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Saga Dooku's Death

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Joshollie9210, Jun 7, 2003.

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  1. Joshollie9210

    Joshollie9210 Jedi Youngling

    Jan 1, 2003
    Anakin stared coldly at Dooku. He hated having to "share" a master with him. He was jealous. He wanted to be Sidious' only Apprentice. He hated Dooku. He had sliced his arm , and yet he had tolearn the ways of the Dark Side with him , as if he was some sort of elder. He hated it.He hated him. He hated Obi-Wan who gave him the hidious scars on his head. He hated Padme' for betraying him and not coming to the Dark Side with him. But he hated Dooku above all. He pulled out his saber and swung it at Dooku viciously. But Dooku sensed him with the force and whirled around and ignited his. He slashed and twirled until he was on the gorund staring at Dooku. The damned fool had cut his other arm off. Big mistake. Now he would have to have two mechanical arms. He leaped into the air and sliced Dooku's head off of his neck. It droopped to the floor , Dooku's face still smiling in a puddle of his own blood. His body crumpled to the floor , leaving blood on Anakins lightsaber handle. "You know," said Sidious , "That is how all apprentices have their lightsabers red." Anakin turned to face him. "They kill so many people the blood eventually seeps into his saber crystal and it turns the color of the victims blood." Sidious smiled. "The more blood you shed , the stronger the lightsaber is." Anakin grinned. Just then Rune Hakko and Nute Gungray came into the room and saw Dooku and his head in the puddle of blood on the floor. "He's dead? That is it! No deal!" They were about to walkaway. Anakin looked hopefully at Sidious and Sidious nodded. Anakin slit Rune's arm off then stabbed him , and sliced Nute's head off. "Pretty soon you will have the most powerful saber of all the jedi." Said Sidious. Anakin grinned mischieviously.
  2. PatttyB0123

    PatttyB0123 RSA Latin America star 6 Staff Member Manager

    Apr 2, 2003
    Hi, nice story, but will be easier to read it if you place more paragraphs.
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