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Episode I - Fantasy Cut: New Motivation for the Trade Federation

Discussion in 'Prequel Trilogy' started by LemmingLord, Dec 12, 2007.

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  1. DARTHCLANDESTINE

    DARTHCLANDESTINE Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Not obvious to me. That's why this thread starts with the presupposition that this can be done better.

    Having extra dialogue would slow down the story, I'm afraid.[face_peace] GL old motto "faster, more intense" is the order of the way he works.
     
  2. Strilo

    Strilo Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Yes the Padmé's Ruminations scene from ROTS is proof of that...
     
  3. LemmingLord

    LemmingLord Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Apr 28, 2005
    That's true...

    What if we make this simple change in the dialog...

    I liked what I heard about something revealed in one of the books... When the viceroy is speaking with Darth Sideous and shows hesitation, Sideous can say something along the lines of "I will make it legal, Viceroy. I have given you a taste of what I can offer you; don't begin to doubt me now."

    Something like that? Just rearticulate the language a little to show that Darth Sideous killed off the viceroy's rivals to bring him to power... This is a work in progress of course... Anyone else have some dialog that might do the idea better service?
     
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