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Beyond - Legends En Vie

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by SilSolo, Oct 28, 2007.

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  1. SilSolo

    SilSolo Jedi Knight star 5

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    Mar 5, 2004
    Title: En Vie
    Disclaimer: I do not own the song En Vie, as that belongs to Apocalyptica, and I most certainly don't own Star Wars or else you'd all be watching YJK series cartoons instead of reading LOTF.
    Summary: TK patiently awaits Jacen's arrival while isolating herself from her suitors.
    Timeframe: You decide.
    Characters: TK, Jacen, reference to Allana
    Notes: I hope I translated this right. Thanks, Striker, for beta'ing and Idrelle, for decoding the lyrics. :D

    They wanted her.
    They were nobles; she was queen.
    They professed to love her.
    She professed to hate them.


    Pourquoi faire autant d?histoires ?
    Pour des lendemains qui chantent faux
    Pourquoi poser tant de questions ?
    Faut-il que l?on soit aussi cons
    Ne suffirait-il pas de se voir ?
    Un peu plus un peu moins mal
    Ne suffirait-il pas de vouloir ?
    And the world all gone to war



    Why the evil, why the hate?
    Why leave royals with dark, cruel fate?



    They wanted her.
    They told their lies and promised peace.
    And yet it would not cease.
    For that, she spurned them.


    Réduisons nos peines
    Achevons nous pour le plaisir
    Distillons nos haines
    Et buvons à nos souvenir
    Buvons pour ne plus mentir
    Achevons nous pour le plaisir


    They wanted her.
    They worked for would-be usurpers.
    They fought for her ?love?.
    She despised them.


    Et si un jour, tout refleurit
    Que par amour, on reste en vie


    They wanted her.
    Those inbred fools.
    Her man?s coming, and she awaited him.


    Pourquoi laisser faire le hasard
    Quand nos rêves perdent la mémoire ?
    Faut-il que l?on soit aussi bête ?
    C?est l?histoire qui se répète
    Ne suffirait-il pas de se voir ?
    un peu plus un peu moins mal
    Ne suffirait-il pas de vouloir ?
    and this world all gone to war



    Why the evil, why the hate?
    Why leave royals with dark, cruel fate?



    They wanted her.
    On their side, bearing their heir.
    Nobles vied and the commoners died.
    She hated them.


    Réduisons nos peines
    Achevons nous pour le plaisir
    Distillons nos haines
    Et buvons à nos souvenirs
    Réduisons nos peines
    Achevons nous pour le plaisir
    Distillons nos haines
    Et buvons pour ne plus se mentir
    Buvons à nos souvenirs
    Achevons nous pour le plaisir


    They wanted her.
    She claimed Jacen.
    As slave and consort.
    And he?s not one of them.

     
  2. SilSolo

    SilSolo Jedi Knight star 5

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    Sil's rather shoddy translation.

    Why do as many stories?
    For following days which sing false
    Why ask so many questions?
    It is necessary that we?re idiots
    Wouldn't it be enough to be seen?
    a little more or less badly
    Wouldn't it be enough to want?
    And the world all gone to war

    Let us reduce our sorrows
    Let us go for the pleasure
    Let us distil our hatred
    And let us drink to our memory
    Let us drink not to lie more
    Let us go for the pleasure

    And if one day, all reflects
    That by love, one remains in life

    Why leave the chance be
    When our dreams lose the memory?
    Is it necessary to be stupid?
    It is the history which is repeated
    Wouldn't it be enough to be seen?
    a little more or less badly
    Wouldn't it be enough to want?
    and this world all gone to war

    Let us reduce our sorrows
    Let us go for the pleasure
    Let us distil our hatred
    And let us drink to our memories
    Let us reduce our sorrows
    Let us go for the pleasure
    Let us distil our hatred
    And let us drink to lie itself more
    Let us drink with to memories
    Let us go for the pleasure
     
  3. RK_Striker_JK_5

    RK_Striker_JK_5 Force Ghost star 7

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    Jul 2, 2003
    I like this, Sil. Pretty angsty here for TK. *Kills the non-Jacen suitors, including JINO*
     
  4. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Feb 5, 2005
    =D==D==D=

    Powerful stuff here, Sil. Very angsty, but highly appropriate for Tenel Ka. :) Wonderful job!

    And glad I could help you with the lyrics. :) [:D]
     
  5. SilSolo

    SilSolo Jedi Knight star 5

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    Striker and Idri: thanks. Guess I'll have to tone down the angst a bit. either that or stop writing heavy metal TK songs, even if it's metal on cellos.
     
  6. SilSolo

    SilSolo Jedi Knight star 5

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    Mar 5, 2004
    is it really this bad that nobody's reviewing?
     
  7. YodaKenobi

    YodaKenobi Former TFN Books Staff star 6 VIP

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    May 27, 2003
    This is really beautiful, Sil =D= So much emotion. Well done! You have quite a talent for these poems. :)
     
  8. GeithJiseo2

    GeithJiseo2 Jedi Master star 5

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    Jan 21, 2004
    Great post. Emotional. =D=
     
  9. SilSolo

    SilSolo Jedi Knight star 5

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    YK and Geith: thanks
     
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