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Saga Entanglement. This is dedicated to all who read it! Thank u to the ppl that made me feel better!

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  1. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002
    Title: Entanglement

    Author: diamond_pony2002

    Summary: What if Obi-Wan was with Anakin when his mother died? Would he be able to stop Anakin from taking his first step to the Darkside? It will probably go to the end of the movie but it will be changed. My perspective of how I think AOTC could have been!

    Disclaimer: I don't own them and I never will, sadly. They all belong to Mr. Lucas. : - (

    Spoilers: Some AOTC spoilers

    Notes: // = telepathically talking
    Italics = thoughts
    This is my first fic gentle! lol. Just kidding, but it is my first fic and feel free to tell me if there's anything wrong.


    "I....I love y-". She started to say, but never finished. Shmi Skywalker was now out of her binds and laying in her son's arms, staring up at him.

    Anakin felt her life force slip away, piece by piece. No, Mom. Don't leave me! Please, I'll do anything! Just please don't leave me!, Anakin thought. Her breathing stopped and she went limp in Anakin's arms.

    Oh, no. Force, don't do this to him. Obi-Wan watched as Anakin ran his hand over his mother's face and shut her eyes. He put a hand on Anakin's shoulder, knowing he would need a lot more than his master right now. Just as he was about to look away, he saw something shimmer on Shmi's face. He moved his head forward a little bit to see what it was. A tear drop. A single tear drop fell from Shmi Skywalker's eyes, leaving Obi-Wan to assume that she was crying in the Force, letting them know that she was alright now and not in anymore pain, and that tear drop was the last of her pain draining out of her. "Anakin. Maybe this is for the better. She isn't in pain anymore. She never will be in pain again."

    "How can this be for the better? I've lost just about everything. First it's Master Qui-Gon, now it's my mother. What next? Am I going to lose you too?" He felt rage. Anakin closed his eyes, crying silently for about one minute and then slowly lifted his head. They will pay for this!!! I WILL MAKE THEM! I never want to see their hideous "faces" again!

    Obi-Wan almost withdrew his hand from Anakin when he felt the anger radiating off of him. He not only felt anger, but also hate, sadness, rage, and......fear? What is he afraid of?, Obi-Wan thought this just as Anakin was setting his mother gently on the ground.

    He looked up with so much rage in his eyes. He started to run to the entrance to his mother's hut, but ran into an invisible wall of some type. Anakin fell backwards and started to get up again, but Obi-Wan leaped for him and tried to hold him back. Anakin struggled in his arms, trying to get free. "Anakin, calm down!",shouted Obi-Wan. "Let me go! THEY KILLED HER!" Anakin couldn't take much more of this. "Fighting them won't help matters! Try to understand this!" Obi-Wan curved a wall into Anakin using the Force and sent him flying back into the wall of the hut. When nobody came, Anakin realized that his master had somehow formed a soundproof Force bubble around the hut so nothing could be heard. He accepted defeat and drew his legs up to his chest, wrapped his arms around them, and lowered his head to his knees. Anakin Skywalker finally stopped fighting and cried. Cried for his mother, his pain and anger, and for the Tusken Raiders for being so cruel. "Master, I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to react like that. I just....I miss her so much.", and with that, Obi-Wan walked over to Anakin, took him into his arms, and held him. "Shh, it's alright Anakin. It's alright. Your anger got the better of you."

    After a few minutes, Anakin's crying subsided and he pulled away from Obi-Wan. He quickly wiped away his tears and said "What am I going to tell Cliegg and Owen?". " You'll tell them the truth. I know they'll understand." //Let's go back to the house now, Padawan.// Anakin replied with, //What about my mother? We have to take her back.// "Alright, we'll take her back with us.", said Obi-Wan. "Thank you, Master," Anakin hugged the Jedi Knig
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    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002
    Hey ya'll Here's the second post! Hope ya'll like it! Comments are greatfully accepted!

    Anakin awoke to the sound of voices in the kitchen.

    *Well, I guess I missed dinner.* he thought. Just as he was getting out of bed, someone knocked on his door.

    "Come in," he said tiredly.

    "Breakfast is ready. I thought I'd let you know," Padmé said with a smile.

    "Thanks. I'll be out in a minute," was all Anakin said.

    When he was done dressing, he went out to the kitchen and sat down at the table.

    "Good morning, Anakin," greeted Cliegg.

    "Good morning," he said dully.

    *I sure hope he's going to be all right,* thought Cliegg. He wasn't sure how Anakin was getting through this. Cliegg and the rest of the "family" waited for Owen to come back from the vaporators. He was about to go out looking for him with Obi-Wan when he came through the door.

    "What took so long, son?" asked Cliegg.

    "There were some tusken raiders over the hill and I had to hide until they left," was Owen's answer.

    "Oh, well I'm glad you're safe, son,".

    After breakfast, Anakin, Padmé, and Obi-Wan decided they should leave.
    "Well, I hate to see you leave, but you have business to do and we'll let you get with it. It was nice to meet all of you. Good-bye," said Cliegg.

    "Thank you for letting us stay with you yesterday. It really gave Anakin some time to recuperate," said Obi-Wan.

    "It was no problem at all. I was anxious to meet him and get to know him. Maybe we'll meet again someday," Cliegg said.

    "Maybe. Well, Anakin, are you ready to go?" asked Obi-Wan.

    "Yes, Master. I'm ready," said Anakin.

    "Good. We should be on our way now. Good-bye Cliegg, and thank you again,"

    "Good-bye, and your quite welcome," said Cliegg, and with that, Anakin, Padmé, and Obi-Wan left.


    When they got to the ship, Anakin went into the bedroom and sat on the bed.

    *I miss you, Mom*, Anakin thought. He didn't even notice he was crying.

    Obi-Wan knocked on the door and then Anakin felt the tears on his face. He quickly swiped them away and said

    "It's open." Obi-Wan walked in and asked

    "Are you all right, Anakin?".

    "I'm fine," he said.

    "Do you want anything?" asked Obi-Wan.

    "My mother," he stated, and then he started sobbing. Obi-Wan walked over to the bed and sat down beside the sullen boy.

    He wrapped him in a hug and said, "I know you do, Ani. I know." He moved his hand in soothing circles on the young man's back, in hopes of stopping the crying. No such luck. The man sobbed for about 15 minutes before he fell asleep in Obi-Wan's arms. He gently laid his sleeping apprentice on the pillows and covered him with some blankets from the closet. He silently went to the door and switched off the lights. He left the boy in the room and shut the door. Obi-Wan leaned against it and sighed.

    *There has to be something I can do to help him*, he thought.

    Padmé was walking by the room when she saw the young Jedi Master.

    "Is he all right?" she asked worriedly.

