Saga Don't look back- (Luke, H/L, A/P, Obi-Wan) Updated 12.14.05

Cool post.

 

I love the mush. Poor Obi-wan, I feel like he is suffering the most.

 

fantastic story!!
Please PM when the next chapter is up

 

I don't know what to say.
I guess I should whip my own ass for being such a lazy writer. I mean, even if I have school and everything I have written almost the whole chapter but I haven't written the end

I think I have to go and write that chapter.

Thanks everyone

 

This a great story. Can't wait for the next post.

 

This really stuff. You had me laughing and talking back to the story as I was reading.

Thanks a whole lot!!! now my family thinks I am crazy.

This is a sign of a true writer. You have the ability to make your readers respond like they would if they were intensely watching a movie. you got it baby!

 

Here you go. I hope you like it




Chapter 20
"Mad rescue mission"



Nightly streets of Coruscant were full of every sort of creatures.
Most of them were drunken or out to earn some money for another dose. It was dangerous to walk in those streets if you didn?t have someone with you.

But there were some errands.

Three persons had set their course to Coruscant?s Military Prison and there was nothing to stop them.
Who or what could stop Princess Leia Organa anyway when she had taken something into her order of the day...


?Remind me why exactly did I come with you?? Obi-Wan said and shivered in cold.

?Cause you didn?t want us to alert whole city of our presence,? Leia and Luke said together.


*Actually I don?t understand what bad can it do. Han has already done the job for us, Leia sent her brother mentally.

*It is strange that media doesn?t say anything about that incident. I think the Chancellor has paid them off for some reason.

*Maybe he has something to hide?

*We?ll find out when we have freed Han.


?Ben! How many troopers are guarding that place?? Luke asked.

?There is no need to start a fight, Luke. First we need to try diplomatic solution but if you want to know then there are 200 troops at both sides of the building plus 1 squad of specially trained guards.?

?Oh, and that?s it? They really don?t know who they are dealing with,? she shook her head.

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Han leaned against his cell door and watched a clone trooper marching back and forth through the corridor.
It was the most interesting thing to do and he had done so 2 hours already.

?Hey buddy! Could I get a call!? Hello!? Are you listening you big piece of plastic! I said I wanted a CALL!? Han tried to get his attention when trooper made to his cell.

?Shut up!?

Han looked how his guard walked away and shouted then:? Thanks a lot pal! You were a great help!?

?You know what? Maybe you should get yourself a woman. I?ve heard too long without one might turn crazy,? Solo yelled.

Where are you Leia!?

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Commander Thire?s comm. link peeped.

?Sir!?

?I want you to double your guard at lower levels of Military Prison, Commander. Prisoner number 438 has to be erased from databank. If anyone comes to ask, he doesn?t exist!? low voice ordered.

?Yes, sir! It will be done!?

?Oh, and Commander Thire. Don?t forget to pay a visit to our prisoner. I am afraid he has to be punished for what he did,? Sidious chuckled.

?All clear, sir! Thire out!?

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?There it is. Coruscant?s highly guarded Military Prison,? Obi-Wan pointed at the big grayish black building.

?It seems so small,? Luke commented.

?Oh no, it isn?t. Most of the floors are underground. That?s why it is so hard to escape,? Obi-Wan put on his hood.

?I don?t care a construction of that building. Let?s go already!? Leia was getting impatient.

She didn?t want to think what had happened to Han or where was he. Was he okay? Had he been hurt?
All those thoughts only hardened their mission and she was smart enough to avoid them but with Obi-Wan talking to you how hard it was to escape you just felt so depressed.


?Did you hear that?? Luke pulled Obi-Wan?s hand.

?Hear what??

?Somebody growled!?

?It was probably your stomach.?

A pair of furry claws crushed Luke into a bear hug and Chewie growled happily.
Leia held back his laugh as Luke desperately tried to get out of wookiees hug.

?Good to see you too!? Luke gasped as he got out of his embrace.

?It seems we received some reinforcements. Now, if you don?t mind I would like to get some sleep tonight so lets make it a short one,? Kenobi smiled.

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just cant help to love sidious so beatifuly evil.

that was sort of a ciffie because i desperately need the next update.

 

Exciting post! Update again soon!

 

Loved it! It was great to see an update to this story.

Please go on, and hugs for the PM!!!

 

Leia using Aggressive Negotiations was cool!! Please add me to your PM list!!

 

Please add me to your PM list as well.

Nice job

 

?Move on faster. We don?t have all day to lose here,? one voice said.

?What do you think I am doing? It is not easy to move around in cramped pipes,? other voice replied angrily.

?If even you can?t go on, how am I supposed to do it??

?Are you saying I am fat??

This is good! Hmm. I wonder what Sidious is up too. Thanks for the PM. Can?t wait for the next chapter!

~KT

 

Everything was going according to plan.

Oh, this is interesting. I wonder does Sidious know the truth about timetravel?

 

Arggg I hate when he does that... shakes head...

So they got Han out.. well that is something.. but they have more problems coming on their way... well thats not a surprise... lol

Great new part, cant wait to know more..

Mary

 

Thanks everybody!
Sidious has a lots of things in mind and you'll see what I mean after few chapters when ROTS period starts

 

Wonderful update!!!!


I am so glad that they found Han, I was getting very worried for him.

Can't wait for more.

 

Wow! Cool Story!

 

Gotta love a daring rescue. And of course Palpy is two steps ahead of everyone.

 

Weeeee!

* Marmida for making him a Knight!

Anyway, I wanted to let you know that I am editing first chapters. Just to make them easier to read.
And of course, I hope in time I can fix major grammar mistakes I have

Oh, and that reminds me something...BETA READER NEEDED!

I mean, I know I don't have good English grammar and stuff but if there is anyone who would be so kind to help, please let me know

 

Suddenly he felt a great wave of emotions washing over him. Obi-Wan knew what it was and he didn?t need to check their link with Anakin to prove it.

Actions of this night will bring two new beings into this world who would change the fate of the galaxy once and for all.

And those two are sitting here beside me in this very moment.

favorite scene right there

oh no whats up with sidious..

I'll be a beta reader if you want. I love this story so much.
leia-- ahaha " Are you saying I'm fat?"
- Jenn

 

This was a fantastic update! I'm glad they were able to get Han out alive. I wonder how all this fits into Sidious' plans?

 

Great update can't wait for the next post.

 

Wait! Where's the rest? Noooo!