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Saga Empty Hearts, Full Teacups. Drabbles. Anakin, Obi-Wan, mourning the lost

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Valairy Scot, Mar 5, 2013.

  1. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Backpacking One Pack a Day Mod of New Films star 6 Staff Member Manager

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    "I miss Ahsoka.” Anakin leaned against Obi-Wan’s doorframe, cradling a cup of hot tea in his hand. “This doesn’t make up for it, but the gesture is appreciated. Yeah, only you would leave me a cup of tea and the space to come to you when I was ready.”

    “Are you ready?”

    “No.” He lapsed into silence and sat beside his mentor. “Thanks, Obi-Wan, for trying.”

    Obi-Wan cradled his tea and spoke pensively, eyes watching the curling steam rise into the air. “We each have a loss to mourn.”

    Satine.

    And Ahsoka.

    “Yeah. You okay?”

    “No, afraid not.”

    “Me neither.”

    ~~


    “I’m sorry.”

    “Me, too.”

    “Anakin! I’ve always been taught, always believed ‘do or do not.’ And I’m afraid I - did not.”

    “You tried; Obi-Wan, I know you tried.”

    “Trying doesn’t – doesn’t count.”

    Anakin shook his head rather angrily. This was just another thing wrong with the Order. Obi-Wan, a good man, had done his best and was now slumped in his seat, feeling a failure.

    “It counts with me, Master. You can’t win every battle, you gave the good fight.”

    “And my failure ‘to do’ cost us two good women…”

    To that truth, Anakin had no words of comfort.
     
  2. Bale

    Bale Jedi Master star 4

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    May 9, 2005
    :) I love the line: “It counts with me, Master. You can’t win every battle...
     
  3. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 7

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  4. Luna_Nightshade

    Luna_Nightshade Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Jan 25, 2006
    Poignant small scenes. I also like the "it counts with me." Lovely.
     
  5. serendipityaey

    serendipityaey Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 24, 2004
    Awwww :( Appreciate their little gestures of supporting each other, especially
     
  6. ZaraValinor

    ZaraValinor Jedi Master star 4

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    May 31, 2002
    So sad. I couldn't blame Ahsoka. The Council pretty much sold out one of their own to appease the Senate.
     
  7. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Aug 21, 2006
    Touching piece