    "He's asleep right now. I hope he doesn't have any nightmares, but I wouldn't count on it. He has them almost every night," he said. He probed out to Anakin's mind with the Force to see if he was okay. Relieved, he found Anakin was just fine, in a deep sleep without nightmares.

    "He's fine right now. He isn't having any dreams," he said softly.

    "Good. I think I'm going to go rest for a while. That heat really did something to me," she said tiredly.

    "All right. I'll just be reading a datapad of mine and Anakin's mission," he said.

    "Ok. Goodnight," she said with a yawn. She went into the other bedroom and went to sleep.

    *I hope Ani will be ok* she thought.


    Obi-Wan saw the ship was landing and decided to wake up Anakin and Padmé. First, he woke up Anakin.

    "Ani, wake up. We're here." Then he saw Anakin was sweating and shaking. He put his hand to the boy's forehead. He was relieved to f
  3. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002
    Hey ya'll! I'm back! Sorry I haven't posted in a while. My mom got a Cd burner built in and they had to take the tower away from us to install it. Here's the next part!

    Padmé woke up later and saw Obi-Wan kneeling on the floor. He sensed she was awake and opened his eyes.

    "Is he going to be all right?" she asked. Obi-Wan smiled a little.

    "Yes. He'll be fine, but he's asleep right now. He has to rest for the next few days and then he'll probably be back on his feet again." Padmé gave a relieved sigh.

    "Good. I was starting to get worried." He chuckled.

    "You and me both." The door to Anakin's room opening startled them.

    "Anakin, why are you out of bed? Are you okay?" asked the young master. Anakin shook his head.

    "It happened again." Obi-Wan gave him a confused look and got up.

    "What happened again?" he asked.

    "I had another nightmare. Why won't they stop? I?I can't take it anymore!" the padawan said. He sank to his knees and started crying.

    Obi-Wan walked over to Anakin and kneeled down beside him.

    "Anakin, I don't why you keep having these nightmares, but in time they will stop. I can assure you of that," he said gently and then helped Anakin into a chair.

    Anakin's crying stopped and he asked "Master, do you think, and tell me the truth, that my mother's okay now?" Obi-Wan brushed two fingers down Anakin's cheek.

    "Yes, Anakin. She's fine. Somehow I can feel it and she's watching over you right now. Just like Qui-Gon is watching me." Anakin smiled.

    "Do you really believe that?" Obi-Wan nodded his head.

    "I do too, Anakin. She's your guardian angel," said Padmé.

    "She's right, you know," Obi-Wan said pointing to Padme with his thumb. All of them laughed and quieted down.

    "So, how about we all go out and get something to eat?" Anakin shot out of the chair and raced to get his cloak and ran back in 3 seconds flat.

    "I'm ready!" he said with glee. Padmé and Obi-Wan started cracking up after that.

    "Okay, let me guess. Your hungry?" asked Obi-Wan with a hint of amusement.

    "You got that right!" said Anakin. He ran out the door and shot down the hall dodging everyone.

    "Well, I think it's safe to say that he's going to be eating a lot tonight," said Obi-Wan.

    "I think you're right." laughed Padmé and with that, they both ran after Anakin and found him already in a speeder.

    "I thought you guys would NEVER get here!" he laughed out.

    After dinner, they all went back to the temple and talked for a while. Everything was going fine until suddenly they heard something from Anakin's bedroom. The two jedi went into the room while Padmé waited in the main room.

    "Master, what's going on?" asked a scared Anakin.

    "I don't know, but whatever it is that was in here sure knows how to be sneaky." answered Obi-Wan.

    Sorry. Had to stop there.
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    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002

    Aurora Forbes hid in just enough time to get away from the Jedi.

    "Man, this is way to risky, but luckily enough I like to take risks," she said. The sith was a tall woman with dirty blond hair in a braid, a blaster on her utility belt, a dagger, and an attitude.

    Just when she was about to come out of hiding place, her comm. Unit rang and she quickly answered it so it would not be heard for very long.

    "Forbes here," she said with annoyance.

    "How are you doing, my apprentice?" asked a deep, accented voice.

    "Just fine, Master. Except for the fact that the Jedi are so alert right now that I probably won't even be able to take one step," she said.

    "Well, just do your job and come back quickly. I have a new assignment for you," he said.

    "Yes, Master. I'll be done quickly. Forbes out," she answered with confidence. She put her comm. link back into her pocket and crept quieter than a snake can sliver out of the room.

    She jumped onto the edge of the roof and climbed to the top.

    "Well, Jedi. Let's see how quick you really are." Just then, she heard somebody come up behind her.

    "Well, I'd say we're pretty quick if we caught you," said a voice from the shadows. Aurora spun around to face the voice.

    "So, Anakin. We meet again."
    Obi-Wan was clueless as to what the sith was talking about. He looked at Anakin and saw a determined and angry look on his face.

    "Anakin" he said, "Calm down. Who is she?" he asked, still seeing the woman as a mystery.

    "Aurora Forbes. She was always at the pod races on Tattooine and whenever I raced, she would try and kill me," he answered.

    "Why would anyone want to kill you?" Obi-Wan asked his apprentice, who obviously had more answers to this entanglement than him.

    "I have no clue, Master. All I know is she wanted me dead," Anakin said.

    "You really want to know why I wanted you dead, Skywalker? I'll tell you. It was because I knew you would be a Jedi someday and that would create a big problem for me. I've spent years thinking about how I would capture you and kill you, but nothing ever came up. Until my master suggested something that's strictly confidential, so don't even think you're getting answers out of me," Aurora answered rudely. Then, she ran as fast as she could and jumped off the roof.

    "Well, I guess we'll just have to wait and see what happens," said Anakin.

    Padmé started to worry when Anakin and Obi-Wan left the room in such a hurry. She decided to go see what was taking them so long, but before she could get up she felt something hard slam on her head and she was in a great deal of pain. Suddenly, the whole world went black.

    Anakin and Obi-Wan were about to go back inside when Anakin dropped to his knees and grasped his head in pain.

    "Anakin! What's wrong?" asked a worried Obi-Wan as he kneeled beside his pained apprentice.

    "Padm'e?she's?.hurt?we?have to?get?back to?the room," he managed to get out between gasps. When he was breathing easier, Obi-Wan helped him up and they ran back to the room.

    When they got there, Anakin opened the door and called "Padm'e! Padm'e where are you?!?"

    He looked everywhere in their quarters and found only one thing. A note. It read:

    "I bet you're wondering where your precious little girlfriend is, aren't you, Skywalker? Well, I'll give you a little hint. The place we're at is very dull and musty, I guess you might say. If you want to find the planet I'm talking of, you'll have to travel very far away. We'll see you when you get here. Oh and one more thing. I hope you carry medical supplies with you. Your girlfriend's going to need it.

