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Saga Episode 1: The Clone Wars

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Jedi Marso, May 5, 2008.

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  1. Jedi Marso

    Jedi Marso Jedi Youngling

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    Finally finished that Episode 1 fanfic, aptly titled: "The Clone Wars". It came in at just over 100,000 words, and it can be found on post number 7 of this page:http://www.wordforge.net/showthread.php?t=58916

    The file was too big to upload as a single pdf; it's broken down into three files, each with 4 chapters.

    Just as a quick review, here's what my version of episode 1 is lacking:

    Gungans
    Midichlorians
    Prophecies
    Virgin births

    Here's are elements I've changed/added:

    The Clone Wars start 10 years earlier than the canon version
    Obi-Wan is a thirty-something Jedi Knight
    Anakin is 16 years old; his experience as a slave is much worse.
    Padme has been revamped- new name, new character.
    Antarian Rangers!!
    A more "McQuarrie" milieu. Think some of his old pre-production art.
    Jedi Order is based off Coruscant and not so involved in politics.
    Jedi padawans are recruited when older and more integrated into galactic society as knights- the order is much less 'cloistered.' No 'baby-theft' in this version!
    Darth Maul is fleshed out- he's a three-episode villain.

    For anyone who's interested, enjoy!!
     
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