arm. He felt pain as he turned to face the droid. He knew now that it's arms were giant blades. He ignighted his lightsaber after decideing in only a second the wound was minumal. The droid leaped at Obi-Wan for another attack.
    Obi-Wan ignighted his lightsaber and sliced at the droid's mid-area. The dround landed on the steps in two halfs, which clanged noisly down the stairs. Obi-Wan got an idea.
    Quickly Obi-Wan remebered his grappling hook was prepaired. He unclipped it, and fired up and ahead towards the ceiling where the stairs would most likely end. He tugged on the super strong rope to see if the hook would hold his weight. It would.
    He pressed a small button and the Hook retracted the slack it had let out, shooting Obi-Wan along with it. Once he was suspended in the air, he pressed another button and from another compartment the handle of the hook latched onto Obi-Wan. This technuique was used when Jedi were in harsh climbing condictions outdoors. He was allways finding new ways to work with gadjets. Slowly he used the rolling option to let loose a little bit of rope at a
  22. Jedi_Knight_Jenobi

    Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Jedi Youngling

    Mar 13, 2002
    That ones a bit longer than the others, Enjoy!
  23. Jedi_Knight_Jenobi

    Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Jedi Youngling

    Mar 13, 2002
    More spelling errors lol i need a spell checker, *Droid
  24. Ganki

    Ganki Jedi Master star 3

    Jan 27, 2002
    Please more soon! *oh congrates on a name*

    *kicks the stupid droid*
  25. I love Sci Fi

    I love Sci Fi Jedi Master star 4

    Jan 21, 2000
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