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Saga Edited Challenge 1: You're Lucky You're Cute

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Padawan Fangirl, Feb 18, 2014.

  1. Padawan Fangirl

    Padawan Fangirl Jedi Padawan star 3

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    Nov 28, 2013
    I don't own Star Wars, but it sure owns me.

    Edited Challenge, Round 1: drabble

    Description: My OC, Jessica Yissin, scolds child!Boba Fett.

    Requires: an angry female; weapon; flowers.

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    "Boba! Get over here please!" Jessica's face read of pure anger waiting to spill over.

    The young boy shuffled into her bedroom. "What's wrong, Jessica?"

    She held up a lacy black dress and her warm lightsaber. The dress had been neatly cut almost in half. The cut was smooth-edged. "Why were you playing with my lightsaber?"

    He stared down at the floor, and muttered, "I just wanted to see how it works."

    Jessica put her hands on her hips, "Well, you, young man, are in deep-"

    The young boy quickly reached into his pocket and pulled out two flowers. "I found these yesterday with Dad."

    She stared at them, smiled, and took them. "You're lucky you're cute, Bob'ika."
     
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  2. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 7

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  3. Carlos Danger

    Carlos Danger Jedi Knight star 2

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    Jul 25, 2013
    Nicely done! Good submission for the challenge! It looks like all of us made the deadline.
     
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  4. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Jul 26, 2005
    Awwww....that was so sweet! [face_love][face_love][face_love]
     
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  5. Padawan Fangirl

    Padawan Fangirl Jedi Padawan star 3

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    Thanks for all the reviews, guys! =)
     
  6. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Aug 21, 2006
    Fun update with Boba
     
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  7. serendipityaey

    serendipityaey Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 24, 2004
    Haha, awwwww Cute!