Beyond Empire of the Hand (Post NJO: Jaina Solo, Jag) Completed 9/26/05!

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  1. SilSolo Jedi Grand Master

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    JAG LIVES YIPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well, I hope to be able to catch up with teh rest of this and you can blame Darth Dillon (my U.S. History teacher actually told the class that he got that as a title, so I'm using it) for my lateness. I guess this means you're posting that series that you posted a trailer on soon?
  2. Yodas-evil-twin Jedi Grand Master

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    I do The next series will be much darker. I'm almost worried they'll be too bad.

    The darker the better.
  3. Whitey Force Ghost

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    *slowly chugging along* I'm comin', I'm comin'... :p
  4. Yodas-evil-twin Jedi Grand Master

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    For those who are glad that Jag's alive, two things. 1. There are still four fics left. 2. "If it bleeds we can kill it."
  5. TahiriSoloFan Jedi Master

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    Hope nobody minds my dancing:


    [face_hypnotized] My eyes! My eyes!

  6. Pelranius Force Ghost

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    Goodshow! Blooday good show!

    Nice to see Jag fine.

    Jaina and Werv (sp)'s adventures are still continuing, obviously.

    I am quite surprised that she didn't push Fel and Parck further to find out everything (which is obviously going to be vital)

    C-3P0 is still C-3P0. Neurotic as ever.

    Looks like I was right about the Vagaari's overlords (are they from the off screen Sith Empire of KOTOR?)

    Parck probably still has a lot of explaining to do.

    And I thought this was only the last part of a TRILOGY! (well, everyone can be wrong at least once, I guess)

    =D=
  7. YodaKenobi VIP

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    scoundrel: Ha! I knew you weren't going to kill him here. But why do I get the sneaking suspicion that you've only kept him alive just to be able to do more nasty stuff and possibly still just kill him later? *nervously thinks back to Jaina's vision from the beginning of this story*

    I'm glad you remember that [face_mischief] Jaina's vision will come to pass soon ;) I'm sure Jag will be perfectly safe in the future though [face_whistling]

    'Tir's subtle, ain't he?

    Yes, very :p

    So, Evlyn is staying . . . and Alema's staying with her? Yikes. Not good.

    Jaina should have stayed that way she could have trained Evlyn and been with Jag, right?

    *headdesk* I knew she'd start backpedaling.

    She's got a lot on her mind...

    Well, at least she said it out loud. But what a mushy, bittersweet, heart-wrenching goodbye! Very beautifully done!

    Thanks, glad you liked it. Sorry it couldn't have been more of a happy ending 8-}

    Oh wow. You've left us with so many questions - I'm really looking forward to the next installment!

    Hoping to have it up sometime before the end of the year [face_praying]

    I realize that this story got much bigger than you had originally planned, and I'm just guessing that one of the reasons this might not have always been so enjoyable to write could be because you had to write a lot about a character who's not exactly your favorite ( )

    I actually enjoyed the Jag scenes :p I think it was so linear, just focusing on Jaina for the most part that I missed writing other characters, but more than that I knew there wasn't that much to the story, or that I couldn't reveal much of what was going on, so it would never be much more than a teaser no matter how many chapters were packed into it.

    so I just wanted to thank you so much for all of your hard work! I've really enjoyed this story!

    Aww, thanks you for reading it [:D] I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

    Now, let's party! (Oh, and I'd be the last person to complain about your dancing, dearie - you know: people in glass houses shouldn't throw stones! )

    I'm glad I'm not the only one who's horrible then ;)

    Thanks again :D




    jaya: Actually, I DO mind. [

    I'm into it too much to stop now

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    Sil: JAG LIVES YIPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well, I hope to be able to catch up with teh rest of this and you can blame Darth Dillon (my U.S. History teacher actually told the class that he got that as a title, so I'm using it) for my lateness.

    I'll have him disintegrated [face_devil]

    I guess this means you're posting that series that you posted a trailer on soon?

    I don't know how soon, but I'm hopeful. In the middle of working on it right now, far from completed.

    Thanks for reading :)





    evil-twin: The darker the better.

    I'll keep that in mind ;)





    Whitey: *slowly chugging along* I'm comin', I'm comin'...

    No worries :D





    TSF: My eyes! My eyes!

    Yes, hide the children! :p




    Pel: Goodshow! Blooday good show!

    Thank you *bows*

    Nice to see Jag fine.

    For now ;
    Jaina and Werv (sp)'s adventures are still continuing, obviously.

    Yes, they will be separated by the start of the next fic but I may be evil enough to bring them back together [face_whistling]

    I am quite surprised that she didn't push Fel and Parck further to find out everything (which is obviously going to be vital)

    Yeah, I'm holding that for later, obviously ;) Fel and Parck aren't ready to let it slip yet.

    C-3P0 is still C-3P0. Neurotic as ever.

    As he will be forever.

    Looks like I was right about the Vagaari's overlords (are they from the off screen Sith Empire of KOTOR?)

    The overlords or the Vagaari? I'm not really ready to say what the Raithian
  8. oldjedinurse Jedi Master

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    Enjoyed it? I loved it!!

