~*~Dragon's Son~*~(JA)

Qui-gon waited in his apartment with his Padawan, Obi-wan. He wondered why Yoda wanted to meet here to inform them of their mission instead of at the Council chambers. The door chimed and he went to answer it. There stood Master Yoda, with Atrus and a cloaked figure behind him. Qui-gon looked at the stranger for a moment.

?Come in, Master,? Qui-gon said and gestured.

Yoda hobbled in followed by Atrus and the stranger.

?Explain we should,? Yoda said as Qui-gon closed the door.

He looked to Atrus expectantly.

?All right. There is trouble on the outer dimensions of this one. The trouble is quickly entering this system. I suppose that you all have heard about the conflicts on the outer rim. Well, an enemy who wishes to conquer this galaxy causes that. But I don?t think I should be telling you this,? Atrus said and looked to the cloaked figure.

The cloaked figure pulled back his hood to reveal a young man of about twenty. His handsome face had a half healed scar just beside his right eye. It looked like he had shed tears of blood. His blue-green eyes were deadly, but also sad. His blond-brown hair was slightly messed up.

 

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Good begining!!!! MOREEEEEEE!!!!

 

Wow! I loved the beginning! I've never read any of your stories though, so I'm clueless as to whom Atrus is.....? but anyways, POST!!

Jessica

 

Thanks for your comments!

Atrus appears in most of my JA stories and one or two of my OT stories. She is a good friend of Qui-gon and Obi-wan's.
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?I think I had better introduce myself. My name is Tynan, but please call me John. I have just escaped from the Father?s clutches again with Atrus?s help. My Father and Mother are the enemies that are causing most of the out brakes of rebellion right now. As Atrus said, they wish to control this dimension and destroy anything that opposes them. My Father is known as the Force,? John said then held up a hand to quiet any questions, he lowered it when he knew they would not ask, ?Atrus has explained the reasoning of the Force to me in this dimension. My Father is known by that name is because he conquers and controls by Force. The reason that I have come to you is because I have been told that you two are the best in this type of thing. I need your help as well as does the rest of the galaxy.?


?I think I am speaking for both of us when I say that we feel we should, but what do you want us to do?? Qui-gon asked.

?We, as in Master Yoda, Atrus, I have come up with a plan that might work. Myself and someone else will be returning to the castle to find out what my Father plans to do. I will be posing as a servant to the person who goes as myself. The rest will stay here and start gathering forces to help bring him down,? John said.

?Who is going to be your replacement and why do you need one?? Obi-wan asked.

?Because as of right now, I am too weak to resist my Father or Mother?s manipulations. We can?t afford that right now. So someone stronger must go in my place. Besides, my parents never cared about our servants since most are droids or androids. They won?t probe me then and I can still help the other. As to who it is that will replace me, it must be someone within my height and body build and the person must be in this room. That only leaves you, young Kenobi,? John said.

?But I don?t look like you,? Obi-wan pointed out.

?I can fix that. But I need to make sure of something. Can I test your mind shields?? John asked.

?Why?? Obi-wan asked suspiciously.

?Like I said, my Father and Mother are very manipulative of the mind. I need to make sure you are up to what they will throw at you,? John said.

Obi-wan looked to Qui-gon. Qui-gon sent his Padawan some assurance.

?All right,? Obi-wan consented.

He felt a burning pressure in his mind. He easily blocked it. It grew stronger and he blocked it again. After a while, it finally went away and John stepped back gasping.

?You have very strong shields. Good. Bu I hope it is your strength and not my weakness that is keeping me from getting in,? John said.

?I hope so too,? Obi-wan agreed.

 

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Looks like I'll have to come out of my lurk for once. More? Please? <puppy eyes>

 

Great start! A very interesting idea! Please post more as soon as you can!

 

Thanks for your comments!
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?So do you accept to help us?? John asked.

?I don?t think I have a choice,? Obi-wan said.

?Then we had better start immediately. If you will excuse us, Master Qui-gon,? John bowed and quickly gestured Obi-wan to follow him.

They went into another room.

?Ok, stand in front of the mirror and stand strait,? John said.

Obi-wan did as he was told.

?Ok, you will see what is happening but it won?t hut, I promise you,? John said.

Obi-wan waited and saw that his reflections shifted into John?s. He looked at the other in surprise.

?That went well,? John commented.

?There isn?t a scar,? Obi-wan pointed out.

?When my Father tried to capture me he didn?t know I was injured. So he would expect me to be uninjured,? John explained.

?Why would he want to capture you?? Obi-wan asked.

?Because I am his hair to his the dark realms. My sister is the other one, but my Father can?t find her,? John said.

?Where is she?? Obi-wan asked.

?It is better that you don?t know. Come, I will answer your questions later,? John said and walked out of the room.

Obi-wan sighed and followed him.

 

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?Glad to see you didn?t blow him up,? Atrus smirked.

?Atrus, I love you and all. But don?t joke about that,? John joked.

?Shouldn?t we be getting on with this,? Obi-wan muttered.

?Sorry. Atrus, if you will open it. We will get started,? John said.

?Wait,? Qui-gon said.

He pulled Obi-wan aside.

?Be careful,? he said.

?I will, Master,? Obi-wan said.

Qui-gon embraced him briefly then released him.

?Lets get this over with,? Obi-wan said.

Atrus nodded and lifted her left hand. A purple near black portal opened. John looked at Atrus and something flickered in his eyes, sadness but something more. He pulled his hood up and walked into the portal. He disappeared.

Obi-wan looked back at his Master then walked into the portal as well. It closed behind him.

 

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Just found this...more?

 

?All right, we are almost there. We are going to have to walk the rest of the way,? John said.

?Is there anything else I need to know?? Obi-wan asked.

