Saga EPISODE ONE: THE WAY IT WAS MEANT TO BE

I WROTE UP A QUICK OVERVIEW OF EPPY ONE WITH

LESS POILITICAL CRAP, A BETTER CHARACTER BASE

ITS VERY QUICK AND INTERESTING PLEASE READ..




EPISODE 1: THE REAL PREQUELS

THE UNIVERSE HAS STEADILY SUCCUM TO THE LIKES OF

OUTLAWS AND VILLANS, WHILE THE LIMITED AMMOUNT OF

JEDI STRUGGLE TO RETAIN PEACE. QUI GON JINN AND HIS

YOUND APPRENTICE OBI WAN KENOBI ARE THRUST INTO AN

EPIC BATTLE__________, ALONG THE WAY THEY FIND MUCH

NEEDED HELP FROM A NOTORIOUS SMUGGLER ANAKIN

SKYWALKER. YOUNG SKYWALKER SHOWS MUCH PROMISE IN THE

KNOWLEDGE OF THE FORCE AND IS RECRUITED BY QUI GON

TO ACCOMPANY THEM ON A PEACE MISSION, MUCH TO THE

DESTAIN OF OBI WAN. IN A RESCUE ATTEMPT, SKYWALKER

SAVES THE QUEEN OF NABOO (A PLANET RIDDLED WITH WAR,

ITS POWER SUPPLY IS IN MUCH NEED FOR THE EMPIRE) FROM

THE CLUTCHES OF A NOW BLOSSOMING GALACTIC EMPIRE AND SAFELY ESCORTS HER AWAY

FROM HARM. WHILE QUI GON AND OBI WAN KENOBI ARE

DUELING A STRANGE SITH WARRIOR DARTH MAUL, SKYWALKER

PILOTS A STAR CRAFT AWAY FROM THE PLANET, ESSENTIALLY

LEAVING THE TWO JEDI BEHIND. AFTER MUCH DISCUSSION

PADME CONVINCES ANAKIN TO RETURN AND MAKE SURE THE

JEDI REMAIN SAFE. UPON RETURN HE FINDS BOTH QUI GON

AND OBI WAN BADLY INJURED AND IN CUSTODY TO THE SITH.

IN AN AMAZING DISPLAY OF FORCE ANAKIN SIGNALS A

LIGHTSABER, IGNITING IT OBVIOUSLY LOOKING FOR A FIGHT.

THIS CONFUSES THE SITH WARRIOR AS SKYWALKER LOOKS LIKE

NO JEDI, NOR TO BE ONE WITH THE FORCE.......


MORE EPPY ONE COMING

 

DURING THIS BATTLE BETWEEN SKYWALKER AND THE SITH A

RATHER MILD CONVERSATION BEGINS, AS THE SITH SEEMS

RATHER IMPRESSED WITH THE VIRGIN ABILITY OF THIS MAN.

SIMIALR TO THE CONVERSATION IN ESB, MAUL TRIES TO

CONVINCE ANAKIN THAT TOGETHER THEY CAN DESTROY HIS

MASTER AND TAKE CONTROL OF A NOW FLEETING GALAXY.

ALTHOUGH STRIKINGLY INTERESTING TO SKYWALKER HE DOES

NOT BITE ON THIS IDEA, LITERALLY SENSING THE PAIN OF

QUI GON INJURED AND DYING. IN A BURST OF OUTRAGE

SKYWALKER STARTS TO OVERWHELM THE SITH, WITH HIS

PASSION AND ANGER. MAUL USES A DISTRACTION AND

REATREATS OUT OF SIGHT AND SEEMINGLY DISSAPEARS.

NOW THAT THE FIGHT HAS ENDED, QUI GON STRUGGLES FOR

HIS LIFE, WHILE INSTRUCTING IN HIS LAST BREATHS

WHAT HE FELT SKYWALKERS PLACE IN THE UNIVERSE SHOULD

BE, AS A JEDI. JIN PASSES AWAY WHILE CLUTCHING

ANAKINS ARM, PAYING NO MIND TO AN INJURED OBI WAN JUST

FEET AWAY. ALTHOUGH OBI WAN DISAGREES WITH HIS

MASTERS TAKE ON THE SITUATION, HE CARRIES OUT AND

BRINGS ANAKIN BEFORE THE JEDI COUNCIL. FEELING

SKYWALKERS PAIN AND ANGER HE IS DENIED TRAINING.

SENATOR PALPATINE IS INTRODUCED TO SKYWALKERS THROUGH

DARTH MAULS RETELLING OF THE SITUATION. HE ORDERS

SKYWALKER TO PROTECT THE PRINCESS IN A HIDDEN LOCATION

FOR THE TIME BEING.....