    From your worst nightmare,
    Aurora Forbes."

    And that was the end of it.

    "Master, we have to find Padmé. If she gets hurt in anyway, I'll never forgive myself," Anakin said, scared.

    "Padawan, she'll be fine. We'll get to her in time. Now, if you let me look this over, ma
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    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002

    When they got to the ship, Anakin laid Padmé down on his bed and let the healer and her padawan look her over. It was a good thing Obi-Wan knew her or else nobody would have come with them.

    "Anakin, there's not much I can do for her until we get to the temple and so???her chances for living are?well, they're pretty limited," Bant said sadly.
    *No,* Anakin thought.

    "I'm sorry," said Bant.

    When they got to Coruscant for the second time to save someone's life, Padmé was barely living. Anakin picked her up and ran as fast as possible to the infirmary. They got her there in time and they saved her from a painful death.

    Anakin and Obi-Wan were in the waiting room when Bant came out and sat down with them.

    "She's going to be fine, but you should know that she is very sick. She was in that awful place so long that she barely survived, but she'll be fine. She's awake now if you want to see her," she said.

    With those words Anakin rushed into Padmé's room, sat down beside her in a chair, and grasped her hand tightly, willing to never let go.

    *Padm'e, I love you,* he thought, and, after about 2 hours, fell asleep in the chair he was sitting in, oblivious to his master opening the door and walking in.

    Obi-Wan walked into the room Padmé and Anakin were in after talking to Bant for a while. He wasn't surprised when he saw Anakin asleep in the chair. He grabbed a blanket from the small nightstand drawer beside the bed and covered the sleeping boy with it. He dropped a kiss on Anakin's forehead and shut off the light and pulled the door shut a bit, leaving it a crack open so if anybody needed to come in, the door opening would awaken neither of them. The young Jedi Knight went to his quarters and to his bedroom where he fell asleep in his own bed, which he missed terribly out of all the beds he'd slept in all his life.

    In the morning, Anakin awoke to find himself covered with a blanket and his master sitting on the couch near the wall.

    "I had a feeling you would wake up soon," said Obi-Wan with a hint of amusement.

    "How?" asked the tired apprentice.

    "Anakin, when you come in here almost everyday of your life and you fall asleep in that chair, you'll always wake up before the sun rises with a terrible pain in your back," Obi-Wan said.

    "Well, you're right about one thing, Master," Anakin replied.

    "What's that, Padawan?" Obi-Wan asked.

    "My back does hurt and the sun isn't up yet," Anakin said with a chuckle. He stood up and stretched and walked around the room a bit to stretch his cramped legs. Anakin looked to Padmé and saw she was still asleep.

    "Master, do you really think she'll be ok?" Anakin asked.

    "Yes, Anakin. Now, stop worrying and go talk to her," Obi-Wan said with false annoyance. Anakin looked sat him like he was crazy and turned around. He looked straight into beautiful brown eyes and ran over to Padmé and grabbed her hand.

    "Are you ok?" he asked.

    "I've got a headache and I'm a little thirsty," she said. Anakin picked up the glass of water on the table next to him and put the straw in Padmé's mouth and she gulped it down pretty fast.

    "Thank you," her voice was hoarse. Anakin just smiled. He put a hand on her forehead and eased her headache.

    "Better?" he asked. She nodded.

    The healer came in and said "Well, I'm glad you're awake, Padmé. As soon as your back is healed, you can leave." Padmé was so tired that she didn't make a move.

    "Padmé, are you okay?" asked a concerned Anakin.

    "Huh? Oh, um yeah. I'm just a little tired," she said groggily.

    "You should be. The painkiller we gave you will make you tired for the next few days," said the healer.

    "You should go back to sleep now," she said. Padmé nodded her head and laid back down on the pillow and sank under the covers. She was asleep within seconds.

    "Come on, Anakin. You really should get out of this room and
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    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002

    Obi-Wan was starting to remember a time when he was sick as a padawan and Qui-Gon was taking care of him when he said he loved him and called him Dad.

    *It's like he's a young me* he thought. The sun was up but he decided to let Anakin sleep a little longer today since he was sick.

    It was 9:45 when Obi-Wan went to wake Anakin up. He walked in the room and saw that the bed Anakin slept in was empty. He looked towards the bathroom and saw the light at the bottom of the door.

    Obi-Wan heard Anakin getting sick and said, "Anakin? Are you alright?". He didn't get an answer so he just waited until he came out. Anakin's face was horribly pale and he stumbled out the door, coughing at the same time. He dropped to his knees in a coughing fit and Obi-Wan went down immediately beside him. After it was over, Anakin started crying.

    "Ani, what's wrong?" asked Obi-wan.

    "I don't wanna be sick anymore," he sobbed out and leaned against his master.

    Obi-Wan put his hand on the back of Anakin's head and said, "I know you don't, Ani. You'll get better soon. I promise," soothed Obi-Wan. He put his arms around Anakin and rocked him back and forth. Anakin cried himself to sleep then. Obi-Wan put him in his bed and prayed he would get better soon. He was about to leave when he heard a familiar voice.

    "Obi-Wan, your prayer will come true. Anakin will be fine tomorrow. That's a guarantee," said Qui-Gon. QUI-GON?!?

    Obi-Wan's blood froze when he heard the voice of his former master. He turned and said, "Master? Is it really you?". Qui-Gon wasn't a transparent ghost like most other spirits. His body was that of a regular human and he went over to the shocked but happy Knight.

    "Yes, Obi-Wan. It's really me but I just came to tell you that Anakin is going to be fine soon and you're doing a more than wonderful job training him."

    He put a hand on Obi-Wan's shoulder and the Knight hesitantly reached up to see if this was real and not a dream. When he started to believe it wasn't a dream, he launched himself into Qui-Gon's arms.

    "I've missed you, Master. This is so hard," He started crying because he could not stay forever.

    Qui-Gon put his arms around Obi-Wan and tried to soothe him like the many times he had when his Obi-Wan had just awoken from a nightmare.

    "Shh, it's alright, Obi-Wan. It's alright. I have an idea. If I'm allowed, I'll come visit you and Anakin once or twice a week, ok?" he said. Obi-Wan looked up a bit happier at Qui-Gon.

    "Really? You'd do that?"

    "Of course, little one. I've wanted to come see you for years but they didn't arrange it until now," Qui-Gon answered. Obi-Wan buried his face in the master's cloak again.

    "Ok. Anakin and I would like that."
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    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002
    Obi-Wan went to check on Anakin and found him curled up in the blankets, sweating. He walked over to the bed and sat on the edge. He put his hand to Anakin's forehead and sighed in relief when he found that his fever broke. Anakin stirred a little and opened his eyes. He looked at his master.

