Lyrael, of course you can use my crawl. Credit me as Adam Bertocci. I understand why you struck the words "unbeknownst to all, even the Chancellor"--I realize it's a bit wordy, though I think it's important--but I don't think you should add the word "unusual" with "disturbance in the Force". That's implying that there's such a thing as a USUAL disturbance in the Force. Rick McCallum loves you!