?Don?t let my Mother touch you with her bare skin, she?ll know you are not me and she will have control of you if that happens. Also, do not be surprised by their appearances,? John warned.

?I think I can handle it,? Obi-wan said.

They approached a huge black castle.

?I hope you can,? John said.

 

They arrived at the castle. The guard let them into the castle. It was dark inside, but not so dark that Obi-wan couldn?t see.

They were led to a huge throne room. There was a large dragon curled on a throne and a beautiful young woman standing beside him.

?So you have returned, my son,? the dragon rumbled.

?Yes, Father,? Obi-wan said.

He felt tendrils of evil search his mind and he blocked them. They dug harder but he continued to hold his shields. Finally they disappeared.

?You still hide your self? Never mind. How did you get away from Atrus?? the dragon asked.

?It was easy, Father,? Obi-wan said.

?Who is this?? the dragon asked.

?My new servant,? Obi-wan said.

?Good. You may go to your room,? the dragon said.

?Thank you, Father,? Obi-wan said.

They were then escorted out of the throne room to John?s room.

 

Cool story so far! How many are you writing at the same time?!?!? And all of them are very very good too!

Speaking of other stories, is anything going to be added to Blood for Tears? You can't kill him and leave us wondering why, can you.. ?

Post soon!

 

?That was too easy,? Obi-wan commented when they entered John?s room.

?Yes, because he is just playing with you, hoping for information. He is a weaver of words for one thing, so watch what you say. Just do as you did just now and you will be fine,? John said.

?So, now what do we do?? Obi-wan asked.

?Well, we should see if we can find my Father?s plans for your Galaxy. They should either be in his throne room or his planning room, or the bedroom. Fortunately, he doesn?t trust my Mother very much so it won?t be in the this time,? John said, ?So I will check his throne room and you should check his planning room, since he won?t be in it at this time.?

?What if he is in his throne room?? Obi-wan asked.

?I?ll be all right. I?ll put up a disfigurement spell and hope for the best,? John said.

?That doesn?t sound much like a plan,? Obi-wan commented.

?It?s all we have at the moment. Meet me back here in one hour. We only have till morning to find the plans,? John said and slipped out of the room.

Obi-wan sighed and followed him.

?Where do I go?? Obi-wan asked.

?Just go up to the next floor and there is a bolted door. Its usually unlocked so just go in. Good luck, Obi-wan,? John said.

?May the Force be with us,? Obi-wan muttered as he made his way to the second floor.

After he got to the second floor, he quickly found the door and went in.

 

Hey this is great poat more please

 

oh, neon! Why do your stories always have to be so addictive? Not that that's a bad thing !!

 

He gaped at the maps around the room. He then focused at task at hand. He went to the large desk and looked around. Suddenly he heard the door open. Why hadn?t he sensed someone approaching? Maybe it was the darkness filling this place. He decided he shouldn?t hide and just waited.

The young woman that had been beside the dragon stepped in.

?Tynan! What are you doing here?? she asked.

?I just wanted to see Father?s plans for the Jedi Galaxy,? Obi-wan said.

?You are picking up your Father?s language again. But really, why do you want to see them?? she asked.

?I want to know what he is planning so I can be apart of it,? Obi-wan said, guessing at what to say.

?Very well, they are in the left hand shelf,? she said.

He felt the dark tendrils try to wrap around his mind again and he pulled up his shields.

?I wish you would stop doing that, Mother,? he growled, guessing again, maybe it was this place that was affecting him.

?I thought you would let your Mother in, but I guess not. She must have really warped your mind, baby,? she said softly.

He felt her touch his shoulder. He remembered John?s warning and was glad his clothing coved most of him, except his face. She moved her hand to touch his face when he grabbed it.

?Do not toy with me, Mother,? he snapped, what was wrong with him.

?Sorry, baby. I had better go,? she said.

Obi-wan sighed after she left and looked at the plans. They seemed to be the right ones. He put them into a pocket inside his clothing and left the room.

 

what is she trying to do to him?

 

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John met him back at the room.

?You got the plans?? he asked.

?Yes,? Obi-wan said and handed him the plans, ?I had a run in with your Mother.?

?Let me guess, she tried to gain access and control of your mind,? John said as he laid the plans out and looked at them.

?Yes, it wasn?t pleasant,? Obi-wan sighed.

John glanced at him.

?Try living with it for one thousand years; it gets to be a headache after a while. It also seems that you are picking up the dark energies in this place,? John commented.

?Is that why I am acting strange?? Obi-wan asked.

?Probably. This place is soaked with dark power. Plus, I left most of my dark presence here when I ran off. It didn?t help much and you are most likely feeling it around. But as soon as we are out of here, it?ll go away. Even I feel it right now,? John sighed.

?What did she mean about someone twisting your mind?? Obi-wan asked.

?My parents believe that Atrus is using spells to pull my mind to her ways. That is far from the truth. I chose my paths a thousand and five hundred years back,? John said.

?Are you as old as Atrus?? Obi-wan asked.

?The same age actually. Two thousand and five hundred years old and I still don?t like it here,? John said.

?What do the plans say,? Obi-wan asked.

?Father really wants to kill the Jedi along with what ever Sith remains in the Galaxy, plus any Force or Magic sensitive he can find. That is what he usually does first, but this time, he is starting with an all scale attack on Coruscant. Obi-wan, we don?t have time to wait till morning, we have to leave now,? John said.

?You won?t be leaving at all, Tynan,? a voice rumbled as the dragon stepped into the room.

?Obi-wan, run!? John shouted and pulled a small trigger on the desk.

A secret door opened up. They both ran through it and it closed behind them.

?Guards, search the castle! I want them found!? the Force thundered.

 

obi is going to get caught