    "Do you feel any better today?"

    "A little bit," he said tiredly.

    "Well, you should. Your fever broke but you still have to take a different medicine for your coughing. Bant said you'd still be a little sick for a few days," Obi-Wan told the sick padawan. Anakin made a disgusted look at the sound if those words.

    *Great. Now I have to take cough medicine.* he thought.

    "Why don't you go back to sleep. You're still a little pale and I doubt that if you ate anything you would be able to keep it down," said Obi-Wan.

    *I am a little tired. Plus, it gives me more time to dream about Padmé.* thought Anakin.

    //You really should work on your shields, Padawan.// Obi-Wan "told" Anakin.

    "Why do always mess with me when I'm sick when you know very well that I can't mess back?" asked Anakin.

    "Because that's the only time I can ever argue with you and win. Now, go to sleep," Obi-Wan sent a sleep suggestion to Anakin and he fell asleep right away.

    Those last two lines in this fic belong to anakin_girl. Sorry if I took them from you.
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    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002

    The next day, like Qui-Gon told Obi-Wan, Anakin was a lot better. He was still coughing a little but nothing a little medicine wouldn't help.

    "Master, you weren't up all night last night were you?" Anakin asked suspiciously.
    "Yes. I was taking care of you all night. Why do you ask?" said Obi-Wan.

    "Well, I heard voices and it sounded like you were talking to? oh never mind," Anakin told his master.

    "Like I was talking to who, Anakin," asked Obi-Wan.

    "Um?well, it sounded like you were talking to?Master Qui-Gon," he whispered.

    "I was, Ani," confessed Obi-Wan. Anakin's head shot up, his eyes almost as big as a Cd.

    "WHAT?!? THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE! Isn't it?" exclaimed Anakin.

    "No, it's not, Ani. I was talking to Qui-Gon," Obi-Wan said smoothly.
    "But..he..and you..when..oy," he stuttered. He flopped down into a chair and Obi-Wan laughed.

    "Oh, Ani, I've got a surprise for you. I'll be right back," said Obi-Wan.

    "What kind of surprise?" asked Anakin.

    "You'll see. Now, shut your eyes and don't open them until I tell you," Obi-Wan said impatiently.

    Anakin did as he was told and waited for his master to come back.

    "All right you can open them now," said Obi-Wan. When he did so, the look on his face was pure shock. The man he thought was dead for so many years was standing right in front of him.

    "Hello, Anakin," said Qui-Gon.

    "Is this some kind of joke, Master?" asked Anakin.

    "Now would I ever play a joke on you?" Obi-Wan asked in a hurt voice.

    "Yes," said Anakin.

    "This isn't a joke, Anakin. I'm really here and I'm not a ghost," he walked over to Anakin as he said that and touched his shoulder.

    "If I wasn't I couldn't do this," he said as he did so. As soon as Anakin's brain registered all of this, his eyes had tears in them and he threw himself into Qui-Gon's arms.

    "Well, you're certainly not the little boy I remember, Ani," was all he said.

    "I missed you," said Anakin through his tears.

    "I know you did, Ani," said Qui-Gon.

    Anakin heard Obi-Wan laughing in the background and he backed up from Qui-Gon.

    "What are you laughing at?"

    "You. I did the same thing last night!" Obi-Wan said, still laughing.

    "And?" asked Anakin.

    "And it's like you're a young me," said Obi-Wan once he stopped laughing.

    "He's right, Anakin. He used to do the same thing whenever I came back from a mission. You know, that reminds me of a story of when Obi-Wan was younger," Qui-Gon said with a smirk on his face.

    "Oh no. You're not going to start that," Obi-Wan demanded.

    "Well, you're just going to have to live through it," Qui-Gon said to his former apprentice.

    They all sat down in a chair and Obi-Wan asked "Did you come here to torture me or spend time with us?"

    "A bit of both," Qui-Gon said. Anakin laughed so hard that he started choking. Obi-Wan patted him on the back.

    "Take it easy, Ani. You're still sick," said Obi-Wan. Anakin stopped coughing and Qui-Gon started the story.

    "Well, it was about, oh say 28 years ago when I went on a mission by myself to Geonosis. Obi-Wan was begging for me not to leave. He was about 7 years old then. Just as I was walking out the door, I felt something heavy on my robe. I looked down only to find your master clinging to my robe crying.

    He said "Master, please don't go without me". Do you remember that, Obi-Wan?"
    "No because I never did that," he said and pointed his nose up at Qui-Gon. The young Knight turned bright red indicating that he did in fact remember that moment.

    "I was going to be gone for five days and he still wailed about me not being there. I heard that Master Windu had to use ear plugs because he was crying so loud," said Qui-Gon. Obi-Wan was now beet red. Anakin snickered and Obi-Wan shot him a glare.

    "Well, when I got back, Obi-Wan was so happy that he used the Force to run down to the hanger and slammed into me so hard that I fell down. I had to fight him to get up. He was so exhausted from staying up because he missed me that after
  9. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002

    Padmé woke up when it was hard for her to breath. Her breathing stopped completely and she reached for the calling button. She pressed it and almost immediately Bant ran in the room and saw Padmé having breathing difficulties. She put a breathing mask over Padmé's mouth and turned it on. She waited as it forced air into the woman's lungs and she started breathing again.
    "Padmé, are you all right?" asked Bant.

    "I'm fine. I don't know what happened, but I'll be ok," assured Padmé.

    "All right. If you need anything, just push the button," said Bant. Padmé smiled and the healer left the room. She just didn't notice the shadow creeping around the room in the shadows.

    *How long have I been asleep?* Anakin wondered. He heard footsteps coming toward him and then someone was shaking him.

    "Anakin, wake up," said the familiar voice of his master.

    Anakin turned over and asked, "What's wrong?".

    "I think we should go to the healers. Something's going to happen to Padmé," he said quickly. Anakin jumped up and put his boots on. He grabbed his cloak and the two Jedi ran out the door to the infirmary.

    When they got there, they sensed something besides Padmé in the room. They burst through the door and saw someone bending over Padmé with a syringe. Before it reached her skin, Anakin attacked the assassin. He tackled them to the ground and into the light. He looked at the person's face and saw that it was none other than the bounty hunter, Jango Fett.

    "Jango," Anakin hissed. Jango reached ever so slowly for his blaster and before Anakin knew it, he was hit in the head with the gun and out cold.

    Obi-Wan was checking on Padmé when he heard the window open and close again. He looked to Anakin and ran beside him. He saw a rather large spot of blood on Anakin's forehead and quickly went to the 'fresher to get a wet rag. When he came back, he knelt beside Anakin's unconscious form and gently cleaned his forehead. Bant came into the room and ran over to Obi-Wan.