OBI WAN HAS BEEN ORDERED BY THE COUNCIL TO SEEK OUT

AND DISCOVER THE MYSTERY OF THIS STRANGE SITH

WARRIOR. MEANWHILE ANAKIN HAS TAKEN THE QUEEN TO A

STRANGE PLANET HE WAS DRAWN TOO BECAUSE OF IT'S

INDEPENDENCE FROM THE REPUBLIC, TATOOINE.

THERE THEY FIND SHELTER IN MOS EISLEY AND CONTINUE

DEVELOPING THEIR RELATIONSHIP. ONE NIGHT ANAKINS

REOCCURING NIGHTMARES STARTLE HIM AND HE SETS OUT

LATE THE NEXT EVENING, GOING NO PLACE INPARTICULAR.

AFTER TRAVELING FOR HALF OF THE NIGHT HE SETTLES IN A

CAVERN UNKNOWING OF WHY.


LAST CHAPTER ON THE WAY

 

ANAKIN HAS WAITED NEARLY THE REST OF THE NIGHT IN

CAVERN, CONTEMPLATING THESE STRANGE FEELINGS AND

NIGHTMARES. DUE TO HIS LACK OF SLEEP SKYWALKER FINDS

COMFORT ON A ROCK WALL AND TRIES TO CAPTURE A FEW

MINUTES OF SHUT EYE. AWOKEN BY A SHARP SOUND AND A

BRIGHT RED LIGHT, ANAKIN AWAKENS TO A LIGHTSABER

INCHES FROM PIERCING THE SKIN ON HIS NECK. HE LOOKS

UP TO SEE DARTH MAUL STANDING OVER HIM, GRINNING

PLEASURABLY. MAUL THE UNEXPECTADLY PUTS AWAY HIS

AND STEPS TO THE SIDE, MAKING WAY FOR A DARK FIGURE

WHO SLOWLY APPROACHES, KANE IN HAND. THIS CLOAKED

FIGURE BEGINS DISCUSSING WITH ANAKIN THE DARK SIDE

AND DENOUNCES THE ANCIENT JEDI RELIGION AS ALL BUT

EXTINCT. THIS CONVERSATION IS TO SWAY ANAKIN TO THE

DARK SIDE, BUT NOT IMMEDIATELY. THE FIGURE INSTRUCTS

SKYWALKER TO CONTINUE HIS DUTIES AND IN TIME THE

TRUTH SHALL BE EXPOSED. THE SITH LORD THEN REACHES

INTO HIS SLEEVE AND HANDS ANAKIN A METAL FIGURE, A

LIGHTSABER AND PROMOTES SKYWALKERS USE AND KNOWLEDGE

OF THAT WEAPON, SAYING IT IS VITAL TO THE SITH'S

CONTINUED EXISTANCE. ANAKIN ACCEPTS THE SABER WITHOUT

HESITATION AND THE TWO FIGURES DISSAPEAR OUT OF THE

CAVE. ANAKIN THEN RUNS TO CATCH A VIEW FROM OUTSIDE

THE CAVE, AND WATCHES AS THE STRANGE SHIP TAKES

OFF INTO THE DUSK ATMOSPHERE. SKYWALKER IGNITES HIS

NEW SABER AS THE CAMERA ZOOMS OUT FROM HIM STANDING,

STARING AT THIS REMARKABLE BLUE WEAPON THAT IS HIS.

ROLL TITLES.





i'll do episode 2 sometime

i dunno when

havent thought about it

but basically

-anakin is watching over padme
-obi wan is out searching for the sith
-the empire continues to grow
-and darth maul lives until episode 2

which creates a continuous bad guy, like vader,
that we can be scared of in a way

 

i'm going to write these books..

show the prequels the way they were ment to, entertaining, exhilirating..

no little kids stuff..the prequels are serious business!!!

 

Hmm, that woulda been a decent movie. And you left out Jar Jar Binks, so you get instant Kudos from me.

 

thanks man. I just wanted to add elements to the movie i thought were really missing.

 

i will do episode 2 tonight...

 

Very intresting read...I could not help but see the locked topic on the board and remember the same mistake I made about four months ago!! LOL!!

Your take is very intresting. It's more like an outline of a larger story. I agree with the fact that you should be able to create the prequels in your own vision. I mean that's what fan fiction is all about! But I disagree with this comment.

"no little kids stuff..the prequels are serious business!!! "

I grew up with the original trilogy and saw it in the theaters. (Yes I'm that old...OUCH!!!) I think that the prequels are right up there with the original trilogy!
It's the saga as George Lucas sees it. When I think about it all the films are Kids stories. I think that's why I love them so much. I can kick back and enjoy them and It's timeless...I'm a kid again.

Look forward to your take on episode 2.

Given any thought to 3.

You should try and write it before the movie comes out!!! It would be intresting to compare!!

 

Interesting. More commentary to come, but first a suggestion, especially if you're posting an episode two as well: don't do all caps. It's hard on the reader's eyes. Thanks