Saga Edited Challenge 1: You're Lucky You're Cute

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  1. Padawan Fangirl Jedi Master

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    I don't own Star Wars, but it sure owns me.

    Edited Challenge, Round 1: drabble

    Description: My OC, Jessica Yissin, scolds child!Boba Fett.

    Requires: an angry female; weapon; flowers.

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    "Boba! Get over here please!" Jessica's face read of pure anger waiting to spill over.

    The young boy shuffled into her bedroom. "What's wrong, Jessica?"

    She held up a lacy black dress and her warm lightsaber. The dress had been neatly cut almost in half. The cut was smooth-edged. "Why were you playing with my lightsaber?"

    He stared down at the floor, and muttered, "I just wanted to see how it works."

    Jessica put her hands on her hips, "Well, you, young man, are in deep-"

    The young boy quickly reached into his pocket and pulled out two flowers. "I found these yesterday with Dad."

    She stared at them, smiled, and took them. "You're lucky you're cute, Bob'ika."
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  3. Carlos Danger Jedi Knight

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    Nicely done! Good submission for the challenge! It looks like all of us made the deadline.
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  4. KELIA Manager Emeritus

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    Awwww....that was so sweet! [face_love][face_love][face_love]
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    Thanks for all the reviews, guys! =)
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