    "What happened?" she asked worriedly.

    "Do you remember Jango Fett? Well, he just tried to kill Padmé and then hit Anakin in the head with his blaster," he replied. Anakin moaned and shifted. His eyes fluttered open and he asked,

    "What happened?".

    "Jango hit you with a blaster," replied Obi-Wan. Anakin lifted a hand up to his head and felt where he had been hit. His hand ran over a bump on his head and he winced at the pain. Obi-Wan helped him up off the floor and onto the couch.
    "Bant, can you get him an ice pack?" asked Obi-Wan.

    "Sure," said Bant.

    When she came back, she handed an ice pack to Obi-Wan and he gave it to Anakin. He put to his head and sighed.

    "I should have sensed that coming," he said sadly.

    "It came quick. I didn't even sense it," said Obi-Wan. Anakin smiled at his master and leaned his head back.

    "I guess I was just tired," he said and started coughing. Obi-Wan frowned worriedly and patted Anakin's back. When he stopped coughing, Bant asked,
    "Have you been taking your medicine that I gave you, Anakin?". He looked to the floor and said,

    "No." Obi-Wan asked him why he didn't and he just shrugged his shoulders.

    "Well, you might not take it at your quarters but you're taking it here," and she brought out another bottle of the green cough medicine and poured some into the cup that came with it. She handed it to Anakin and he made a disgusted look at it.

    "You better take that by yourself or Bant will pour it right down your throat. I know from experience," said Obi-Wan. Anakin pinched his nose and swallowed the medicine. He gave the cup to Bant and she threw it away.

    "You two should get back to your quarters. Padmé will be fine and if you don't go, I'll make sure you won't be able to come back in here again while she's here," she threatened.

    "I'm gone," said Anakin quickly and he ran out of the room to his quarters. Obi-Wan chuckled and turned to Bant.

  10. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002
    Bant had insisted that Obi-Wan get some sleep because he had been by Anakin's side all night. She said that if he didn't she would give him a shot and Force float him to his quarters. He really didn't want that so he did as he was told. He'd slept for about 7 hours until his comm. unit rang. He groaned and answered it.

    "Kenobi," he said.

    "Obi-Wan, Anakin's awake now if you want to see him. Sorry to wake you but he asked to see you," said Bant.

    "Thank you, Bant. Tell him I'll be there in 10 minutes," Obi-Wan replied.

    "Ok, Obi-Wan. See you in a while," she said. He smiled and turned of his comm. unit. Obi-Wan changed into his tunic and pants. He put his boots on and hurried to the Healer's Ward. When he got there, he walked calmly through the door and saw Anakin half sitting up, half lying down.

    He sat down in the chair beside the bed and asked, "Anakin, what happened in your bedroom?"

    "I'm not sure. I was getting out of bed and I felt dizzy. I tripped on the leg of the table at the end of my bed and fell. That's when I saw you come through my door and then everything went black," he said.

    "Well, it was probably because you're still sick and a little weak. I'll be right back. I'm going to go talk to Bant and there's someone who wants to see you," said Obi-Wan.

    Anakin reached out with the Force to see who was coming. Padmé.

    "Hi, Ani. How are you feeling?' she asked.

    "A little better. Though I think I should be asking that question. Are you ok?" he said.

    "I'm fine. I should be fully recovered tomorrow," Padmé told him.

    "That's good. I was worried about you," Anakin said.

    "You know, you should get some rest. You've had a long day and you need your strength, ok?" she said.

    "Yes, Mother," he said with a hint of amusement. Padmé playfully swatted him.

    "Hey! What was that for?" he exclaimed.

    "For talking back to a Senator. Especially one as special as me," she said.

    "Well, excuse me, Your Worship. I'll make sure I keep all my retorts for Obi-Wan," he said with a laugh. She laughed too.

    "Goodnight, Ani," she said.

    "Goodnight, Padmé," he replied.

    Obi-Wan walked in after Padmé walked out. He sat down in the chair he vacated earlier.

    "Bant told me why you're having all these dizzy spells. She said it was because of the virus you have, but you should be better by tomorrow. She said you could leave tonight too," said Obi-Wan.

    "That's good. I'm really getting tired of being in here," Anakin told his master. Obi-Wan helped him get out of bed and gave him his clothes. He walked to the 'fresher to change. When he came out, he started to walk over to his master but a little over half way there he stumbled and fell. Obi-Wan had to rush to catch him.

    "Not to fast, now. You're still weak and shouldn't move to quickly," said Obi-Wan. Anakin nodded and used his master as a support on the way to their quarters. Once they got there, Obi-Wan helped Anakin into bed.

    "Master?" Anakin called softly.

    "Yes, Anakin?" he said.

    "Thank you. I'm glad you're my master. I wouldn't have argued about you being my mentor," he said.

    "I'm glad too, Ani," answered Obi-Wan. He walked out of the room and went to his own. He picked up a holo of him and Anakin one Fall.

    "I'm glad too," he repeated softly and turned out the light and went to bed.

    "Well, I've lost Aurora so you can take her place. I name you my apprentice, Yvi Nosiop," said Darth Sidious. Yvi had long brown hair tied back in a ponytail. She had a blood red lightsabre like all the sith do. She was tall and, like Aurora, had an attitude. She didn't know Anakin but he needed to be dead. The virus Aurora injected in him obviously didn't work.

    "Master, what do I have to do to kill Anakin?" Yvi asked.

    "Patience, Yvi. The answers will soon come to you. You will not make an attempt on his life until you've had the proper training," answered Sidious.

    "Yes, Master," she said. *I will kill you, Skywalker. Count on it.* she thought.
  11. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002

    When Anakin woke up, he remembered that Padmé was being released from the healers today. He jumped out of bed, got dressed, left his master a note, and ran out the door to the infirmary. He walked into Padmé?s room and saw she was awake.

    ?How are you feeling?? he asked.

    ?I feel great actually. I?m glad I?m leaving today, though I don?t know if I can get to my quarters. I?m still a little shaky on my legs,? Padmé told him.

    ?Do you want me to help you get there? I don?t mind. Besides, there?s something I need to talk to you about,? said Anakin.

    ?Thank you, Anakin. That?s very kind of you to offer, but what do you need to talk to me about?? Padmé asked.

    ?I?ll tell you when we get you back to your room,? he said.

    ?All right. They said I could leave when I wanted to. So do you want to go now?? Padmé told Anakin.

    ?If you?re up to it, I guess,? Anakin said.

    ?Of course I?m up to it, Anakin. I?ve been lying in bed almost everyday. I was ready to scream,? she said. She started to get out of the bed and when she climbed down, her legs couldn?t hold her. Anakin caught her just in time.

    They stared into each other?s faces until Padmé looked away and said, ?I guess I?m a little clumsy.?