    [cut to scene of Jaina kissing a random dark-haired man] :* [face_love] :*

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    You're funny.

    oldj

    P.S. Looking forward to reading ... very much!
  9. Magnuskn Force Ghost

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    As for the preview... wow. :)

    But... you better not kill Tahiri, YK! <primes musket>

    ;)

    Otherwise, I´ll be obligated to found the FADTIYKFF. I think you can figure out the acronym by yourself. :p

    Magnus
  10. crackjacks Jedi Knight

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    Very Very Much want to read this now!

    That was...wow! I could really see every thing happening inmy mind...just cause I'm wierd like that.

    --kt
  11. TahiriSoloFan Jedi Master

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    =D= Very nice! So exciting! :cool: J/J A/T [face_love]

    Have you posted that same trailer in another of your threads? I could swear you've threatened to kill Tahiri before... o_O :p
  12. TKeira_Lea Jedi Grand Master

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    JAG LIVES?

    :confused:

    Drat!

    Congrats on concluding the beast, my friend! =D=
  13. jaya02 Jedi Master

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    *shakes her head at Kenobi*

    Please.....don't........dance......












    But that was a good trailer.
  14. YodaKenobi VIP

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    oldj: Enjoyed it? I loved it!!

    [face_dancing]

    You're funny.

    Glad you liked that ;) Had to leave it ambiguous [face_mischief]

    P.S. Looking forward to reading ... very much!

    Thanks, hopefully it will be sometime soon :)





    Magnuskn: As for the preview... wow.
    But... you better not kill Tahiri, YK! <primes musket>


    Musket? Wait... can lightsabers block musket fire? :p

    Otherwise, I´ll be obligated to found the FADTIYKFF. I think you can figure out the acronym by yourself. :p

    I got it, thought at first I thought the "F's" might mean something else 8-}




    crackjacks: Very Very Much want to read this now!

    :D

    That was...wow! I could really see every thing happening inmy mind...just cause I'm wierd like that.

    Hehe, glad to hear it. Hope you enjoy the fic when I post it :)





    TSF: Very nice! So exciting! J/J A/T

    What "J/J" exactly? :p

    Have you posted that same trailer in another of your threads? I could swear you've threatened to kill Tahiri before...

    Yeah, I put it in TLF months ago :p Not everyone here saw it though because it sort of kills the suspense of who lives :p





    TKL: JAG LIVES?
    Drat!


    I've failed the example you set by letting him live :p

    Congrats on concluding the beast, my friend!

    Why thank you :)





    jaya: *shakes her head at Kenobi*
    Please.....don't........dance......


    *Stops* [face_blush]


    But that was a good trailer.

    Glad you liked it ;)
  15. WynssaStarflare Jedi Master

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    ooo the sequel looks interesting.....
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  17. Chimpo_the_Sith Jedi Grand Master

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    The reply I owed you ;)

    You let Jag live = good

    Wrev is working on my nerves = good

    Jaina is as always not decided = whatever :p

    Callista = :mad: [face_skull]

    last chapter = great :D

    Congrats on ending the story =D=

  18. princess_melissa Jedi Master

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  19. Jedi_Eruanne Jedi Master

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    Why do I get the feelign that you have ruined my hopes? Hmm, maybe it's the fact that:
    YOU LET ANAKIN TURN TO HE DARK SIDE!!!!!
    YOU LET JAINA KISS A MAN THAT WASN'T JAG!!!!!
    YOU LET TAHIRI DIE!!!!! (unless of course that's like, some sort of vision, but knowing you, I doubt it. ;) )

    I am done, love you're dancing btw. ;)
  20. Yodas-evil-twin Jedi Grand Master

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    That trailer has me just as pumped as before.
  21. Magnuskn Force Ghost

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    1.) This is open to interpretation... could as well be Jacen going dark. Much more likely as well, though he may be doing his "I´m doing it because I think it´s best... what, me a darksider?" thing, he is doing in the TUQ right now.

    2.) Well, same as with Anakin kissing a unknown woman, I think there may be ulterior reasons... I trust the YK will give us J/J at the end. :)

    3.) Uh... me no thinkee. Doing that would kinda go against everything what I expect from a YK fic. I think he is misleading us here, like he always likes to do. The cad. [face_whistling] ;)

    Magnus
  22. Jedi_Eruanne Jedi Master

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    That's true...it would be soo YK to do something like that. ;)

    Very true...*strokes chin* I guess we shall just have to see.....

    I will believe it when I see it. [face_laugh]

    So, when can see it? [face_batting] Pluuuuuuueeeeeaaassseeee......
  23. FORCEBlLADE Force Ghost

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    Sorry I haven't posted any replies, I moved to a new place and I haven't got my computer setup yet. Great ending, leaving that cliffhangar/foreshadowing thing. Looking forward to the next serires.
  24. TKeiraYodaSidious Jedi Padawan

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    I've failed the example you set by letting him live


    Yes, yes you have...

  25. TKeira_Lea Jedi Grand Master

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    Oops! :eek:

    The evil sock got loose!

    *stuffs TYS back in her box*

    Bad sock. Bad sock. [face_shame_on_you]
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