    ?No you?re not. I think you?re beautiful,? said Anakin, not knowing he?d just said that. Padmé just stared at him and the walked to the ?fresher, putting her hand against the wall for support, to change her clothes. She came out fully dressed and Anakin put an arm around her shoulder and took her hand with his. Together they walked out of the Healers and back to Padmé?s quarters. Once they got there, Anakin helped Padmé sit down and sat next to her.

    ?Padmé, I know this may come to you as a shock but?I..I love you. I have ever since you walked into Watto?s shop. Everyday I thought of you. I even dreamed about you. You may not love me but I just had to tell you,? said Anakin.

    ?Anakin, I don?t know what to say, but I can tell you this. I love you too,? said Padmé. Anakin stared at her for a moment. He took her hands in his and brought them up to his lips. When he lowered them, they both got closer, and closer, and closer until their lips met. It was a soft passionate kiss. They deepened it until they came up gasping for air.

    ?Padm?e, the day that I?m knighted, I would like you to be there to see it and there will be a message on your comm. unit asking a very important question. I can?t tell you what it is right now, but you?ll find out very soon,? Anakin told her.

    They kissed one more time and Anakin put his fingers under Padmé?s chin and said, ?I love you, Angel.? With that, he left the room and Padmé went to sleep. Dreaming about Anakin.
  12. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002

    When Padmé woke up, she remembered last night perfectly. She touched her lips where Anakin kissed her. She smiled, jumped slightly, and giggled. Padmé just remembered who and where she was and straightened herself up.

    She heard her comm. link beep and said "Padmé." She saw the worried face of Sabé and listened to what her handmaiden had to say.

    "Oh, Padmé! They're attacking Naboo! Our defenses and the gungans are here and I know we've been through this before but?you were always here with me. I'm scared. I 'm coming to Coruscant and there isn't anything you can do to change my mind."

    Padmé just said, "Well, I think it's good that you're coming here. Obi-Wan's getting lonely and has no one to talk to besides Anakin of course." She saw Sabé's face brighten and a wide grin spread over her face.

    "I'll be there within 4 hours," said Sabé. "Ok, Sabé. See you then. Be safe," said Padmé.

    "I will," said the handmaiden and then her screen went blank. She shut it off and got ready for the day. When she was done, she went to Anakin's and Obi-Wan's quarters. There was a note taped to the door and she read it.

    "Padmé meet us down in the cafeteria. We're waiting for you.

    From, LOVE,

    Anakin Skywalker"

    She tucked the note into her pocket and hurried to the cafeteria. It wasn't hard for her to find it because there were signs pointing toward it. She followed them and found Anakin and Obi-Wan waiting for her like they said they were.

    She sat down beside Anakin and said "Good morning, Anakin, Obi-Wan."

    "Good morning," they said.

    "So, are you ready to eat?" asked Anakin.

    "More than ever," she said and it was true. She hadn't had a real meal since they left Naboo. Whenever they went to have dinner, she just picked at her food.

    "What do want?" Anakin asked her.

    "Whatever you're getting," she told him. She saw a little initiate standing by the table. Anakin had a piece of paper next to him.

    "What are you getting, Master?" he asked.

    "I guess we're all getting the same thing," said Obi-Wan. Anakin wrote something on the paper and wrote a 3 next to it. He gave it to the initiate and said, "Thank you, Teki."

    "You'we welcome, Anakin," she said in a tiny, not-so-perfect-english voice. She ran off to somewhere and was nowhere in sight.

    "Who was that," Padmé asked.

    "An initiate. Her name is Teki. She was having a hard time adjusting to the temple so I helped her out and we've been friends ever since," said Anakin.

    "She's so cute. She seems to like you a lot," Padmé told him.

    "She does. She comes to our quarters everyday and talks to Anakin about her day and if wasn't going well, he helps her out," said Obi-Wan.

    "Well, that's good. I'm glad you're connected with a child. It's not easy to do that. You must have a special talent with them," she said.

    "Maybe. Here comes the food," said Anakin. Two initiates were pushing a rather heavy cart towards they're table. One of them was Teki. The other was a little girl.

    "Hey, Maynie," Anakin greeted.

    "Hi, Anakin, " she answered back. Her english was exactly the same as Teki's.

    "Oh, hey this is Padmé. I think she'd like to spend some time with you two," said Anakin. The two 4 year olds smiled but looked a little uneasy. He bent down and waved them over so Padmé couldn't here anything.

    "She's really nice, ok? We've been friends since I was 9 years old. She won't do anything to hurt you, ok? The only thing she'd do is protect you from danger and play and talk with you. She's just like me except more fun," he assured them. They smiled and nodded their heads.

    "Now, why don't you two go back to what you were doing and I'll send for you later, ok?" he told them. They nodded their heads again and hugged Anakin. He hugged them back.

    "Now go on," he said in a sweet voice. They ran off to where they were playing earlier.

    "What did you tell them?" Padmé asked.

    "Nothing," said Anakin.

    "Uh h
  13. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002
    Iin the latest post the underlined characters are mine, including Yvi Nosiop.

    Maynie buried her face against Padmé's chest and sobbed. Padmé tried to comfort her until she, herself, screamed, "ANAKIN!!!"

    Obi-Wan dashed to the shanh and activated his lightsabre. It left Anakin's unconscious body and leaped towards Obi-Wan. He gathered the Force all around him and slashed through the mighty body and it fell to the ground, dead in a big heap.

    Obi-Wan ran towards Anakin and fell to his knees next to him. He examined the gashes on his chest and closed his eyes, trying to prevent tears from falling. It obviously wasn't enough as he cried silently. He checked Anakin's pulse. He was still alive. That put some hope into him. He gathered the Force around him and hovered his hands over Anakin's body. He poured some of his strength into Anakin. If he wanted to put him into a healing trance, Anakin would have to be conscious enough so that he wouldn't?die. Obi-Wan brought him back to consciousness and Anakin's face contorted in pain. He started gasping and then cried out not loudly but not softly. "Shh, it's ok, Anakin," Obi-Wan told the hurt padawan.

    "It's hurts," Anakin said in a pained voice.

    "I know it does, Ani. I'm going to put you into a healing trance, ok?" Obi-Wan said. Anakin nodded his head but his face contorted again. Sabé came up behind them and kneeled beside Obi-Wan. She saw him put Anakin into a healing trance and put a hand on his back.

    "Is he ok, Obi-Wan?" she asked.

    "I don't know, Sabé. He's in a lot of pain right now," he stated. His eyes teared up again and he let the teardrops fall. He felt Sabé move her hand around his back.

    "Come on, Obi-Wan. He should go to the healers. If it helps, since I'm a healer, I can look him over before we take him," she told him.

    "Thank you," was all he said. She smiled at him and moved closer to Anakin.
    She checked him and said, "We have to get him to the healers, quickly." Obi-Wan suddenly remembered Padmé, Teki, and Maynie. He picked Anakin up and looked towards them. Teki had run up the hill and was in Padmé's arms too.

    "Padmé, I need you to stay with Teki and Maynie in the waiting room at the healers. I need to take Anakin there. Can you do that for me?" Obi-Wan said.

    "Sure. If you need anything, just let me know," she said. Obi-Wan smiled his thanks and ran to the healers ward. When he got there, he told Bant what happened and she checked him in. Obi-Wan put him on a bed and Bant told him that he would have to wait in the waiting room. He obeyed and sat down beside Padmé. He rested his elbows on his knees and put his face in his hands.

    "Why does this always happen to him?" he asked. He lifted his face from his hands and stared at the ground.

    Padmé put her hand on his shoulder and said, "He'll be fine. I know Anakin. He's a fighter. He showed me that when I first met him." She pulled him into an embrace and was there for him. To tell him that everything would be all right. To assure him that Anakin would be ok.

    After Bant took some x-rays, she cleaned Anakin's wound and put bacta gel on them. She wrapped some bandages around Anakin's chest and used a syringe to insert a liquid painkiller into his body. When she was done, she went to tell Obi-Wan that Anakin would be fine. She walked through the door and Obi-Wan was almost on top of her asking if he was ok.

    "Obi-Wan, calm down. He's fine. He just needs to take these and stay- in-bed," she told him firmly. She handed him a bottle of painkillers.

    "He will. I promise," Obi-Wan said.

    "He can go home when he wakes up but he'll have some trouble walking. He tore a ligament in his right ankle and should stay off of it for a few days. Maybe Padmé and Sabé should stay with you two for a while. At least until he's better," Bant said.

    "Of course we'll stay with him. He needs to
  14. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002

    Anakin shifted uncomfortably in his bed. He woke up when he turned in his sleep and hurt his ankle. He turned again and hurt his ankle?again. Anakin clenched his eyes and fisted his hands so he wouldn't cry out and wake Obi-Wan up. Padmé and Sabé were sharing a temporary apartment.

    Bant told him stay off of his ankle so she gave him some crutches. He only used them to walk to the bathroom or into the living room. Even though it caused him pain, he accepted it. If he was going to get through this, he would have to be strong and overcome it. His ankle started to hurt again so he got up and took 1 painkiller. After he swallowed it, he went back to bed. He fell asleep this time because the pill made him drowsy. What was strange to him was that he didn't have nightmares anymore. He accepted that what happened to his mother wasn't Obi-Wan's fault and it wasn't his and they stopped. Obi-Wan was glad to here this because it was causing him a lot of stress. That stress wasn't there anymore and Anakin was glad of that. Anakin - Nightmares= No Stress.

    In the morning, Anakin woke up to the sound of voices. He carefully pulled on his tunic and pants and put on his slippers. He grabbed his crutches and walked out of his bedroom. When he got out there, he saw Padmé, Sabé, and Obi-Wan talking. They all looked at him as he came out of his bedroom and sat down on the couch. He leaned his crutches up against the wall.

    "How's your ankle, Anakin?" Obi-Wan asked.

    "It still hurts but I'll live. I've gone through worse," he replied.

    "Are you sure you're all right?" Obi-Wan seemed a little overprotective sometimes.

    "I'm fine, Master. Don't worry so much," Anakin told him.

    "I'm your master, I'm supposed to worry," Obi-Wan said. Anakin rolled his eyes and leaned back onto the couch. He closed his eyes and sighed.

    "So, how long until your ankle is healed?" Padmé asked.

    "Bant said about six weeks," said Anakin with a scowl. Sabé tried to suppress a giggle and it was very visible that she was trying hard.

    "Ah, go ahead. Laugh. I know you want to. It's written all over your faces, see?" and then Anakin lifted his hand and "spelled" out on Padmé's face, saying it aloud, "I WANT TO LAUGH." and with that, Padmé and Sabé burst into laughter. Anakin looked at them and stuck his tongue out. He suddenly had a thought and an evil grin spread across his face. He twitched his fingers and then Padmé and Sabé floated into the air, but Padmé wasn't fooled. She knew exactly who was levitating them.

    "ANAKIN! Put us down now!" she screamed. Anakin was laughing and it was very contagious as Obi-Wan started laughing too.

    "THIS IS NOT FUNNY!" Sabé shouted.

    "Yes, it is!" Anakin said between laughs. He looked to Obi-Wan with a look that said 'Should I put them down?'. Obi-Wan nodded and Anakin lowered them back to the ground. Padmé walked over to Anakin with a mad look on her face and punched him in the ribs. Sabé did the same to Obi-Wan and knocked the wind out of him just as Padmé did to Anakin. They groaned and then Sabé grabbed Obi-Wan's hands and Padmé grabbed Anakin's in a game of "MERCY". The two ladies turned their hands upside-down and bent the men's hands backwards.

    Obi-Wan yelled, "ALL RIGHT! ALL RIGHT! MERCY!" Sabé let go and smiled at her defeat. Obi-Wan rubbed his wrists, but Anakin put up a fight, but Padmé was stronger than him when he couldn't even breathe!

    "MERCY!" Anakin screamed and Padmé copied exactly what Sabé did and the two ladies walked over to each other and slapped their hands together and gripped the other's hand, laughing while doing all this.

    "I guess this teaches you men not to mess with us," said Sabé. Padmé laughed and sat down.

    "Well, I'm going to bed. I suggest you two do the same. We have to get up early tomorrow to go to Naboo. i]Or do we have to tuck you in?[/i]" Padmé said in a baby voice with her lower lip puckered out. Anakin growled at them. The two exchanged mock horrified
  15. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002

    After Anakin's ankle was healed, he started doing more than just laying around. They were on Naboo protecting the Senator again. Even though they were protecting her, they still had some fun. They went swimming at the lake retreat, had picnics in the Shaak fields, and went to see the waterfalls.

    Anakin still needed some help walking but other than that everything was fine. He was running now without a lot of trouble but a little pain. Obi-Wan was being great with helping him. He was helping get around but he didn't need much of it. His ankle would be fully healed in about 2 days.

    It was nighttime now and Anakin was having a nightmare.

    "Anakin, why? Why did you leave me? Come back! Don't do this please! I beg of you! Don't do this!" said a voice very much like Padmé's. Anakin was killing everyone in his path and before he knew it, everyone was dead. He saw his mother and ran to her but she kept walking backwards as if to get away from him. He stumbled and fell into oblivion. He seemed to be falling forever. Then he saw Qui-Gon getting killed on Naboo again. Everything bad that had happened to him replayed over and over again. He saw his mother dying. "NOOOOOOOOO!!".

    "Anakin, wake up. It's just a dream. Wake up," Obi-Wan said. Anakin screamed and started crying. He threw himself into Obi-Wan's arms.

    "It's okay, Anakin. I'm here. You're alright. Do you want to tell me what happened?" he said. Anakin shook his head.

    "You'll feel better if you do," Obi-Wan told him.

    "All of my memories replayed in my mind and then I heard Padmé scream," he said and then sobbed harder. Obi-Wan held him for a bit and then said, "Anakin, everything will be okay," He pulled back and brushed away the tears that Anakin was shedding. He put a hand to Anakin's forehead and then said, "Go to sleep." Anakin closed his eyes and slumped forward towards Obi-Wan from the strong Force sleep suggestion. Obi-Wan caught him and pushed him back to the pillows. He pulled the covers up over Anakin's shoulders and left the room.

    *So much for this being over.* Obi-Wan thought.
  16. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002

    Obi-Wan was worried about Anakin. His nightmares didn't occur this often. He went to check on Anakin in the morning and saw him sleeping normal. He sat down on the bed and smiled slightly as he mussed Anakin's hair. Suddenly, Qui-Gon appeared in the doorway.

    "Is he better?" he asked.

    "Yes. Except for the nightmares," Obi-Wan answered. He looked back to Anakin, sadness dancing in his eyes. Qui-Gon walked over and put a hand on his shoulder. Obi-Wan's head drooped and Qui-Gon picked him up and put him in his bed. Sorry, Obi-Wan. You need the rest though. he thought. He covered him up and kissed his forehead. Then disappeared into thin air.

    When Obi-Wan woke up, he realized that Qui-Gon used a Force sleep suggestion on him.

    "Darn you, Qui-Gon," he said, but not in a mean way. He could never, not to mention would never, insult Qui-Gon. He cared for him too much, but when he did this sort of thing, Obi-Wan almost went crazy. He sometimes had to do that to Anakin.

    //MASTER, HELP!! // he heard in his head. He threw back the covers and ran into Anakin's room. What he saw was terrifying. Someone was bending over Anakin, choking him into almost unconsciousness, and trying to insert a syringe into his shoulder at the same time.

    Obi-Wan leaped into the air and kicking the person to the ground. Why would anyone make an attempt to kill someone in broad daylight? he wondered.

    "Who are you?" he asked.

    "Whoever I am," she said, and then he felt something hard on the back of his head and fell into unconsciousness.

    Obi-Wan awoke to find himself in the healer's ward. He saw Sabé next to him and asked, "Where's Anakin? Is he alright? What happened?"

    "Obi-Wan calm down. First of all, Anakin's fine. Second, he's at your quarters. Third, you were hit in the head with what we think was the hilt of a lightsabre," Sabé said, answering each of his questions. He smirked and laid his head back on the pillows.

    "Do you want to go back to your quarters?" Sabé asked him gently.

    "Yes. I want to check on Anakin. To make sure everything's okay," he said. Sabé smiled and leaned in to kiss him. When their lips met, they stayed liked that for a while, then pulled back. They both smiled and Sabé helped Obi-Wan out of bed. She walked with him to his quarters and then kissed him one more time, then left.

    Obi-Wan walked in to find Anakin on the couch looking very worried. Anakin looked up with wide eyes and rushed over to grasp his master in a tight embrace. Obi-Wan patted his back. He didn't let go as he started crying.

    "Ani? What's the matter?" Obi-Wan asked.

    "I thought you were hurt," Anakin said.

    "No. I wasn't hurt. I'm fine and you are too, ok?" Obi-Wan sadi. Anakin nodded and pulled away from his master. He wiped away his tears and sighed.

    "What happened anyway?" Anakin asked.

    "Someone tried to kill you, Anakin. Don't you remember?" Obi-Wan asked. Anakin shook his head.

    "They hit me in the head and that's all I remember," he said.

    "Well, what's happened has happened. We have to catch this person though," Obi-Wan told Anakin.

    "It was a sith," Ankain whispered.

    "What?" Obi-Wan asked.

    "A sith. I think she was a sith," Anakin answered.

    "She? You saw the person's face," Obi-Wan stated more than questioned.

    "Yes. I saw her lightsabre. Master, I don't know why but?I'm scared," Anakin said.

  17. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002
    Why won't anybody read this?
  18. aninonymous

    aninonymous Jedi Youngling star 3

    Aug 27, 2000
    Hey, don´t cry. :D
    I just read your story, and I liked it.
    It´s good that your Obi-Wan isn´t so critical of Anakin.
    Maybe there wouldn´t have been a Vader, if Obi hadn´t been nagging all the time.

    The End?

    What about the Sith?

  19. GenOochy

    GenOochy Jedi Grand Master star 5

    Jan 8, 2003
    *Hugs DP2002*

    Don't cry...

    I haven't read it all but I will...

    Please don't cry. ;)
  20. darla101

    darla101 Jedi Master star 3

    Feb 11, 2003
    Dont cry!

    Its a great fic!

    I've enjoyed it...
  21. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002
    Thank you so much guys! I feel a lot better now! Oh, by the way, there will be a sequel to this and it will pick up immediately where it left off, k?
  22. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Force Ghost star 6

    Jun 4, 2002
    You have a great start but perhaps you could get some help posting?

    Anakin joined them in the living room and sat down. He knew things would never be the same. He missed his mother and now he thought that would effect his training. "Master, do you think this will do something to my training?" Anakin asked.

    "I'm not sure, Anakin. It might or it might not. I don't know." he replied in a calm voice.

    "I just wanna go home now,"

    This format would make it easier to read...

    Seperate the conversations.

    Otherwise, great job! Keep it up!
  23. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 6, 2002
    Ya, I know. In the next few posts after that one it's in the form of your example. If you go [link=]here[/link] then you can find out why I stopped there. Just read all of my messages to the repliers.
  24. Sara_Kenobi

    Sara_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 7

    Sep 21, 2000
    It's good to see this reposted, diamond_pony2002. I lost track of it before, as I do with alot of stories that I read, because I post so much in my own stories. 8-}

    But this is really good! :)

    Give yourself some time however before being concerned that no one is replying.

    The traffic in the new forums really isn't as busy in the old forum, and it takes time now to get replies as the categories are split, and some people only read certain kinds of stories. eg. ( OT, PT, JA)

    Just keep writing and the people will come in time. ;)
  25. Queengodess

    Queengodess Jedi Master star 4

    Jul 18, 2000
    Hey, I liked the story too! Of course, I LOVE A/O stories... ;) But this was very nice. Poor's nice to see Obi-Wan being there for him, just for once...

    Looking forward to the sequel.
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